The Silence and the Shriek!

allizzwell thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 6 years ago
#1
I am a WOMAN!
I have been silent. Numb at all the trash thrown by the society. Silent at all the trash thrown by my family...My silence is termed weak...!

I froze at the piercing words thrown at me by my so called soul mate. I thought hard to recollect where have I gone wrong in my marriage. I even tried hard to wash off the invisible - spoken dirt off my mind and body. They refuse to get washed away, they need the strength and time to wither off.

My child has a voice. She speaks her mind. But today she could not help shrieking. The voice was loud enough to pierce my heart, my emotions but not that of the society...not that of the ones who let it happen...!

But my silence would b able to storm away the voice of the shriek...when v walk hand in hand ...together in every step. V will rise and shut and shun the noises...

One day it will. It has to.!

Babita.
Edited by allizzwell - 6 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

11

Views

1.7k

Users

9

Likes

69

Frequent Posters

divyadaya13 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 6 years ago
#2
Wow! Amazing words. Well said. In future those voices will be irrelevent.
Sabyata thumbnail
8th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail
Posted: 6 years ago
#3

Originally posted by: allizzwell

I am a WOMAN!

I have been silent. Numb at all the trash thrown by the society. Silent at all the trash thrown by my family...My silence is termed weak...!

I froze at the piercing words thrown at me by my so called soul mate. I thought hard to recollect where have I gone wrong in my marriage. I even tried hard to wash off the invisible - spoken dirt off my mind and body. They refuse to get washed away, they need the strength and time to wither off.

My child has a voice. She speaks her mind. But today she could not help shrieking. The voice was loud enough to pierce my heart, my emotions but not that of the society...not that of the ones who let it happen...!

But my silence would b able to storm away the voice of the shreik...when v walk hand in hand ...together in every step. V will rise and shut and shun the noises...

One day it will. It has to.!

Babita.



Beautifully pen down👏
ic_2000 thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 6 years ago
#4
Beautifully written. Today's episode is heart wrenching. The silence and shriek makes my heart bleed towards Babita and Mini. I hope Babita become Phoenix. Born from The ashes. More strong and confident. Kudos to team Patiala Babes.
Padmajaan thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Voice of India 2024 Participant Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 6 years ago
#5
So beautifully penned down. I also felt the tug today at my heart strings and I cried today for both babita and minnie but more for babita.
Beautifully shot beautifully directed the song in the BG also played its part most effectively. Very very artistically shot.

Amidst all this and the anguish I felt the logical part of my brain couldn't help thinking while Minnie was shrieking repeatedly in the court about why the judge didn't come out, how come he didn't get disturbed whereas he had got pissed off before when minnie was just arguing lol but today I swear I hated the logical part of my brain popping up and shut it down and got lost in the poetry of it all.

👏
abhi786 thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 6 years ago
#6

Originally posted by: allizzwell

I am a WOMAN!

I have been silent. Numb at all the trash thrown by the society. Silent at all the trash thrown by my family...My silence is termed weak...!

I froze at the piercing words thrown at me by my so called soul mate. I thought hard to recollect where have I gone wrong in my marriage. I even tried hard to wash off the invisible - spoken dirt off my mind and body. They refuse to get washed away, they need the strength and time to wither off.

My child has a voice. She speaks her mind. But today she could not help shrieking. The voice was loud enough to pierce my heart, my emotions but not that of the society...not that of the ones who let it happen...!

But my silence would b able to storm away the voice of the shreik...when v walk hand in hand ...together in every step. V will rise and shut and shun the noises...

One day it will. It has to.!

Babita.


Wonderfully pinned words on Babitha and Minnie 😭
Secret_Giggle thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 6 years ago
#7
Wow!! You have penned down Babita's feelings so beautifully. 👏👏
allizzwell thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 6 years ago
#8

Originally posted by: Padmajaan

So beautifully penned down. I also felt the tug today at my heart strings and I cried today for both babita and minnie but more for babita.

Beautifully shot beautifully directed the song in the BG also played its part most effectively. Very very artistically shot.

Amidst all this and the anguish I felt the logical part of my brain couldn't help thinking while Minnie was shrieking repeatedly in the court about why the judge didn't come out, how come he didn't get disturbed whereas he had got pissed off before when minnie was just arguing lol but today I swear I hated the logical part of my brain popping up and shut it down and got lost in the poetry of it all.

👏

Thanks Padma.
I too wished the judge could just come and jhanko the harshness of Ashok on listening to the shriek. Yes, logically too...it WAS loud enough for anyone to notice what was happening. But at that time...the pain in Babi's silence and Minnie's shriek shut my mind and I too got too numb logically 😳
rose1000 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 6 years ago
#9

Originally posted by: allizzwell

I am a WOMAN!

I have been silent. Numb at all the trash thrown by the society. Silent at all the trash thrown by my family...My silence is termed weak...!

I froze at the piercing words thrown at me by my so called soul mate. I thought hard to recollect where have I gone wrong in my marriage. I even tried hard to wash off the invisible - spoken dirt off my mind and body. They refuse to get washed away, they need the strength and time to wither off.

My child has a voice. She speaks her mind. But today she could not help shrieking. The voice was loud enough to pierce my heart, my emotions but not that of the society...not that of the ones who let it happen...!

But my silence would b able to storm away the voice of the shreik...when v walk hand in hand ...together in every step. V will rise and shut and shun the noises...

One day it will. It has to.!

Babita.


Wonderful words!!!

If I am not mistaken you are Lakshmi, right? I used to love your emoji wale posts in YUD forum. 😊
MJ_1009 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Achiever Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 6 years ago
#10
wonderful! greatly written!

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".