Rishbala ss uncontrollably fond... ~Part 5/Page 6/ DT 23/6/19 - Page 4

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Originally posted by: harini06

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loved it, Thank you Dear❣
before Madhu could confess her love to Rk she saw Rk-Trishna hug,trishna is her frnd, Yeah
Malik met with an accident ,madhu saw the girl who hit her father but with Mohan's interference whole case got changed,
Mohan-Rk met for the first time,Madhu confronted Mohan for covering up the criminal,

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Originally posted by: harini06

thanks for the character sketch

My pleasure.... 😊

Originally posted by: aishu007

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Rk wanted to concentrate only on studies so that he broke up with Trishna Madhu got angry at him coz Trishna is not well coz of him actually Madhu too had crush on Rk but seeing him with Trishna she suppressed her feelings.. Yeah

Madhu's father met with an accident & Mohan is the opposite side layer.. He tried to close this case giving fake evidence & culprit seems like Rk admires his father a lot.. He is his inspiration

How Madhu became so important to Rk when they didn't like each other at first .. Hmm.🙊

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Originally posted by: annukumari007

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Hello friends,

I'm so sorry guys for not posting this story. i was busy with my cousin wedding and exam. Here is the next part... i hope you like it...it's Unedited part so kindly excuse mistakes..

PART 5

Prosecutor mohan pretends that he did not hear anything and come to Rishabh, offers to sign a book for Rishabh and asks his name. Feeling sheepish, Rishabh says he’ll pass the exam and come claim the book then and that time he'll tell his name.

Madhu limps onto the bus with her bloodied knee, and she cringes when Rishabh catches the same bus just before it takes off. He walks right up to her and asks the girl sitting next to her to move so he can sit with his friend, and despite madhu’s protests that they aren’t friends, the girl gives up her seat and Rishabh climbs in.

Every time Madhu tries to get up and move he yanks her back down, and he challenges her "You seduce me then!"

"WHAT..??"

Rk pointed out that "No boy who's madly in love would put studying over her. He'd only do that if he didn't like her that much."

He explained her why he broke up with trisha.

RK said: “So you try and seduce me. So that I’m so crazy about you that I can’t study. So that I can’t even dream of becoming a prosecutor.” Understandably, madhu tries to move away from him like he’s a crazy person. He doesn’t let her though, and keeps yanking her back to the seat beside him and said "If you can't seduce me, I'm going to seduce YOU."

After that day, madhu spends every night handing out flyers asking for witnesses to come forward regarding her father’s hit-and-run. She tapes the flyers to lampposts and store windows every single night, and shows up at school exhausted in the mornings.

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One day madhu is going to school with her friend. She is exhausted and sleepy.

Her friend asked "Madhu, are you asleep?"

"No, I'm not." Then she yawned

"Ahhh I'm so sleepy " Madhu cried.

Madhu is thinking of picking up a part-time job on top of it all, because her dad’s hospital bills are stacking up.

"Did your parents find a part timer?"

"Why do you ask?"

"If not, can I take the job?"

"Are you out of money? Hmm Your dad's hospital Bill's must be huge."

"I just have to work "

Her friend suggested "madhu why don't you agree to let the hit-and-run driver off the hook for a payout???"

"After what they have done, I can't let them go easily" madhu said painfully.

*WOOHOO*

*Isn't that Rishabh kundra?*

*yes,that's him*

Her whole school is a flutter that morning, and madhu sees why, when she spots RK standing by the gate holding a giant teddy bear.

*He is here but why??*

*I think he want her back*

*oh yeh maybe*

They assume he’s here to get his ex back, but as madhu walks by him, he sticks his arm out and grabs her, startling everyone in the process.

He gives her a cheeky look and says "I skipped school because it's our 100th day.(of dating) You can't just walk past me."

Madhu asks "what? 100th day? Of what??"

Madhu doesn’t have a chance to process what on earth he’s talking about before he shoves the teddy bear at her and says, “Happy 100th day. I love you, Madhu!”

*Click*

*Click - Click*

Everyone clicking their pics.

Madhu is shocked, she looks around her, horrified, because right now it looks like she’s been sneaking around with Rk behind her best friend’s back, and everyone at her school is witnessing it. To add insult to injury, Rk waits until madhu’s lovesick best friend Trisha shows up, and he pets madhu on the head playfully as he says that " You're so cute... I keep thinking of you and i just can't concentrate." After hearing this Trisha fall on floor.

Rk slings his arm around madhu and says

"We shouldn’t hide anymore, because you did nothing wrong. I'm the jerk."

Madhu calls him a crazy , but before she can argue with him, he clamps a hand over her mouth and smiles, making them look awfully chummy and effectively ridding himself of the clingy ex, all in one go.

Rk said to Trisha "I'm sorry Trisha but think just happened. Find a guy way better than me." And smirked.

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Afterwards, Rishabh cackles to himself like a madman, thoroughly amused by the stunt he pulled. Kuku bhatia wonders what’s come over him, and Rk gasps in between laughs, “Uncle, why am I such an horrible human being?” He practically falls over laughing.

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At hospital

"What a jerk" madhu murmured.

"Who do you mean?" Madhu's little brother Rohan asks her.

"Rishabh kundra .... what should i do about him? He is a scumbag" madhu said.

"Dad madhu is saying bad words." Rohan complains to his comatose father about madhu's swearing.

