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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: blablabla_mo7

Just caught up with the last 2 chaps. I'm still figuring where is this heading to. Quite confused and you did brilliantly confusing me more. Hahaha. Don't keep it too long, at least let Ananya and Neil have some fiery fights in between? Can't wait for these loggerheads to have sth brewing between them



Firstly, I apologize for having kept this on hold for way too long.. And secondly, for confusing you.. You will have to deal with that a bit longer, maybe! 😆

I am currently confused, Some like it fast paced, some like it fiery and feisty.. I just hope, I can keep the balance.. if not, let me know. I will try to improve and make things better.

Well, there can be a lot brewing between the two, even without settling the puzzles straight ;P

But anyways, I will try. And Thank you for taking your time out and reviewing this. It means a lot to me.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: prathe

Neil is indeed setting a trap but will the culprit easily fall to

Ananya knows danger is surrounding her but still saying to
Culprit bring it on you want to kill me and I am giving u chance either u win or I loose my life

Too good 👏yaar Neil is planning his own game n avni her own 👏
Excited😛

Let's find out, if Neil's plan works out in his favour.
Ananya is the one who wouldn't let go without a fight. So, yeah, the murderer would have a tough fight.

Thank You! They might have planned separately, but would they work separately? 😉

Hope I live upto your excitement. 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
Chapter Thirty



"I just need results," his crisp words held no room for excuse. Slouching in his seat, he exhaled as soon as he got over with the call. Ananya was a mystery and he felt decoding her could simplify this case for him. But she was a never ending mystery. She was a riddle that entangled more, each time he tried to figure her out.



'Get a grip, Neil,' he scowled at himself. His worries only deepened every time her thoughts clouded his mind. This time he had placed his bets on the information he would receive about her team and more importantly, Aman.



He had barely gotten accustomed to the thought, when the constant pounding at the main door caught his attention. The door was held under his scrutinizing gaze. His eyebrows furrowed together, while he stared. He wasn't expecting a company, especially at the odd hour of the silent night.



The knock grew louder and his suspicions rose. The answer to his questions stood on the other side of the door. Thus, without another nagging thought, he strode towards the door.


Nothing could have prepared for the sight that stood in front of him as he opened the door. His entire body went still; his fingers on the door knob froze, while his feet rooted to the ground.


'I must be hallucinating,' he thought. After all, he had been engrossed in her thoughts all day long. She was all that he thought of. Irrespective of what context it was. Be it the murder case, the murderer, the attacks or just her; she ruled his thoughts.


He slowly blinked his eyes, in a hope that she might disappear into the thin air. But she didn't. She was still standing there, red with fury. She was fuming.


"Ananya," her name rolled out in a hoarse whisper. His throat felt dry. Could he be daydreaming about her? Has she gained the power to?


It wasn't until the constables rushed behind her with their horrified expressions, fumbled on the words, "Sorry, sir! She wasn't listening."


Of course, she was there. And she confirmed it the next moment. Her palm pressed onto his chest as she pushed him aside, "Move it, Officer," she scowled. Walking past him, she welcomed herself into his apartment his territory.


"Sir," one of them spoke helplessly.


"You both could have at least informed me," he shook his head in disbelief. How much ever annoyed by her sudden appearance at his doorstep, he was, he couldn't blame the constables. She always did what she wanted to. "Anyways," he gestured them to leave and shook his head as walked inside.


She was pacing to and fro, while her fingers ran across her long tresses every now and then. It was visible that she was furious. He just didn't know the reason and he had his doubts if he wished to know. It was just a couple of hours ago, when they stood in the conference room of the NGO.




"Leave," she had ordered, while her eyes refused to leave him. The other three in the room went still. She darted her eyes at them and they left disapprovingly. Confusion crept in his mind as those words seemed to have been directed towards him, while she had signalled others to leave.


He silently stood there, watching her as the wheels of her brain turned. So, she did the calculations and realised he had a plan to have given those statements to the media. Of course, she was smart; slow at times, but smart.


The tables soon turned as he pounced on her with questions she wasn't willing to answer. As always, they had only ended up in a heated argument.





"Care to explain, what brings you here," he gritted out, "and that too at this odd hour?" Her eyes shot to meet his.


"I don't have the time for this, Officer," she retorted, marching towards him. He was left clueless but she didn't give him the time to process and warned him, "Stop digging around for information, you don't even know where you're headed to." She had stopped just a foot away from him, the flares of fuming red clearly noticeable with their faces inches apart.


"I wouldn't have had to," he grabbed her by her shoulder, involuntarily pulling her closer, he spoke, equally annoyed as he added, "if only you would drop the act and tell me the truth, damnit!"


"You already know more than what you should," she snapped back in response. He didn't wish to pry over the facts that she already knew he was snooping around to get information on her.


"Incomplete information is of no use, Ananya," his tone a slightly softer than before as he tried explaining it to her.

"Irrelevant information is of no help either, Officer," her words reflected her irritation which shot up with each passing second.


"Is it really irrelevant, Ananya?" His eyes softened as he looked intently at her, with a hopeful question. "The murderer's behind you, how is it irrelevant?"


"It doesn't know either," she blurted out. His eyes grew cautious as hers grew wide. It was something about the way he spoke, he questioned that the words stumbled out even before she could control herself.


"What are you hiding?" His questioning words washed over her skin, while she felt an unknown, unidentified emotion churning within her. Her shoulders dropped and she blew out air. "Nothing that you wouldn't, she shrugged in defeat, settling onto the couch.


It did nothing but irked him further, she wasn't talking straight. "Could you for once start answering straight and on point? he slumped onto the chair while his words held seriousness.


