SamAina Drabble Series~ (11th Drabble Added on Pg.36) - Page 21

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Deepaananf


nahin yaar one was scary and serious i know i missed putting in the reply 😳
Thank you definitely would love to get a feedback from you on my One Shots. They are not so good as yours but i wanted to try. I read a lot of books but this is first time i am really excited to write some thing.

I guess you are talking abt crossroads, but what happened in the show is scarier,ain't it? chalo atleast like in my drabble, Naina chose Sam over her family, what a growth! ⭐️
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Posted: 6 years ago
Yes! My exams was going on so I was
Busy in that, and my name is shubhi.😊.ohh you remember our discussions in that thread , I thought you forgot about it and also me .

Hints vints smjh ni aate sidhe sidhe bolo😛



Originally posted by: Ross11

Thank you. Since you appeared after so many days toh I forgot your name. 😳...but your comment reminded me our discussions on your intro thread😃...just like Sam ko FBs aate hain. 😆...Chalo glad you enjoyed it.

OK, I'll give you hints, I am 90s kid and single. 😆

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Posted: 6 years ago
Hi Ross,

After your 3rd drabble, finally I am here again... Below are my comments on drabbles 4-6...

Drabble #4:
I am so happy you considered your readers' wishes and came up with this drabble. Sameer tried to get a kiss from her... not just asking, but actually doing something... Hahaa.. .that's my Sameer! Aur sach hi toh kaha usne... Chachaji ke hadd me kya hai how does Naina know? She needed to understand that couples have their own rules about such limits... and what is important is what they both want. I am glad she gave in, when she saw Sameer upset... 😳
Apart from that... I am sure no one can resist a pouting Sameer Maheshwari... 😆😆


Drabbe #5:
Ahan... so Naina is getting bold... I love it...!! 😃
Bold Naina is my favorite, and that tadka of possessiveness is perfect... 👏
Sameer got jhatke pe jhatka... pehle toh mandir ke jagah park... and then the kiss... and then the dialogue... 😆😆 I so want to see a lost and dazed Sameer in show too, because of Naina's actions... And his thoughts... omg! dori deni hogi, pata nahi dori se kya karne wali hai... Hahaa... Thank God he didn't express his thoughts aloud, warna sach me Naina kiss karne ke jagah usi dori se uska gala ghot deti... 😛
And oh yes... The title is perfect! 😃


Drabble #6:
This one is... well... different. I am glad you chose a different way to express your thoughts about Samaina this time. Just the thought of losing a child is unbearable to parents. And to top that this is Sameer waiting outside of that hospital room... afraid of losing everything again...
I agree with you that he didn't lose his hope, but still... he lost a big part of his life... A mother loves her unborn child, but a father also loves him/her equally. Given the kind of childhood Sameer had, he would be very much eager to welcome his child in the world, and shower him with the love and affection that he never received as a child.
This is why I have something to add on here - I think, that this drabble would have been more complete if you had added a line or two about Sameer's pain on losing his unborn child, and also about his thought on how he needed to be strong, because he knew he would have to support Naina. Because, even though Sameer is happy that Naina is with him, when Naina wakes up there would be a moment when she would wish that she had been dead instead of her child.
Just my thoughts... 😳


I would comment on the final two drabbles tonight... 😊

Cheers,
Mou

Edited by MSK04 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
And finally am back for the last two drabbles... 😃

Drabble #7:
Naine ne kya raasta dhund nikala hai roothe piya ko manane ka... 😉 The way she confronted him saying she knew he was alone was superb... Hahaa... Mrs. Maheshwari is resourceful... I loved how you showed that Sameer couldn't stand mama-mami insulting Naina... It had really irritated me when mami had thrown Naina out and Sameer had stood mute... I wanted him to say something... It didn't fit with his character that he would bear Naina's insult... this drabble of yours seems like a closure to that incident... and I am really glad to read it...
And well... Sameer is lucky! Baar baar hug milne wala hai usko... 😆😆

