Preetan FF : Battle of Justice : Pg 3 (Pg 5) - Page 4

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: katheriene

Finally the thread is opened

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Part 4

PS : Story started in times of 1985 so timing is still in 2001. Character of Noor is played by Jennifer Winget and vital part of the story



Headquarters


June 15th, 2001 (29 days to go)


Preeta is brought into FBI headquarters by some people

Yash : welcome to New york, I am Yash senior head officer

Preeta shakes hands with him

Yash : this way, I hope you didn't have any problem coming

Preeta : not at all any news of that criminal?

Yash : we are still searching for her, Mr Simons this is our new member

Preeta feels familiar seeing him

Simon : welcome to our FBI agency as you know according to reports criminal is an indian girl and we need somebody who is from same place

Preeta : Sir long time ago I learned something in my training we always have to give chance to criminals not wait for them

Peter : what are you trying to say?

"Next sunday there is big exhibition in museum of New york, we will put real diamond in exhibition Preeta shares her plan

Yash : what? but you don't know she is very smart we won't even know when it will be stolen

Preeta : exactly my point we cops think ten steps ahead of criminals, if my guts are right we will definitely meet, showcase would be fake diamond, our job is just to nab her

Yash : you are absolutely right, Sir I think this plan should work but only one problem

Preeta : don't worry about security, one of us would have eyes glued on CCTV at every corner of museum

Yash ; and every person should be checked properly

Preeta : one more thing, the girl might be too smart she can get inside by any ways

Peter ; don't worry our every working person have their ID's and names are on file

Preeta : I guess you all are satisfied with my plan and can be golden chance for us

Simons : Ms Preeta thing is we don't have enough time for experiments, 4th of july is coming President is coming to DC

Preeta ; I promise sir I will hand you culprit before 4th july and if I am not successful I would resign this job

Simon : think once again Ms Preeta, one should be careful while making promise

Preeta : I always think before taking action

"I hope you are from those who keep up the honor of promise Simon leaves

Yash : Preeta you are free for few days what are you going to do, coffee?

Preeta : sorry sir but right now is my time for prayer maybe next time thank you (leaves)

Yash is impressed with her personality instantly


Ladakh


Noor does her packing to go at Lucknow for medical practice.

Shabana (her foster aunt) : take this extra clothes with you it will be needed

Noor : khala don't worry I am going to be nurse now

Shabana ; of course I know, but you won't take care of yourself also

Noor : your daughter is very strong

Shabana ; listen to me carefully you are going for very important task, study with all effort and hard work

Noor : okay aunt stop worrying now, Allah is with me, I am getting late for my train

"Go carefully and my blessing are with you Shabana tells her

Noor ; bye khala


In a while Noor boards the train to Lucknow

with few other girls from same city. During the journey Noor goes into series of flashback when she was around 7 years old and met somebody of her age whom she felt in love as well


Flashback


Noor belonged to high affluent family in Lahore Pakistan and her father was Wasim Khan and mother Razia Khan are high profile politicians.


One day they find an orphan boy hiding in dargah in the riots of hindu muslim mobs.


Wasim : nobody will do anything to him

Ashraf (his worker) : but Sir he is hindu

"So? he is still a human being from today he will work in our mansion Wasim order everybody around him

Ashraf : Sir we cannot keep him with us, you don't know this people they betray the one they are close

Wasim ; not one more word, Salim show this boy his work

"Thank you Sir, I promise I won't give any chance to complain and owe my life to you till death Boy holds his feet

Wasim : if you want to bow down do in front of god he have saved you (leaves)


Later boy is taken to grand mansion in Lahore Pakistan


Flashback ends


Noor looks at the locket in her neck.



New York


Preeta walks around the city in evening after coming out of dargah and temple. She sees a robber trying to rob Lina (Shrishti's younger sister) and puts knife on him

Preeta : back off or else

Robber drops his gun but tries to fight with Preeta in defense. She twists his hands using karate skills and saves Lina .


Cops take him away.

Preeta : don't be scared I am your new friends whats your name

"Lina she says

Preeta ; where do you stay? you should not be here at this time

Lina : my house is far, I missed my bus, I live in Manhattan downtown

Preeta ; I live near there come I will drop you

"You will drop me? thank you she says little nervously

Preeta : of course come, we are friends now


Both girls walks to small rural area of Manhattan which is filed with Asian people

Preeta : who is in your family?

Lina : just me and my sister, she is out of city for some work

Preeta : but you should know you are not supposed to be alone like this

Lina : I was waiting for our neighborhood aunty but she didn't come, my house is here

Preeta ; are you sure you will stay alone

Lina : of course, most of the time my sister is out of town and I live alone

Preeta ; here is my number if you feel any danger just give me call bye

Lina : good night, bye


While coming out somebody puts gun on Preeta from back.


Precap : Karan Preeta meet again in New York, Noor is attacked by mobs


Sorry for boring update, this is only beginning. Next will be longer with Preeta Karan meeting, Noor's flashback


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Posted: 6 years ago
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This story is opened once again
Update fast this time

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