*Tera Chaav Laaga Jaise Koi Ghaav Laaga*...mehrya OS...HBD Junior

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Hola dearies. Plz spare me. Am back with another OS..😆. Plz ignore typos and errors.
A small birthday gift to junior Anu. An OS featuring your favourite hero's song Kiddo. Hope you'll like it. 🤗


*Tera Chaav Laaga Jaise koi Ghaav Laaga*

(I became fond of you as if just I got hit by a wound)


He walked passively in the busy streets of paranthe wali gali, all the while thinking ways to rebuilt his new empire. His entire world just collapsed before him in a flicker of a second. When his so called trustworthy friend Nikita betrayed him joining hands with his worst enemy Ajay. He was absolutely clueless from where to start with. Settling his family at his inlaws place evoked shame nd guilt in his heart. But he was helpless. Letting his ego disappear he agreed to his wife's request nd they moved in to Sharma house with their belongings. The very next moment they were thrown out of Khanna mansion, he vent out his anger, pain, agony frustration everything onto her..his Mehak. She stood there weeping silently hearing his heart piercing accusations. His words were full of venom. Without thinking twice he cursed his relation with her. He can't forget the moment he blurted out that he regrets the moment he confessed his love for her. Through the corner of his eyes he witnessed how his words shattered her heart into million pieces. Actually he was mad at her..not that she fell in Nikita's trap,but because of her pure heart nd nature to trust everyone blindly. Once he too manipulated nd betrayed her, leaving her at the altar. But Mehak knows only one thing that is to love everyone selflessly. Her heart only knows to love. Even after getting completely neglected by him, she still stood along with him in his bad times. Their equation was turning normal gradually after a long time. Their love bloomed nd blossomed more knowing no bounds as they romanced in like no tomorrow when she planned a surprise for him. Their happiness was short lived . Ever since their marriage they never had a peaceful life. Though by destiny they were bound to a relation still it played its game in separating them. Though he always accused nd betrayed her out of no reason, she still loved him back. He couldn't nd will not be able to find a single reason to hate her never ever in his life. As he said before, he loves her passionately as she herself is love. He always wanted to be a loving hubby...but at times he couldn't as his short temper would take control of his deeds nd actions. He has broken her heart a million times but he couldn't mend it at least once till date.
Now his career nd life everything has come to a standstill. Maybe he was going through the worst phase of his life where his years of hard work vanished like anything. Being a young businessman he had to face nd overcome many hurdles in his journey. He never bowed before anyone till date. Though he turned out to be a manipulator for stealing her recipe book or running his tv show. His career was built only by his sweat nd painstaking efforts. Now he can't take any chance or risk as he was bound to many responsibilities. He has concern for his family,..he is married,..he has taken vows to protect nd keep his better half happy throughout their life. He promised to fill her life with happiness nd provide her safety nd security. Ever since she opened the doors of his heart she was pouring all her love onto him. She taught him what is love and the true meaning nd value of human relations. Thus the suffering of his beloved ones ached his heart more. When he lost all his material possessions.. his name, fame nd image..what remains with him is his family..their unconditional love for him. He scratched his head being frustrated. He was in an urge to find a miracle..like one would be searching for an oasis in a barren desert. He continues wandering around the streets disheartened. The street lights flicker alarmed by the arrival of rains. A cumulus of dark clouds wanders above his head. Accompanied by stormy winds, lightning nd thunder it rains. He stands their welcoming the rain drops to ease out his pain nd take away his sorrow. Within a few seconds he is pulled strongly by a familiar palm to a nearby shelter. It didn't even took a second for him to realise who it was. As always his better half is here shielding him from the bad weather. He looked intently into her captivating eyes as she was drying his hairs with her dupatta. Her eyes spoke to what extent she was worried for him. He held her hands gesturing her to not worry.