Drabble #8:
Ross...!!! This one is super duper amazing...!! It's beyond perfect...!
The title is perfect... 👏👏
Sameer is perfect... the naughty shararati way is so totally him...!! I have to say you caught on perfectly to his this side of nature... ⭐️
And when Chachaji came and asked Naina to give him not one but two... Omg... 🤣
Yes yes... Sameer ko aise laddoo khane aate rehna chahiye... I am so so happy to read this drabble... Thank you so much for this brilliant piece of work...!! 🤗


Phew...!! I am finally done with all your drabbles...!! Now the ball is again in your court... When is the next coming?? 😉


Cheers,
Mou
Edited by MSK04 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
Hey Mou,
Thank you so much for your detailed analytical take on all my drabbles. Itna kaun karta hai yaar, seriously I am speechless. Ppl read all but gives report on last one if they want to, definitely this quality of yours is applaudable.
You liked all that's a great thing for me and 8th one was just perfect isliye toh itna time lag raha hai next drabble ke liye. 😆

OK, you have some doubts abt 6th,blame the drabble thing. Actually I have all in mind but didn't pen it down thought to make it concise. What I had in my mind was Sam was not waiting outside for the life of child, it was for Naina. When nurse had come he had chosen mother bcoz the pregnancy was complicated hence he had already made up his mind, still Naina's life was in danger hence the insecurity. Hope it clears it out.
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Posted: 6 years ago

Haq


"Naina, chalo backside garden mein baithte hain, yahaan red rose mein crowd badhne wala hai." Sameer said looking at gang who were about to enter canteen.

" haan chalo par tum aisi waisi baat nahi karoge tab hi chalungi she was irritated by his lip kiss demands.

"theek hai, ab chalen!

"Naina, aaj yahaan garden mein baith ke kitna sukoon mil raha hai na, jab se sagai huyi hai tab se tension hi chal raha tha kisi na kisi baat pe"He said holding her hand.
" haan aaj bahot dinon baad akele waqt guzarne ka mauka mila hai"
" aur dekho toh door door tak koi nahin hai yahaan"
" woh toh hai"
" iska matlab samajh rahi ho na, matlab kudrat bhi chahti hai ki main jo chahta hun mujhe mil jaaye"
" Sameer, tum phir shuru ho gaye, abhi toh red rose mein kaha tha aur tum maan bhi gaye the"
"main maan gaya tha? woh toh maine kaha tha aisi waisi baat nahi karunga aur yeh toh bass kiss ki baat hai, aisi waisi baat thodi hai?" he looked into her deep eyes with mischievous smile.She tried to stand up but he held her hand tightly.

"Naina batao na kya mera itna bhi haq nahi hai?"
" ab iss mein haq wali kaunsi baat hai"
" toh kya tumhen mujh par bharosa nahi hai ya lagta hai ki main tumse shaadi nahin karunga?"
" mujhe tumpar khud se zyada bharosa hai par sach bataun mujhe sharm aati hai?
" achcha ek baar toh kiss kar chuki ho na? "
" woh toh tumhen manaane ke liye tha woh bhi gaal pe tha aur tum toh direct" she couldn't continue and blushed while looking at his lips.

Sameer enjoyed it" achcha theek hai tum gaal pe hi kiss kardo, abhi ke liye usi se kaam chala lunga aur agar tumne uske liye bhi mana kiya toh phir samjhunga mera koi haq nahi hai tum par"

She melted with his pleading, she thought" itna toh haq banta hai" and agreed for cheek kiss.

Sameer observed her carefully, her slow progression, some time calculations and when she was about to kiss his cheek, he turned and it happened!

Edited by Ross11 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
Ha ha... naughty Sameer...right time pe turned his head... Very sweet one Ross!
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Posted: 6 years ago
I so wish this drabble to come true Sameer should emotionally blackmail naina like this. Woh maan jayegi 😆 Loved this drabble 😃
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Posted: 6 years ago
hayyeee it happened... i can imagine naina's reaction
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Posted: 6 years ago
Haha, Ross! This was superb...Sameer knows what he wants and how to get it too! and Naina cannot complain about what happened too! 😆 I remembered Varun and Alia had a scene like this in BKD where he turns! 😛

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