"I wasn't cursing. I was stating a fact."madhu replied.

Madhu said to her father "dad... plz wake up and get revenge for me. It's look like i stole a friend's boyfriend and now everyone hates me." Madhu is complains about Rishabh to shamsher.

"Do you want him to wake up to get revenge for you? How old are you?" Rohan calls her need for revenge childish.

"I'm older than you."

"Dad, wake up and buy me pizza. Sweet potato and bacon with cheese crust." Rohan said to his father

"Do you want him to wake up to buy you pizza? That's why you're a kid."

*Beep*

*Beep*

*Beeeeeeeeeppppppppp*

They’re busy arguing when shamsher flatlines and his monitor starts ringing an alarm. Madhu and her brother stand by helplessly as nurses and doctors rush in. They can’t revive shamsher, and Rohan breaks down in wailing sobs, demanding that they bring his dad back. Madhu just quietly sheds a tear and whispers that "I'm sorry".

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From the bus's window, Rishabh saw a poster of appeal for witnesses posted by Madhu. he feeling sad.

At School, Rishabh overhears two boys talking about madhu’s father, and how he died after his hit-and-run accident.

The guy said "I'm feeling bad for madhu. My mom said that she disappeared with her brother before the funeral."

After hearing this Rishabh ask "why? Where did she go?"

The guy said "i Don't know. They found out after he died that he had a huge loan. Her mom was sick for a long time before she died."

Rishabh asks "why did they disappear?"

"To get away from the loan sharks.. they interrupted the wake and threatened her. it wasn't a pretty sight" the other guy said.

"Aren't you dating her? Didn't she tell you anything?" The guy asks to rk.

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Funeral parlour

Rk goes straight to the funeral, where he witnesses a stand-off between Madhu’s neighbors and the loan sharks. The neighbors are trying to protect Madhu and Rohan, but the loan sharks say that the kids ran off with their money, and they ought to sell their bodies to pay it back if they have to. Rk is feeling bad for madhu. He quietly pays his respects to madhu’s father.

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*Mohan kapoor house*

At dinning table Mohan said to Assemblyman balraj "The victim of the hit-and-run died last night. The man who turned himself in was let off with a two year probation. The case is closed."

"Thank you for your work. I will never forget what you did for me." Balraj is pleased to hear that his daughter's accident has been taken care of.

"How is your daughter doing?" Mohan asked.

"I send her abroad that same night. She was a total wreck. She needs some time off to travel and recuperate. It's just a small mistake. We will still become in-laws, won't we?" Balraj said.

"Of course " mohan happily agreed.

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Rishabh finds one of madhu's flyers in the street and tried calling the number to get a hold of her, but there's no answer. He feeling sad.

After few months

At school

A teacher is announcing result to students in the classroom. She is calling students one by one.

"Rishabh kundra...." she is calling Rishabh but he is looking outside from window. He is busy on his own thought.

"Rishabh kundra" she again said. When his friend shake Rk. He comeback in his sense.

He stand up from his chair and goes to teacher. she prised Rishabh for good marks. everyone cheers for Rishabh but he is not so happy.

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Rishabh goes to the place where Madhu had posted the flyer. he changes the flyer with the new one that he has made just like madhu's flyer. He tries her number again and gets hopeful when a girl answer

"Madhubala??" rk asked

"Not that name again. I'm not madhubala. How many times must i say this? I'm sick of it now." The girl angrily said then cut the call. Rk cross out madhu's old phone number in the flyer and write down his name and number, but then stopped. He asked to himself "Why?... Why should I care about her?" He tears the flyer down and is about to walk away when suddenly he gets a call.

"Hello " he said

"Hello... is this Rishabh kundra number?" The Girl said from otherside but Rk recognised the voice. Which he wants to hear from a long time. He didn't say anything.

"It's me.. madhu... Madhubala.. the old lady told me that you carried my dad's portrait at the funeral. Thank you, Rishabh. " madhu said .

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Present (2019)

Madhu trying to convince Rishabh to do the documentary.

Madhu says "I think this Documentary can really help you to break free from the asshole image that you've crafted for yourself."

RK cuts her off and speaks seriously: “Do you not know me?”

Madhu replies "Ofcourse I do! You are Star, Even my landlord's little kids know you....." but he cuts her off again, saying her name with intensity: “Madhubala. Do you really not know who I am?”

“I know you,” she answers,

“You are a scumbag....... But so what.... Will you do the documentary if I say so?... You Won't... You'll just be the same jerk you always were..."madhu said.

"and thanks for this. It'll come in handy" madhu thanks him for the money he threw at her feet and walk past him. Rk turns around and watches her hobble down the road, and as she winces in pain and collapses, he thinks to himself "There's no way She is Madhu....She must not be Madhu...................... That girl can't be MY MADHU"

He starts marching over to her, and breaks into a run.

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Do you remember me?

Do you recognize me?

We’ve met again

My shaking eyes

My trembling lips

Are looking for you again

One step behind

From behind

Hug me like before

My heart tells me, it remembers you

The only person who makes my heart race

A painful love that makes my heart ache

Awesome update,

infront of whole school Rk pulled a stunt n proposed to Madhu,

felt bad for Madhu and Rohan they lost their father,

after their father's death they both went missing,

whole day Rk was thinking only about her,one day Madhu called him and said thanks to him,

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