Meri adhori muhabat 1st epi written

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Posted: 17 years ago
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1st episode.

Meri Adhori Muhabat.

ambulance stops in front of hospital and doctors take Haider sultan inside the hospital on stracher and start checking him
outside Humayoon saed(Ayan) and his mom is waiting .
Mom: control urself Ayan no one can stops the inevitables.
Ayan: mumi if i will not be perplexed then who else will be and i also dono, will i see him alive or not. mumi u r not scared....
Mom: i asked u that no one can stops the inevitables then y will i be scared
Ayan: u don't love dad na i alwais said to u that one silence is eating dad from inside and we will know that when he will totally dead from inside.
Mom: u think that i'm responsible for ur dad.
Ayan: no mom i'm not saying that ur responsible but we all r responsible for that.

Now they show Salman haider's house.
Ayan's mumi come's inside and stands in front of Sultan haider's pics and says to him that u never loved me haider. when u were not mine then y will i be urs but i dono y i wana u to love me but u never loved me and now ur going to die without loving me.
Shahood( they never take his name in this episode so i'm calling his real name)comes downstairs and ask her mom how'z father now.
Mom: we can't say anything ...r u going to court beta.
Shahood: mom father got heart attack and noone share this with me.
Mom: don't worry he has a big name and doctors can take care of him batter then us.
Shahood then start's moving towards door when he sees Ayan's standing in the door and is holding the handle from one hand.
Shahood stares at him and then he pulls her hand from the handle and leave.
Ayan comes inside when phone bell rings, he got first scared and then goes to Phone stand and he picks up the phone ..he talks on phone to the press officer and on the other hand news printed on newspapers.
his mom is sitting and listning the news. the news channels were giving the news about haider's heartattack and all about that he is a big buisnessman...
Ayan comes and sits near her mom .
Ayan : "don't u think mama" that papa is so famous outside and in our house it seems that he is nothing .mama u live 30 years with him and 30 years r enough .
Mom: But he did'nt loved me in these 30 years .he loves another woman.
Ayan:whom
Mom: i dono but i read his diary
FLASHBACK>>
she is sitting on bench and reading diary .
without ur incomplete love i dont wana be alive..
then another FLASHBACK...
Haider was asking about his diary and she replied that he is here cuz of her dad and he was nothing without his dad so he gave u all this only cuz of me .. and i burnt ur diary.
Haider: wot u did it was my whole world , my all tears was in it,
His wife: i've no space of fazool (stupid) things in this house and ur adhori muhabat(incomplete love) was ur life . wot will world say if they know this raz.
Haider : u dont know about love and u dnt understand and he leaves...
BACK<<
she says to Ayan i don't care about this and now i'm not feeling good so i'm going to my room for sm rest. and she leaves..

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Edited by nazeeei - 17 years ago

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Posted: 17 years ago
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arrree yaar wow tumarehaath main jaadu hai kia you are a really good Writer awesome epi 👏 👏 👏 continue asap dear 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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chalo i will try to do video 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thank you 😊 😊 nice update

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