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Excellent narrative with full of emotional feelings. Her concern for her sister Sita and for her sufferings, her fear, and distress when she heard about her husband's war with Meghnaad, just saw it in front of my eyes. Till date, no one touched this story of the 'sleeping duty' of Urmila, so you have a vast canvas in front of you and I am sure you will paint a Princess' agonizing wait for her mate and her surprise for his silence --it is so gripping. Waiting to read the next part.
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