Kabhi Sheet Laaga, Kabhi Taap Laaga (It felt cold sometimes, it felt hot sometimes)
Tere Saath Ka Hai Jo Shaap Laaga (The curse of Your partnership fell on me)
Manwa... Bohraaya...( My heart became bewildered)
Tera Chaav Laaga Jaise Koi Ghaav Laaga...(I became fond of You as if I just got hit by a wound(cut/gash))

She smiled at him. That one smile that could ease away all his worries nd pain. She palmed his cheeks deeply hypnotised by his dark orbs. Though he couldn't decipher..she very well knew what bothered him. She caressed his cheeks as of comforting him. He was lost in her love filled eyes for a moment. She poured all her love that he could cherish for his entire lifetime. Her eyes opened a new ray of hope assuring that everything will be fine like before. Fresh tears welled up in her eyes as she mouthed an apology for his condition being guilt ridden. He kissed away her tears taking her into his embrace. Gently caressing her back, pouring out all his love in a prolonged kiss on her silky hair. That was much needed for them. A true blessing for both of them to be in each other's solace. Her thumping heartbeats echoed in his ears signifying the depth of her longing to be loved by him. His heart beats in a rhythm composing his music of love for his beloved. She hugged him more by tightly gripping his shirt material in her nails. He gently pecks her temple resting his lips there for a long time. He pulls back himself nd steps out to leave while holding her palms gesturing the ceasing rains. She pulls him back possessively holding his arms asking him to stay back. With his million dollar smile he nods his head nd both of them settles on a concreted pavement. She rested her head on his shoulder while tightly clutching his arms. While he rested his head onto hers.

Reh Jaaye Chal Yahin (Let us remain right here)
Ghar Hum Tum Naa Lautein (Let's not return to our homes)
Dhoondhein Koi Na Aaj Re (May no one search for us today)
Tera Chaav Laaga Jaise Koi Ghaav Laaga... (I became fond of You as if I just got hit by a wound)

They remained being each others pillar of support. Silent words yet volume of emotions evoked between as they sat together. Sharing their pain nd comforting each other. It was pure nd magical. Undoubtedly their heart nd soul were synced by birth. A divine pair made in heaven. They left a sigh of breath in unison embarking their love journey. Few minutes later, they started their journey through the narrow roads to reach their home.

Raaste... Aaste Chal Zara... (O roads! Walk slowly please)
Tera Chaav Laaga, Jaise Koi Ghaav Laaga...(I became fond of You as if I just got hit by a wound)

Meanwhile they stops nearby a chaat stall. Her mouth waters seeing the hot spicy snacks. With a puppy face she looks at him. He smiles heartily at her cuteness nd orders chaat for her. Her eyes twinkles out of joy. She relishes the lip smacking chaat like an innocent child. He chuckles watching her. In the meantime she feeds him with all love. He possessively holds her hand nd licks the spicy sauce out of her finger adding more to her embarassment. He felt blessed to be loved by her. His eyes waters as he receives a rupee coin after paying for the chat.

Sang Mein Tere Laage Naya Sa, Kaam Purana Lobh Puraane (I feel newness in Your companionship, although it's the same old work and the same old greed)

She makes it quick to wipe his tears with the back of her palms. Tightly rolls his fist with the coin assuring him that everything will be alright...boosting his confidence. Gently caressing his arms promising her support throughout their journey of life.

Din Mein Hi Aa Ja Shehar Bigaadein, Jo Bhi Sochein Log Puraane (Let's spoil the city in daytime, doesn't matter what people with old mentality think)

He thanks her by tightly clutching her palm. Leaving traces of kisses as he keep it near his heart. She gives a heart winning smile. He resumes their journey securely holding her palms.

Doori Mein Tu Hi Jaag Re... Jaag Re... (In times of separation/distances, You remain awake)
Tera Chaav Laaga, Jaise Koi Ghaav Laaga... (I became fond of You as if I just got hit by a wound )

As he steps into Sharma house a lone tear escapes from his eyes witnessing the smile on everyone's face even during the most difficult time of their lives. She tightens her grip on his arms comforting him. He gets elated seeing the glint everyone's eyes as of celebrating his comeback. He slowly observed the happiness nd bonding shared among them. After dining together all steps into a peaceful slumber. He stands near the balcony watching how his loved ones were sleeping ignoring the limited facilities. There was no partition among Sharma's nd Khannas. All resembled a single family full of love. He blamed and cursed himself for their condition. As he stood there helplessly watching, she back hugs him while possessively wrapping her arms across his chest. He turn backs putting an artificial smile on his face. Though he knew that he cannot hide anything from her still he tried to appear happy nd pleasant. She looks at him intently deeply studying his eyes. He turns his gaze unable to meet hers. She pulls him quickly pecking his lips. He gets totally surprised by her action. She pouts at him seeing his reaction...

