MG OS To Reality .../Last Part and Epilogue/ Page 16 on 15th Jan 2019 - Page 10

Created

Last reply

Replies

110

Views

6.9k

Users

43

Likes

348

Frequent Posters

pixelflower620 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 6 years ago
#91
Note
I'm sorry for the delay in this one as to be honest I forgot the original plot ...typing a different end for this os ...
pixelflower620 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 6 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Happy New Year Khushboo! wish you all the happiness!




Thank u dear and wish u the same😃
pixelflower620 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 6 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

and waiting for the update!


Posting in a few minutes
pixelflower620 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 6 years ago
#94


Last Part and Epilogue


Our dream to Reality






"What do you mean, Geet asked. "Oh, so you don't remember so let me refresh your memory a bit, The fake Sahil smirked. "What is all this, Maan asked. "Hmm...don't you think this place is familiar Geet, He said.






"Yes, She answered. "Well because you came here and found out the truth about your little invention controlling everything here while it was supposed to be monitored by you, He said. "You mean it is alive.., Maan asked amazed. "Yes, your wife here is a genius which she herself was unaware of until she created me...her greatest invention Utopia.., He revealed. "Why did you take my form, Sahil asked.







"You, my dear friend was the one whom I should thank for being alive, you used to communicate with me to check the progress which of course was a part of your job but gaining data from you I became curious about the world you all of you come from so ...I created a world of my own...this is not your Utopia but mine ...and my bad luck that you two smart people found that out and well I had to lock both of you away, He finished. "My creation was for the world...and remember if I can create you I can destroy you as well, Geet threatened.
"Geet...please don't get agitated...it is not good for you, Maan was worried. "I'm sorry Maan for worrying you but now I remember every single thing, She said. "You mean you remember who pulled you in this mess, He asked. "Yes but as he thinks its not him but myself who tried to save Sahil after finding out that he is been missing, She said. "You could have told me Geet ...before taking this risk, Maan said. "I didn't want to risk your life, She said. "So you risked your own, He said. "No Maan, I was sure that I could sort this out. I came in this world and was surprised that it was a mirror image of our world though I didn't programed it that way. I understood that something is wrong so I decided to find Sahil first but when I came here ...instead I was trapped by him and my memories were altered, She told. "So do you still remember the stop code, Maan asked. "Yes and we will stop all this now, Geet said and dashed into the fake Sahil making him fall giving them an escape. Maan helped the real Sahil and they tried to escape.
"That way, Geet pointed. "Geet...this is an imaginary world right, Maan asked driving in the said direction. "Yes, She said. "Then there is way to get out of all this, He smiled.







"What do you mean, She asked. "You remember you changed the decor of my cabin today, He said. "Yes...now I get it why didn't we think of this earlier, Geet understood his words. "We just have to let our imagination fly, Maan smiled. They reached the building but as they thought the fake Sahil was already present there. "You think you can defeat me, He said. "Nope, but we can modify you, Maan said. "Geet we will handle this...you just go and put the stop code, The real Sahil said.
"You dare try to mock me ...I can..., He tried to threaten but found them laughing. "This does work, Maan smiled looking at the fake Sahil whose attire was changed to that of a clown. "What...what is happening, He said. "You my friend...gave this idea to us yourself when you asked Geet to change the interior of my cabin, Maan said. Geet rushed to her cabin but it wasn't easy for her as the interior kept changing like a maze. "You won't get out...there are many of us, She heard the voice of Utopia. "You think so ...just for your information I created you so no matter what you do, She said and concentrated on her mission. As Maan said the next moment she could see a clear path to her lab. She rushed there and tried to put the stop code. "Stop code accepted, She heard a voice and everything around them started dissolving. "What is happening, The fake Sahil yelled disintegrating into bits. "It seems its game over for you, Maan smiled as both him and Sahil watched that program disappearing into nothingness. "Let us go back now Maan, Sahil said.
The next she woke up and found Maan and Sahil standing beside her.
"You did it Geet, He smiled. "We did it together, She said. She tried changing the decor of the room by thinking but she wasn't able to do so knowing now she is back to her world with her family. "Lets go home Geet, Maan said. Geet returned home to her family. Their family was happy seeing them.
Epilogue
7 years later
"The Science award is to awarded to Dr Geet Khurana, The announcer said. Geet got up to receive her award. "I think my friend Sahil deserve this award just like me, She said. "I was lost in my own creation, my husband rescued me and my friend helped me complete this new Utopia after we shut down the previous creation because of an error, She smiled. "I'm happy that our creation is now helpful in comatose patients, She smiled. Geet got down the stage and was received by Maan, Sahil and their five year old son Arth. "Momma, let me see the trophy, Her son jumped seeing the trophy. "Thank you Geet...for acknowledging me, Sahil said. "You are a loyal friend Sahil and I couldn't have completed this without you so accept this trophy, She smiled. "And what about you, He asked.








