Rishbala ss uncontrollably fond... ~Part 5/Page 6/ DT 23/6/19

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Hello guys
In the last year i watched so many koreans drama and my first kdrama was uncontrollably fond. I love the show. This drama is fantastic , lovely . it brought tear to my eyes. Literally guys I cried and trust me I am not the one who cries so easily on dramas.
So it Rishbala story which is based on uncontrollably fond. So all credit goes to maker of the show.

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UNCONTROLLABLY FOND




PART 1

In an empty church, a young couple grips hands tightly, wearing solemn faces. The groom starts to recites his wedding vows and promises never to let his wife's hand go from this moment on.

Then he turns to face her, cupping her face tenderly in his hands.

Before he can seal the vow with a kiss, the doors of the church burst open, and gangsters pour inside.
A man said " hey traitor how could you think of snatching away the big boss's woman with no fear??"
The leader accuses the groom of stealing his woman.
the groom said "she is my woman from the start".
and then leader orders his thugs to kill him.


The ensuing fight puts the groom at a grave disadvantage, and he's soon bloody and battered despite doing his best to fight them off. It doesn't look good...

His bride's scream supplies the groom with renewed energyhe fights better and faster now, dodging attacks and delivering blows. A blow to the head doesn't even slow him down, and he fights on.

Then the boss takes out a gun and shoots him right in the heart.

The groom stands still in shock as he registers his wound. A tear falls from his eye.
He steps toward his bride, and bang!
He's shot again. But that doesn't faze him, and neither does the next gunshot. By the time he snatches the gun away from the gangster, everyone looks puzzled.
"I don't want to die.
This is not a Hollywood, you know.
Does it make a sense for someone to die from a gunshot in this Days and age"
the groom says matter-of-factly. And behind the cameras, the crew gapes: They're on a drama set, the groom is actor Rishbh kundra and this is the big climactic finale.


The director points out that his death was written in from the start,
but RK says he changed his mind:
"I can't die this way, director".
He requests a script change and walks off.

RK's team is at their wits' end, with the scriptwriter refusing to edit the ending. The finale airs tonight and they're in danger of missing the broadcast; rumors of the discord have hit the internet and RK is taking a netizen beating for his arrogance.

At hospital
A doctor taking to his intern about a case of patient then he saw a man standing in the corridor and said "Rishbh kundra".

In doctor's cabin Rk speaks solemnly to his doctor.
He said "i didn't get any sleep last night thinking about it.. but i just can't make sense of it."
The doctor asked "what do you mean?"
Rk said "that i contracted a disease that's hard to cure with current medical technology and
that i don't even have a year left to live.
You don't know how healthy i keep my body, right?
I can run 100 meters in 11 seconds.
I sleep well, eat well and i'm fine expect for some chronic pain that i feel sometime."

rk unable to wrap his head around the diagnosis he'd been given. How can he be so healthy and fit and be dying.

He asked to doctor "you didn't misdiagnose me because you got me mixed up with the character I'm playing who ends up dying, did you?"

Doctor replied "No, i don't."

Rk said "if that is not the case then may be you misdiagnosed me?? i heard that a lot of stupid doctors misdiagnose a lot of people."

Doctor said "shall i find another doctor for you. If you don't believe me?"
the doctor remains assured of his diagnosis.

RK asks with a touch of defiance, "What if I say I won't die? How can you know when I'll die? What if I refuse to die, then what?"

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As Rk sits in his car afterward, Rk agency president pleads with him to just diethe drama has filmed everything else, and if he would just agree to die, everything would wrap up smoothly.
President said "i'll be sure to only get you scripts with happy endings from now on so plz die without the fuss, just this once! "

His eyes fill with tears, not wanting to give in even to this fictional death.
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On to a rainy field at night time, where a woman sets up a camera while talking to a friend on the phone, who sobs loudly into her ear. She is madhubala and she's stunned silent when her friend wails, "RK died!"

And then her friend clarifies that he died in the drama's finale, and madhu relaxes.

Just then, madhu spots a truck pulling up in the rain and gets down low to the ground, her camera recording as several men do something with large metal barrels. Suddenly, her camera gets shoved aside as one of the men glares down at her threateningly. Whoops, caught.


Madhu ends up locked up in a corporate conference room, and bangs on the door loudly until a middle-aged executive joins her inside. She pegs him (and his company) as a routine offender of illegal wastewater dumping, a charge he refutes readily. He's identified her as a producer and returns her confiscated camera to herwith its memory wiped, of course.

She's not fussed, though, saying cheerfully that she has plenty of footage already, from the other nights his company dumped their waste. The man's composure flags, and he asks what she wants, ready to make a deal. Madhu is offended when he pushes a thick envelope of money at her, yelling that he dares to think he can cover the truth with money.

