REVENGE- Part 75 (Page 159) - Page 48

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Posted: 6 years ago
Sweet update. Liked that Maan respects Geet for what she is, enjoys her simplicity and teases her. Geet deserves this good time and break from that silly Akhil. I bet he will find a way to get her a job in the city. And we want that they should be together😊

Please don't be disheartened about a job...I'm sure it is on the way and will happen. Delay does not mean denial:)

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Posted: 6 years ago
Nice part . So Maan hired someone so that he can help akhil to find out about Geet. It's a plan of Maan . Maan did all shopping for Geet Geet was surprised seeing all this. Waiting for next dear
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Posted: 6 years ago
bechari geet...kahan phans gayi...

lovely update...

loved it very much...
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Posted: 6 years ago
thanks for the pm!

lovely update! well written!

Maan is fooling Akhil!!!

wow Maan is flirting with Geet!!! can understand her confusion!

update soon!
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Posted: 6 years ago
Nice Maan shopping and enjoying to irritate Geet
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Posted: 6 years ago
Awesome part
Loved it. Maan is trying to manipulate akhil so that he won't find geet. Maan is slowly started to fall for geet and he likes her too.

All the best. I am sure you will get job soon. God will be with you
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Posted: 6 years ago
Interesting update
Akil gets a fake PI to find Geet

The shopping part was funny

Waiting for next
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Posted: 6 years ago
maan is misguiding akhil giving his trusted pl
maan do shopping with the help of geet through phone
maan like to tease geet
both are now at ease with each other

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Posted: 6 years ago
First of all don't get upset about job u will find one soon and about YouTube post I dont know how to post sorry for that
Coming to update it was superb
Maan ne Kya ullu bana UA akilhil ko
Maan ne shopping ke jaise geet kaha
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Posted: 6 years ago

Part 30

Maan lets go of her hand...after holding it for 2 seconds longer

M-Maybe bill is in the car. What do you need it for?

He says looking down checking his wallet

G-Bill batao naa, tumhe zarur thag liya hoga

M-Supermarket mein tha everything is fixed. Kaisi-kaisi batein kar rahi ho? Teacher ho theek hai...matlab ye thodi ki ab paper check karke marks bhi dogi. Aur pehli baar ghar ke bahar nahi nikal raha hoon

G-Batao naa kitna bill hua?

M- Oh I don't remember, everything was billed at different place

Maan says some figure for some of the things although he does remember how much it all exactly was but saying exact numbers causes suspicion too

Geet bhaag ke andar gai

G-Tumne kaha about 2000 bill hua naa?

She gives him rs 1000

M-What am I supposed to do with this? Look if you want to shop for girly things, that you will have to do on your own...I am not buying that...uh-huh no way!

He says handing the the money back

G-Ufff its 50-50 naa

M-You want to pay for half the stuff here? But I can't take your money now...you don't have job yet, besides... if we are to divide the money then you should at least pay me 3/4th. What am I ever going o do with clips huh? Why don't you just keep an account of how much you owe me and then pay me back when you get a job?

G-Chup karo naa...le lo naa. Mujhe bura lagega if you don't keep it

M-Toh laga lo...reasonable si baat hai, nakhre mat dikhao. Achha batao ab khane mein kya banega

She holds his arm and pouts

G-Lo naa

Maan takes it

M-Le liya. Khush?

She smiles

G-Jao ab change karo

Maan gives her a "whatever look and goes

Plan simple tha, paise rakh lo fir Geet ko wapas de dena

Maan change karke naha dhokar aata hai

For change, feeling relaxed and happy at home

Generally he is alone and brooding about what next to do

Today he is ready to just enjoy the present moment

Udhar tv chal raha tha aur saath mein Geet dinner ready kar rahi thi singing and dancing along with it

She also feels happier, not miserable and sad

She feels happy. She feels needed

Maan chupke se peeche se aake Geet ko darra deta hai

G-Aaauuu!!!

She is heaving

Maan shows his teeth

She twists his nose

M- Sgreat! What are you cooking? I am hungry

G-Aloo jeera. Do minute ruko laga rahi hoon khana, jao yahan se

Geet looks at Maan then gives another look and then uses all her strength to not ogle and look at the food

As Maan was home...relaxed he decided to wear a pajama and his vest and he actally had muscles

Office mein to 1 size loose shirt pehenkar baal chipkaakar bilkul champu lagta hai

Ab ballon se tel utar gaya aur chest se shirt bas ek champu sa chashma hai...

Maan ko bhi laga ki Geet is looking at him more than she does

He wonders why

Usse nhai laga ki Geet jo pagloan ki tarah Akhil ke peech hai could ever feel anything of that sort for him

Toh laga ki shayad aise ganji nahi pehnni chahiye thi...Geet uncomfortable to feel nahi kar rahi

G-Maan

M- hmm?

G-Ye table pe rakh do

Casserole deti h

He is gazing at her while in his thoughts while holding the casserole and thinking

Geet to bolke roti banane lag gai

Maan ko aur dekhne ka mauka mil gaya

He never actually got to see her in peace

Geet ko laga chala gaya hoga, baal upaar bandh liye

He is really seeing her while taking his time and leisurely noticing everything about her

He loves the curve of her neck

It just seems long enough o perfectly fit his palm

Jaise Maan ke hath ka mould liya fir usmein Geet ki gardan ki length measure karke uska curvature calculate karke banaya

Geet ki height bhi aisi ki his lips perfectly touch her forehead if they stand close

Maan is noticing how harmoniously compatible Geet is to him

His body perfectly hides her soft and slender structure

He is noticing, how she would crinkle her nose when a chapathi wouldn't be proper...how her tongue would slightly be out when she would use the rolling pin with full concentration

Geet punches the dough in frustration and gets a puff of powered flour on her cheek

Maan ne dekha

Ab raha naa gaya

Casserole side me rakha

Steps up to her

Geet punching the flour with both hands

Maan puts one hand on her shoulder to turn her around a bit to face him

G-Hmm?

She looks up at him

Doosre haath se he brushes away the flour on her cheek lingeringly

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