Sumitra - Bela OS : stay away

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Posted: 6 years ago
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scene after yuvi & bela's engagement

bela heads towards her room after d engagement when she found it already open , she thought maahir is inside so she closed d door but it was not maahir but sumitra in d room , bela found sumitra doing something in d room .

bela - maa aap kya kar rhi hu

sumi - kuch nhi samaan( luggage) pack kar rhi thi

B - ma mai aapki help kar deti hu

S - koi zarurat nhi hai mai khud kar lungi

bela noticed sumitra is packing maahir's stuff

B - ma ye to maahir ji ki samaan hai , aap isse kyu pack kar rhi hai..

S - kyu pack kar rhi hu matlab ? i guess bela u forgot ki tumne sabke samane kaha tha ki tumhe yuvi ke saath shaadi karni hai , ur r divorced from maahir , today only u got engage 2 yuvi ( pointing towards d engagement ring ) , to mahir ka samaan kya karenga

B - ma i m sorry

S - no bela u dont need 2 be sorry , infact i m sorry ki maine tumhe maahir se shaadi karna ke liye force kiya . any way raat bohut ho chuki hai u take rest after all ,u would be tired after d engagement

sumi left bela's room with maahir's luggage while bela look towards d empty cupboard of maahir

sumi enters d guestroom where mahir was sleeping , she kept maahir's luggage & sat near mahir who was sleeping , she ran her hand in maahir's hairs , suddenly tears start coming from sumi's eyes .

S - sorry maahir , aaj tumhari ye halat meri vajah se hai , na main bela ko tumse shaadi karne ke liye insist karti , aur na aaj tumhari ye halat hoti , maine tumhari zindagi bhi kharab kardi tumhe ek aise rishte mai band kar jo ki sirf one sided tha . i m sorry beta but i will make sure now nobody hrts u anymore or can take advantage of ur luv & thats a promise from a mother 2 her son ( with determination sumi wipes her tears )


next morning bela was in kitchen when see saw mahir retuning from morning walk .

Mahir - bhushan main room main ja rha hu plz ek glass juice room mai le aana

bhushan prepared juice 4 mahir , he was about 2 take juice 2 mahir's room when bela stops him

Bela - aap jao juice main le jaungi

before bela could hold d tray , sumi came & order bushan 2 take juice 2 mahir's room,

B - ma main le ja rhi thi

S - tum rehne do bela ,tum yuvi ke liye breakfast tayyar karo , maybe u again forgot u r engage 2 yuvi now

sumi was not letting bela do anything related 2 maahir , if she tries 2 serve mahir food sumi use 2 stop her , even sumi was not allowing bela 2 go near d shadow of mahir

sumi was in room

B - ma aapne bulaya

S - ha bela ye kuch sample hai wedding card ke , u choose which one u want , uske baad hume designer ke paas jana hai tumhari wedding outfit ki fitting ke liye , yuvi already gave it as he 2 much excited , vaise excited 2 tum bhi hogi after all yuvi is ur first & last luv, 4 him u had been waiting from past 4 months , now u wait is finally over.

B - ma aap mujhe naraz , agar aap naraz hai to plz bataiye , aapki narazgi dur karne ke liye main kya kar sakti hu

S - mahir se dur raho , ha main naraz hu par tumse nhi khud se , kyunki vo main thi jisne tumhe mahir se shaadi karne ke liye insist kiya , coz mujhe laga tum dono ek dusre ko sambhal sakte ho but i was wrong , tumhari shaadi naam ki shaadi thi , aajtak koshish sirf maahir nai ki hai , tum to sirf yuvi ka intezar kar rhi thi coz u only luved him , mahir dont matter 2 u . jabse yuvi newzaland se vapas aaya , main dekh rhi hu ki kaise tumhari prioroity yuvi hai maahir nhi , aur aacha hai tum dono ka divorce ho gaya , ek aise rishte mai rehne ka koi matlab nhi jhah pyar na ho . ek rishte ke liye do logo ko mehnat karni parti hai , mujhe pata hai aise rishte mai reh kar kaisa lagta hai jo ki one sided ho , isiliye mahir ko suffer hota hua nhi dekh sakti , anyways u & yuvi stay bless.

aur ha agar tum mere liye kuch karna hi chahti ho then stay away from maahir coz i dont want him 2 get hurt more , so plz STAY AWAY


## as i adore sumi mahir bond , so i wrote this OS .



Edited by deepikagupta9 - 6 years ago

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Mahir sumi bonding was nice
She was angry on herself
Like sumi ma POV
But I feel you should bring both mahir & bela POV as well
Overall it's different but nice
Thanks
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Kash Sumi - Mahir relationship lasts like this till end
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Posted: 6 years ago
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We can only hope sumi remain positive
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Mahir - Sumi sweet bond is the reason I want her to be positive.

Btw what happened to your other OS. I saw rose petals, after that haven't seen. Plz continue it.
Edited by Sunshine-1 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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fabulous os.. very different from others... loved it!
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nice story

Won't blame sumi if she actually behaves like this with bela

But I think sumi is going to turn out to be vikrant's Mom

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