But the next thing you know, madhu is depositing the cash into an ATM (minus one bill, which she keeps for herself). She calls her loan shark, "Grim Reaper, to let him know of this payment. (She still owes roughly 27,000 dollars.)

That night, RK gets a call from his attorney about his request to track a certain woman down.
Attorney Asked "how much detail you would like to know about her?"
Rk replies that "I wants to know where she lives, what she does, whether she went to university, whether she's married And..." His face darkens a little as he adds, "And if she's married, what her husband does."

And yet, he doesn't want her knowing he was looking her up nor does he even intend to meet her.

Madhu walks home that night, and comes upon a donation bin, where she slips the last bill she'd kept. She looks up at a large screen mounted on the side of a building, her eyes wistful at the sight of RK's face in an advertisement.
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Morning finds Rishbh kundra in his huge, fancy mansion, where he's awoken by his extremely well-behaved dog. The dog turns up its nose at the bowl of dog food he pours out, and Rishbh tells him that "after I'm gone the you (dog) will probably go to my manager , who won't feed you fancy food or do everything i does."

Rk cooks a pot of noodle and takes a bite, then puts down his chopsticks and sighs that he got sick because he ate noodle all the time instead of rice.

Madhu tries to do chores and sweet-talk her landlady into not raising her rent, but the landlady refuses to budge. Madhu sighs that she has nowhere else to go.
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RK sits in his car outside a restaurant and watches (wistfully, perhaps) a table of customers and the women who waits on them. He heads inside with his face covered up by a huge hood and sunglasses and orders a hundred bowls of the restaurant's specialty, spicy beef soup.

She informs him coldly that she won't sell soup to him, which makes Rishbh insist louder and louder that he wants some. Finally he shoves aside the hood and takes off the glasses, continuing to insist as the other diners recognize him and start filming him on their phones.

An man jumps in to smooth things over, and woman barks at him to sprinkle salt after Rk leaves, like he's some kind of bad energy needing cleansing.
RK hands over a card to the Man asking him to approve his hundred bowls of soup, then pauses to ask a table of diners for just one spoonful.

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Madhu lays out on her rooftop platform, looking up at the sky and sighing over her nearly empty bank account, when she has to feed, clothe, and educate her younger brother.

Then she gets a snappish email from the production company where she works, telling her not to come in anymore: "We don't need trash like you at our company."

After RK leaves the restaurant, A man scolds woman for being so harsh to her very own son.
Man tells her that celebrities these days are worlds apart from entertainers of the past (considered vulgar professions), and that Rishbh makes much more money than he would as a prosecutor or judge (which is what she wanted for him). He argues that she can't just ignore or look down on Rishbh and if she keeps this up, her son may turn his back on her. Mom,





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Posted: 6 years ago
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Congrats for the new story,
Interesting update
Rk don't want to die even for reel also,
Rk was diagnosed with some disease there is no cure for it,
Madhu lost her job,
Rk searching for a girl,who is she,
continue soon



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Interseting story dear..
Loved it,
Eagerly waiting for the next part
Please update soon..
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Congrats for the new story dear...Interesting concept dear...Please don't kill rk😭 Waiting for ur next update dear...
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Congratulations for this story dear..
Nice start but I really don't want you to kill our Rk plz plz waiting for Rishbala to meet I think the girl he is mentioning about is Madhu..
Waiting for the next part ..
Update soon..
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Originally posted by: annukumari007

Interseting story dear..

Loved it,
Thank you so much dear 😊

Eagerly waiting for the next part
Please update soon..


Thank for reading
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Originally posted by: Sujitharajan

Congrats for the new story dear...Interesting concept dear...

Thank you dear 😊
Please don't kill rk 😭 Waiting for ur next update dear...


Thanks for reading
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Originally posted by: aishu007

Congratulations for this story dear..

Thank you dear 😊
Nice start but I really don't want you to kill our Rk plz plz waiting for Rishbala to meet I think the girl he is mentioning about is Madhu..

Hmm You will get to know in next part 😃

Waiting for the next part ..
Update soon..


Thank for reading
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Character Sketch

Rishabh kundra/ RK
He is superstar. He is son of Radha kundra and mohan Kapoor but his father does not know about him. He is suffering from incurable disease.

Madhubala malik / madhu
Daughter of Shamsher malik and padmani malik but her mother died from cancer. She has a little brother Rohan.

Sultan Kapoor
He is son of Mohan kapoor and Meera kapoor.
He is Stepbrother of Rk, and friend of madhu. He pretends to be poor in front of madhu. He has a little sister Ria Kapoor.

Deepali Chaudhary
she is daughter of Balraj Chaudhary. She love sultan Kapoor and his soon to be wife.

Mohan kapoor
he was senior prosecutor but now he is Assemblyman. His wife is meera kapoor.

Meera kapoor
wife of mohan kapoor and mother of sultan and Ria.