"I am a private detective working for a private investigation agency, Officer, she scowled at him and continued as she glared furiously at him, "and you surely know that by now. He nodded his head in affirmation.


"My team is working on a case, she continued, carefully choosing her words. Her eyelashes lowered and her gaze roamed over the floor as she pressed her lips together.


"What case is it? he countered as he found her silence an indication that she no longer was willing to explain further.





*


Firstly, apologies for having delayed this for almost a month. I didn't intend to but things had been pretty confusing for me. I had received reviews that stated that the chapters no longer were no longer fast paced as the previous ones. So, I had to get the balance and sit back and see what really went wrong.. that actually took quite an amount of time.

Secondly, I am not sure how well this chapter has come out and if it had even matched your expectations. But I am hoping this serves the blend of answers yet holding onto the mystery right in place. If that's done, the chapter is quite in place, then.

We have the funds raiser starting up in a chapter or two. So gear up.

About updates, I guess, I am going to go a little slow.. and cut the updates as once a week.. or maybe once in two weeks.
Edited by -shenz- - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: prathe

Game has started now😉

If I may say so! 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: -shenz-

If I may say so! 😆

Kuch toh gadbad hai 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: prathe

Kuch toh gadbad hai 😆

Gadbad? Are we going down the CID path? 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hehe just saying 😆 yeah line toh cid ki chipkali😛
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: prathe

Hehe just saying 😆 yeah line toh cid ki chipkali😛

Hehehe! I know! 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Tumpa12

interesting

update soon

Thanks!

Hopefully, the coming week, I will have the next update.
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Posted: 7 years ago


Chapter Thirty-One



The room was flooded with people rushing in and out, simply preparing for the fund raisers. Neil, however, had his eyes hunting for only one. Ananya Verma. And his eyes finally landed on her. Surrounded with a team of volunteers, she was busy instructing them. He mindlessly moved in her direction. There was so much that ran through his mind. The conversation from the previous night was freshly etched in his mind.

The feeling of being watched wasn't unknown to Ananya. She could feel his eyes boring at her while she tried to bury her head in the pile of work. And she had succeeded to an extent. However, the moment was short lived.
The tap on her shoulder had her turning on her heels as she saw him. In an instant, her eyes dropped and she avoided contact with his. She had revealed way more than what he should have known. The guilt weighed upon her as she tried to come up with reasons and excuses to justify her actions. But deep down, she knew there were none. He was just able to push all her wrong buttons to make her react so unlike her. She certainly wouldn't be able to stand there for long before he started with another set of questions.
"I have a lot of work to look at, I will see you later, Officer," using as an excuse, she dashed out of the room. He couldn't help but stare at her retreating figure.


*

"My team is working on a case," she had informed him.

His heart rate picked up as he countered, "What case is it?"

It only worked him up as she stray her eyes away from his, not bothering to answer him. "I am asking you something," his words came put a bit harsher than he intended to. But she did that to him. She always left him hanging for answers. He wasn't the one who knocked at her doorstep for answers. Not this time. It was her and he wouldn't let her back out.

"Confidential," she muttered, audible enough to reach his ears.

"Ananya," her name rolled out of his lips laced with warning.

"I am not here to answer your questions," she shot up, staring down at him as she continued, "I was here to warn you and I have done so," her eyes looked up at the door.

She had barely moved a few steps when his fingers wrapped around her elbow and he jerked her to a halt. "You can't walk away every time," swirling her, he made her face him. The jolt landed her in his arms, close enough to have her breath quicken. She was enraged.

"I do what I wish to," she gritted, fidgeting to get away.

"Answer me and you are free to leave," he informed.

"Don't," she looked him dead in the eye.

It took a lot of convincing before she actually spoke about the case. Stunned, that there was so much more to this case than just the murders. The fact that they were dealing with a mastermind of crime, who almost dealt in every possible criminal activity one could think of, was way more terrifying.

The criminal activities surfaced and came to their notice when the residents at NGO were appointed for jobs and could not be contacted after a certain period of time. During the investigation of those missing residents, a lot of other facts surfaced and the team was able to get to the root cause of the crimes. That's when their members and informers were attacked. At first, it was death threats but they neglected all of that and moved ahead with their investigation.

"That's where we went wrong," Ananya slumped in his arms. Defeated, her eyes held the wounds of their decisions.

Of course, a criminal mastermind would have gotten to know about the team snooping around. But in its quest to get rid of the team, it also killed a few innocent lives; the ones who were not even remotely related to the case.

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Her confessions were validated by the informer. Surely, he had gotten hands on more information than just what she had handed him over. But since nothing of that was related to the case, he wasn't going to hold that against her. However, there were still missing pieces to this puzzle of murder mystery.
He wanted to know so much more. The thought that the criminal mastermind could have appointed someone to plot all those murders and get rid of her too, suffocated him. The need to know, if they had suspects of who the mastermind could be, was strong. There were so many questions that ran across his mind and the only one who could answer him was, Ananya.
He marched towards the direction she had taken off. The hustle and chaotic atmosphere of an upcoming event subdued as he walked through the corridor. Strange,' his face scrunched in distaste at the thought. As he walked farther, his eyes settled onto the door at the end of the corridor. It was left ajar. The slight creek between the door and the door frame gave him a good peek into the room and his gaze fell on the huge screens.
"Snooping around doesn't suit you well for the position you hold, the voice boomed over him through the speakers and the door flew wide open. Like a deer caught in the headlight, his eyes widened yet he managed a goofy smile.




I don't have much to say. So I will leave you all with this. Do let me know your thoughts and opinions on the recent revelations.

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