"I think we have already dreamed to reality, Maan smiled. "Yes and I have my two trophies with me, She smiled hugging her family.
The End...
So here is the final part of this OS...thank you for liking and reading this story of mine ...I hope I have justified this story and its ending as I forgot my original plot hehe...😆😆...I will be posting the last parts of Beauty and the Priest and You Got a Friend by the weekend hopefully




Edited by pixelflower620 - 6 years ago
aparna3011 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 6 years ago
#95
superb update
with the help of maan n sahil geet come out of her creation
she destroy her own creation which have fault n create new one which is awarded n she share it with sahil
Nefret19 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 6 years ago
#96
A fabulous update and a beautiful ending dearie.
khwaishfan thumbnail
Visit Streak 1000 Thumbnail Visit Streak 750 Thumbnail + 9
Posted: 6 years ago
#97
thanks for the pm!

Last Part

splendid update! brilliantly written!

glad Sahil and Maan helped Geet! she is now fine!


Epilogue

amazing epilogue! Geet got an award! nice that acknowledged Sahil!


thanks for a lovely OS!!
Edited by khwaishfan - 6 years ago
zida thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 6 years ago
#98
Nic pt
Maan and sahil help geet
And she come out from her creation
Geet destroy creation world
And now geet and maan living happily .
T.Peru thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 6 years ago
#99
Nice ending
With the help of Maan and Sahil Geet come out of that imaginary world
Geet and Maan are together
Thanks for PM
hira2010 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Commentator Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 6 years ago
Well written
Some times our creation became our destruction
But a creator is always superior 😉
Finally everything is fine
Maaneet sahil won finally
And epilogue geet won award
But she gave credit to ahil too
That's like a creative person

Related Topics

Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: NilzStorywriter

1 years ago

Something About You- MG || (Part 92|Page 111)- Last Part

Something About You Hi all Lovelies, I am starting to post a new wonderful story called 'Something About Love'. The credit for writing concept...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Gurti_Maaneet

27 days ago

Awaken Updated EPILOGUE on Pg 14 / 24-7-2025

INTRODUCTION A new Short story on our favorite maaneet.

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Pixiepixel11

2 months ago

MG-Soundless-Chap-4 to Epilogue-Pg-4 to 6-(29/6/25).

Chapter One: The Studio of Shadows ⸻ The city outside never truly slept. It sighed, it buzzed, it rattled—but within the walls of the Khurana...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Pixiepixel11

20 days ago

MG-The Alpha’s Prisoner Bride-Ch-1 to Epilogue-Pg-1-(13.7.25)

Chapter One The cool silk of her wedding night shift was meant to be a comfort, a whisper of the lavish life Geet Handa was born into. Instead,...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Pixiepixel11

2 months ago

MG-When Rain Tastes like Fire-Ch-5 to Epilogue-Pg-6&7-(29/6/25)

Title:- “When Rain Tastes like Fire” Chapter 1: Shadows in Stone The rain had begun its descent long before she arrived. It wasn’t the romantic...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".