Radha kundra
Mother of Rishabh. She is owner of Mom's kitchen Restaurants. She loved Rishabh but angry with him because he does not fulfilled her dream.

Kulbhushan / kuku bhatia
Father bittu or anamika. When his children were small he got divorced and his ex wife married to another man. He love and care for radha but never confessed his feeling.
He is working with radha in her restaurant.



Shamsher malik
father of madhu and rohan. He love his children. He always worried about his daughter because of her helping nature.

Balraj Chaudhary
Father of deepali. he is Assemblyman. He has so much political power.

Bittu bhatia
son of kulbhushan (kuku) bhatia and brother of anamika. He is 2 year older from rk. He is manager of rk.

Trisha Sharma
Best friend of madhu. She help madhu in any way.

Rohan malik
he is little brother of madhu and son of shamsher and padmani. He is 8 year younger to madhu.

Ria Kapoor
Daughter of mohan and meera kapoor and sultan's sister. She's a big fan of Rk.

Anamika bhatia
Daughter of kulbhushan or sister of bittu bhatia. She is RK'S stylist.

Harshavardhan
he is president of RK'S entertainment agency.


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Uncontrollably Fond
PART 2

RK returns home and declares that today his another failure to eat his mom's handmade food , sitting with more noodle as he asks his dog painfully "should i just tell her the truth? that I'll die soon.. so she should give me some spicy beef soup if she doesn't want to regret it??"
Just then His manager bittu ji comes in to complain that he's dropped documentary projects that are extremely lucrative, and reminds him that his refusal to die in the drama is still a fresh blot on his image.

RK's voice sharpens as he reminds bittuji that he did die, as they wanted, and
he said, "From now on I won't do anything I don't want to do." and left from there
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Madhu bursts into a meeting at her production company job. Her boss mr. Sinha, the company CEO, barks at her that she's been fired, but madhu breezes right past that, telling them of a great scoop she's working on. She said "I found a great hot topic for us to cover".

But Her seniors interrupts, charging her with taking hush money while working on a past story that she had dropped. The CEO asks derisively, "Don't you even have a conscience?" and orders her out.

That knocks her down a bit, but madhu takes a moment and comes back as sunny as ever, reminding her CEO and other members that all the payoffs they've takeneven bigger sums for every bigger corruption scandals. They fidget uncomfortably, but cling to their righteous outrage as she pleads for one more chance but they don't give her chance.
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At restaurant madhu is drunk and babbling, not very repentant over taking bribes; rather, she feels unjustly punished when everyone else got off scot-free. She mutters about everybody in the world being bad, just then a stern-faced man come asked "what happened?? Who is bad??"
She said "sultan, it's unfair that i am the only one got fired". but sultan says "it's good that you got caught now, before becoming even more corrupted."

A waitress roma come ask sultan to drink but he declined the offer then she asked madhu what her dead parents would think to see her like this. Sultan tells madhu to reflect on her wrongs tonight and left from there.

Madhu gets dramatic and declares that she'll do just that, and then die. She's making such a ruckus that a nearby diner calls out for her to die later, because he's going to die over his dinner first.
Manager bittuji is at that table, trying to soothe ruffled feathers with the drunk Project Director, who's fuming over RK reneging on his contract.

At the mention of RK's name, madhu listens in with interest, while bittuji speaks up in defense of RK. He argues that they ponied up the contract breach fees, but the Project Director wails that it hardly compensatesnot after how hard they worked to shoot that documentary about RK.

Drunk PD has to be assisted out of the restaurant, and madhu approaches the group outside to ask, "Shall I try persuading him?
She knows which documentary they were working on and explains that she can convince Rishbh kundra to do the project.

They dismiss her confidence as mere bravado, but she makes a proposal: If she succeeds, they hire her. She swears to work honestly this time, without taking any bribes.

At a bit of a distance, sultan hears the exchange, not having left yet.

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Over at another lavish mansion, a girl reads a blog post and gets offended on behalf of "our RK at the gossip-mongering. She is a big fan of Rk. She talking to her nanny about Rk fake pictures just then her father mohan come asked "how are you so sure it's fake ?" take her ipad and saw rk pic and said "yeah it's malicious photo".
The girl said "yeah i know that
And i knew dad you'd see right through this since you used to be prosecutor!"

Her father mohan asks "Ria, Do you like RK that much?"

"I love him so much that i could just die!
Make him marry me, Dad plz "
Ria begs to her father.

Mohan said "i don't really want a guy like RK as my son-in-law."

Mohan kapoor is a former prosecutor and now assemblyman, then his wife meera come nags him not to work so hard and mohan hug her warmly. He thanks her for being his wife, and she smiles happily.

