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Posted: 6 years ago
Lol ye Maan bhi
He's just pretending to be someone else while having Geet under his wing!
Looking forward to see kya kya layega Maan ab 😆
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Posted: 6 years ago
so he is helping Geet
but y suddenly Geet has left her crush on Akhil
who is playing whom
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Posted: 6 years ago
Caught up and liked all the parts. A happy Geet makes everyone smile with her. Glad she has found Maan to help her...enjoying the peace before the conflict.

I hope Maan will not waste time with Antara and lead her on. I'm sure there are other ways of trapping Akhil. Let the guy miss Geet and understand her worth.

Wishing you a great 2019 and year of more writing!
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Posted: 6 years ago
First time Maan did the right thing by shutting Antara wohooo way to go more
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Posted: 6 years ago
Things going pretty well they are giving me the feeling of new Married couple who's going to start their life and have to start everything from scratch they all just need a Marriage now 🤣


Marrying is the last thing on His Mind I know but a reader can always dream...

Akhil is so overconfident I hope he never gets hold of Geet...
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Posted: 6 years ago
I'm already waiting to see what will happen in next chapter
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Posted: 6 years ago

Part 29

M-Kuch khaas nahi wahi kaam. It's not so fun without your bickering anymore. Koi hai nahi naa kaam na karne par daantne ko.

G-See I am bickering on phone

Maan laughs

G-Haan thik hai thik hai! kaam karo. Samjhe!

M-Hmm bye

Geet rakh deti hai

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Akhil thoda shaant hua toh

Maan ek Private Investigator leke gaya Akhil ke paas. (wo PI already Maan ka purana employ hai.. saari Akhil ke baare mein diging ussi PI ne ki hai)

M- Sir, ye bohot acha PI hai. He's sure to find Geet. Police toh 2 din baad FIR likhegi. Isliye maine inhe hire kar liya

Akhil pats Maan's back happily

Maan smiles compliantly, laughing like the devil inside

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Ab office khatam hua

Maan thoda jaldi nikla

Big bazar type store gaya jahan generally sab saamaan mil jaata hai

List kholi phir band ki

Phir Geet ko call kiya

Geet ka dimag khoob khaya ki ye sabzi kaise lete hai..? How do I see if its fresh? ye green hai

Geet ne kaha ki bootlle green ho to nahi lena...emerald green ho to lena

Maan ne sir khujaya

M-Matlab ki this is sort of darkish green...should I buy it?

G-Maine kaha na.. ki agar bottle green ho to

Ab Maan ko kahan pata green color ki prajati...wo to bas light or dark janta hai

Fruit kharida toh Geet ne kaha ki press karke dekho soft hai to gala hua hai, mat lena

Ab tamatar tha, soft to hoga hi thoda...par Maan ko kya pata, pichka diya

G-Maan! tumhe kuch nahi aata kya? Itne dino se bhookhe the kya?

M- I ate take outs, I told you that...

Wahan khade admi ne kaha ki-sir if you keep doing that...all the fruits you have ruined...you'll have to buy them

Sales man ne kaha, why don't you bring your wife along next time

Geet ko sarr se baal khichne wali stage par lane ke baad Maan ki shopping khatam hui

Kabhi- kabhi to jo pata bhi ho wo bhi naa bata kar Geet ke mazze le raha tha

Maan ko bhi koi pareshaan karne ko mil gaya

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Phir finally Maan ghar pohochta hai

Kai trips mei saara saamaan ghar ke andar pohochta hai

Geet ne strictly kaha ki ab se tum shopping mat karna

Maan is grinning all the while

M- Geet, agar main karunga nahi to sikhunga kaise?

Geet is also smiling, Maan bada gharelu jo lag raha hai

G-Sikhna kyun hai?

Geet bhi saamaan rakhne lagti hai list ke saath check karte hue

M-Besides I have such a pretty teacher, agar class choddi to nuksaan to mera hua na

Geet looks at him surprised...she didn't expect...did he just flirt?

He winks at her all in good nature and helps her keep the stuff...ki ye kahan rakhna hai wo kahan rakhna hai

She smiles...

Geet ko acha laga...pehli baar someone acknowledged her as a woman

G-Bill dikhao...waise sabzi thele wale se leni thi naa

M-Bill kyun?

Pura pocket tatola nahi mila

G- Arre! [She pouts]

M-It got misplaced during so many trips back and forth from the supermarket to car and car to house

He holds her hand

M- Main dhundh raha hoon

Geet just pauses, his hands were warm, yet soft and strong

Maan lets o of her hand...after holding it for 2 seconds longer
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Author's Note
Sorry for the late update guys. I was really depressed these days because I am struggling to find a job in New York. Also was little disappointed that I asked for help from you guys for posting the YouTube video in my post, but nobody helped me. Anyhow, hope you enjoyed the part
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Posted: 6 years ago
Well looks like Maan is cooking up some confusion for Akhil. I am sure you can find something part time in nyc. The holiday season is over so its tough but I am sure you will come across something.
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Posted: 6 years ago
Nice update..
Thank you for pm...
Waiting for next update..
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Posted: 6 years ago
Lovely Chapter

Maan gets his PI and lets Aahkil know that a FIR was done two days ago
with police but nothing has been done yet so this PI will help in finding Geet
Maan doing shopping and he has no idea what to select
at home Geet wants the bill and he says he lost it but will look for it
why is Maan holding onto Geet , winking and smiling at her praising her
because this time Geet will certainly believe he likes her and again she will
be hurt by him

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