SHIVIKA FF: Rage of Love... (PART 17) updated on Page 30 - Page 23

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Posted: 7 years ago
One more thing I didn't like Om explaining Gauri. It should have been a self realization. The Rikara scene is so small. It looks like they come to beach, Om tells her Annika did this and that to protect you and they leave. If you don't mind I would suggest some changes.
Before Om says Bhabhi loves you a lot insert imagine if part from my version and shift the rest of the part after that. It will look more meaningful.
Rest all was awesome like always.
Sorry for not writing everything at once. Wasn't able to do it
Update soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago
glad gauri and anika is ok
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update. Enjoyed reading it.
All is out in the open now.


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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: bworm

Nice update. Enjoyed reading it.

All is out in the open now.



thanks Bworm...😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
When are you going to conclude the story, please update when you can. What do you feel about the post leap storyline?
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Arudra1009

When are you going to conclude the story, please update when you can. What do you feel about the post leap storyline?


hopefully before end of Nov...😳

show is pretty boring these days... 😳

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