Dekh Lihaaj Ki Chaar Diwari, Phaand Li Teri Ek Ishaare (I jumped across the barrier of shame/shyness on just one signal/sign from You )

He stands there dumfounded by her antics. She shushes him by placing her index finger on his lips. He simply stands there admiring her. She ties her dupatta across his eyes. Without paying heed to his queries she guides him to the open terrace. She opens his blindfold gently. He opens his eyes to find a small bed set on the floor. She guides him towards the bed. She moves around the terrace while appreciating the cool breeze nd the starlit sky. Helping him to find happiness in little things. He pulls her towards him while gently caressing her hairs. They settle on the bed covering themselves with the blanket. He finds it difficult to adjust on the bed without a pillow cutely pouting at her..

Preet Ki Chaadar Chhoti Maili, Humne Usmein Pair Pasaare (Inside the incomplete small dirty blanket of love, I put my feet in )

She rolls her dupatta nd swiftly places it beneath his head. He thanks her while throwing a flying kiss at her. Returning him the same she rests her head on the bed. He looks at her worriedly. Sensing his worry , she chuckles nd rests her head in his arms. A heart winning smile creeps on his lips. She gently nuzzles onto his nose cuddling onto him. While he securely wraps his arm around her waist. They lay beneath the starlit sky watching the twinkling stars dreaming about a better tomorrow...

Kaafi Hai Tera Saath Re... Saath Re...(Your partnership is sufficient for me)(I don't need anything/anyone else)
Tera Chaav Laaga, Jaise Koi Ghaav Laaga... (I became fond of You as if I just got hit by a wound)

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Haseena2020 thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Dear Shinu, this OS made me to tear as much feeling content too. If this exact piece has been made into the serial it would be a bliss to watch. The way how to enacted the feeling of Shaurya, where as man you described his worry for his family , for his wife, how things going to be after this. His agony when he later regret for throwing such a hatred speech against his wife, knowing her innocent how she blindly believe all around her. Then how she protected him even from the rain and giving him the much needed assurance that all will be fine soon, she is his solace and his comfort during his hardship and now the way the end up in each others embrace, very beautiful indeed. Also you said you wrote them in a rush, but to be honest, there were very minimal grammatical errors, spelling mistakes and the plot is very nice. Kudos to your writing talent, you should write more.
have a blessed day ahead
Edited by Haseena2020 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Me four reserved 😃
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Wow thats an emotional os..Beautifully written 👏
They are going through the bad phase of their life...mehek tried supporting shaurya in every possible way..
Enjoyed reading it
The song is from which movie..?
Thanks for the pm...
Keep writing dear
Edited by friendlyghost08 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome shinu👏
Voh sare scenes ankhon ke samne dikh rahe the padthe samay bas unka unconditional love undono ko kareeb rakha mehek ko kitna bhi naffrat karo par voh pyar karana sikha dethi hi
Beautiful OS Loved it shinu
Pls write merawala😛😆
Edited by Chandana2010 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice One 😃 Shinu

The title was apt for the MehRya here😊
Edited by KashishJ - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Kya ...ane wala hai ...Shinu
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Res 😳
What is running in that tiny head Shinu 😛 😉.
Waiting waiting waiting
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Reserved lagake kahan chali gyi behan
Intehaan hogayi intezaar ki,
aayi naa kuch khabar meri Shine ki.
hai mujhe yeh yakeen,
ki lazy tum nhi ...phir wajah kya hui late hone ki🤣
sorry shine i'm not good with sayari yaar.😆

Edited by Mishtilove - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mishtilove

Reserved lagake kahan chali gyi behan

Intehaan hogayi intezaar ki,
aayi naa kuch khabar meri Shine ki.
hai mujhe yeh yakeen,
ki lazy tum nhi ...phir wajah kya huilate hone ki🤣
sorry shine i'm not good with sayari yaar.😆




Am impressed with your Shayari sweet heart...🤗
Undoubtedly I'm lazy..😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: dwriter



Am impressed with your Shayari sweet heart...🤗
Undoubtedly I'm lazy..😆

but i said u r not lazy sweetheart😆
update lao

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