Meanwhile, RK 's mother Radha preps ingredients at her restaurant, and a headline from a newspaper she's been using as placemat catches her eye: It's Assemblyman mohan Kapoor. She looks down at his picture with sad eyes and holds hand to heart.
The sound of breaking glass draws Radha out of her thoughts, and she finds Restaurant man kuku bhatiya with a collection of side dishes and ingredients. Kuku is a terrible liar and insists that all this food is totally not for rishbh ; it's for his son bittu's friend
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*RK Mansion *

Madhu shows up at RK's front door, and the sight of her face in the monitor makes him gape in surprise, or maybe even shock.

Madhu said on the monitor screen "Mr. Rishbh kundra! You're home, right?..." she waited for reply but she didn't get then she said "ahh I am not a mad person nor am a fanatic fan. I am a good, law abiding citizen."

Bittuji recognizes her and is surprised that she actually came; he explains to Rk how she claimed she would persuade Rk to do the documentary.

Bittuji said to Rk "she seemed slightly crazy."

but madhu heard this and replies "i am not crazy!. Judging from the sound of your voice, you're Mr. RK's manager, right?... shouldn't you be helping me instead of harming me, right now?" And reminding him that he had a lot of complaints about the RK too. She lists his complaints, and bittuji swears to RK that he never said those things.



All the while, RK just stares fiercely at the monitor. When she says "Can i have a moment with you Mr. RK , If you think I'm crazy you can chase me away..."

rk interrupts and says, "I'll chase you away now" and shuts off the monitor.


Madhu rings his doorbell repeatedly, but RK's already walking away. She turns to go... and then spies the security camera mounted in the entryway.

So when Rk flips to the security camera channel on his TV, he spots Madhu standing in front of his door, holding a notebook up to the camera. She flips through it, : "I know you're surprised. Please take your time continuing what you were doing. If you change your mind, please call me. Until you open the door, I'll be waiting here quietly. ^^ "


So Rishbh goes about his business, bathing his dog and watching TV. All the while, madhu sits outside in the cold, even when it begins to snow. She waited for while then she calls her brother Rohan and suspects that he's skipping his meals again, she finally gets up to goand leaves a tiny snowman in her stead, with the note: "I will be back" Rk sees it in the camera monitor late that night.

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In the morning, RK packs up his outdoor gear, gets in one of his many fancy cars, and pulls out of his driveway... and the second his gate swings open, Madhu dashes inside and blocks his car. He screeches to a stop, and she gets inside the car and said "good morning!"

Rk asked "what are you doing?"

but she other chatters to him and ignored his question. Rk is uncomfortable with her presence and said "Do you want me to drag you out?"
Then she said "i know you're thinking"Oh She's so annoying, being so clingy like this"you might even be a bit shocked. But i'm in bit of hurry, you see."

Rk tells "I'll count to three, and give you a chance to get out of your own volition."
RK gives her three seconds to get out of the car, which she blithely ignores, and then he peels out at high speed. He drives recklessly, swerving violently through traffic, giving Madhu palpitations.
Then he gives her the opportunity to get out at a red light. Rk asked "want to get out?" But she declines, and prepares a firm grip on the car.

He shoots off into traffic once more, and swerves into the opposite lane to pass a carright into the path of an oncoming truck. He swerves out of the way in the nick of time, but it's too much for madhu, and she's forced to vomit at the side of the road.

RK tosses a few bills at her side and tells her "here's money for medicine." Then adding "Let's Never See Each Other Again."
RK gets back in the car and drives off.

Madhu lies down in the road right then and there, looking up at the snowy sky, tears slipping from her eyes.

Rk drives on as the snow flurries grow stronger, and turns on the radio to a news announcement of an accident: A truck slipped on the road and hit a twenty something woman, on the very road he's traveling now. Rk recalls passing by an ambulance a short time ago and can't shake his unease as the woman's injuries are described as severe.


He makes a U-turn and heads back to the spot where he'd pulled over, but finds no sign of madhu.

RK resumes his drive, and takes a call from his attorney and say "i will call you later" but His attorney cut him off and said "RK i found the woman you asked me to find."

After a little pause Rk replies, "Me too. I think I found her, too."

He pulls over the car, and looks off in the distance: A woman trudges along the side of the road, wobbling unsteadily on her feet. He drives closer and runs up to Madhu, staring down at her intently.

She stares, too, then breaks into a smile. "Have you changed your mind?" she asks. "Is that why you came back?" She explains that she's not doing all this just to score a job for herself.

Madhu says "I think this Documentary can really help you to break free from the asshole image that you've crafted for yourself."


RK cuts her off and speaks seriously: "Do you not know me?

Madhu replies "ofcourse I do! You are Star, Even my landlord's little kids know you..."
but he cuts her off again, saying her name with intensity: "Madhubala. Do you really not know who I am?"

"I know you", she answers,
"You are a scumbag"
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