FF: Meera Ka Mohan PT 13/ Pg15 The End - Page 11

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Posted: 17 years ago
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn... 👏 .. u noe im in the college library rite now and ppl r looking at me like im crazy.. it was soo beutiful hun.. im glad as well that bani had not forgiven him and gone back to him.. but ganga.. shoo shweeeeeet..just wanted to be once called daddys little girl.. great yaar.. hope u have another FF up ur sleeve.. heheheh.. 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
awww you ended it
serves jai right getting divorce from both his wives for listening to his sister and not believing his other half
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey Kanta🤗 Just read the last few parts together and i must say i relly enjoyed it story was very gripping...fast paced too.

Meera actually was a likable character here i must say loved the scene when she was talking to Ganga in the garden after she was upset over those girls laughing at her. Liked the Scene in the hospital too. 👏 Thank god Ganga didn't have cancer here.

Jai well he was just a 🤬...hated the way he spoke to Bani in front of Ganga. 😡

Tarun entered too as Bani and Meera's laywer...wow a double divorce case 👏 Lawyer ne kaam accha kiya in getting Jai to go for a DNA test 👏 👏 ...it was proved Ganga was his child.

Really good ff...loved the end. 👏 👏 Ganga wishing to spend time with her father before she headed off. Kuch pal mile Jai ko apni beti ke saath.

Super ff!

Tazoo
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Posted: 17 years ago
A note to all for the following the ff and staying till the ends. The time you took to comments is really appreciated. I am glad I finished when I did, because there is talk of Meera's character being butchered now. Sigh! 😕 Noone is sacred in KS anymore.
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey, sorry!!!

i just assumed that there would be an epilouge!!!

but now i understand why there isnt one!!!
😛

thanks
sanju
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Posted: 17 years ago
IT was befitting that both wives divorced and Justice was served. Ganga got the legal name and half his money, but all she wanted was his affection. Bani is a fool to still love him so much. Jigz is a witch.

I am glad that there is some self respect left in Ganga and Meera though.

Lovely story!


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Posted: 17 years ago
I loved the way you ended it! It was the treatment Jai Walia deserved to get... You can't always get away with the bad, it always comes back!

Ganga and Meera both characters were so well portrayed and so strong that it ws a pleasure to read something different! Loved them both!

I am glad Justice was done and everyone got what they deserved, particularly loved the way you ended it!!!

Lovely work Kanta, will be looking fwd to more!

👏 👏 👏

Shruti
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hiya!

Finally read it - took time due to the hindi 😳 😆

i was gettin into it and you ended it, loved the whole concept and the ending was sooooo good! 👏 liked the little dig tarun gave to jai about his two wives dovorcing him hehehe!

18 years old.. a massive leap loved it all seriously...

Hope u write another SS/FF. and congratulations on completing this ff! 😃

Henna x

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