Our love (part posted on 7th sept)

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Part 4:-

At thapki's house,

Bihaan and thapki are in car.thapki is in shock state.not saying anything.

Bihaan stop the car which bring her in sense.

Bihaan:hum tumhare ghar mein aaya gaye hain.

Thapki look around.then look at bihaan.she didnt say anything just come out of car.

Bihaan also come out of his car and give her luggages.

Bihaan:dekho jo kuch bhi hua usse hum badal nahi sakte lekin isse katam karte hain.

Iss shaadi mein na mere marzi the aur na tumhare.toh acha yeh he hoga ke hum iss rishte ko katam karde.

Main divorce paper bejj dunga.

Saying that bihaan sit on his car and thapki dont say anything.

She enter to the house.vasu hug thapki cryingingly.bauji also sad.they knew what happen with thapki there from her collagues.

Vasu:beta tum aram karo main tumhare liye khana le aayte ho.

Thapki dont say anything and hust leaves.

At bihaan's house,

Shaddha see bihaan tensed after he coming from village.bihaan left for office.

Shaddha call bihaan's pa and get to know what happened.

She get happy that bihaan get married.

Shaddha come to tina who is drawing with her colors.

Shaddha:beta chalo bahar..

Tina:kaha bua..

Shaddha:tumhare mumma ke pas.

Tina:mumma ke pas.

Shaddha:haan jo tumse bohat pyaar karegye.

Chalo abhi.

At thapki's house,

Thapki come out of washroom after bath.she see herself in mirror.

She get flashes from her marriage which disturb her.

Thapki:jitna soch the ho ke uss baremein na socho utna he yeh saare baatein yaad aayte hain.

"Ma..." a voice come from behind.

Thapki turn and find tina standing with shaddha.tina run to thapki and hug her tightly.

Thapki feels her heart beat really fast.

Precap:thapki in pandey niwas.

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Fariha2908

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Part 5:-

At thapki's house,

Bihaan and thapki are in car.thapki is in shock state.not saying anything.

Bihaan stop the car which bring her in sense.

Bihaan:hum tumhare ghar mein aaya gaye hain.

Thapki look around.then look at bihaan.she didnt say anything just come out of car.

Bihaan also come out of his car and give her luggages.

Bihaan:dekho jo kuch bhi hua usse hum badal nahi sakte lekin isse katam karte hain.

Iss shaadi mein na mere marzi the aur na tumhare.toh acha yeh he hoga ke hum iss rishte ko katam karde.

Main divorce paper bejj dunga.

Saying that bihaan sit on his car and thapki dont say anything.

She enter to the house.vasu hug thapki cryingingly.bauji also sad.they knew what happen with thapki there from her collagues.

Vasu:beta tum aram karo main tumhare liye khana le aayte ho.

Thapki dont say anything and hust leaves.

At bihaan's house,

Shaddha see bihaan tensed after he coming from village.bihaan left for office.

Shaddha call bihaan's pa and get to know what happened.

She get happy that bihaan get married.

Shaddha come to tina who is drawing with her colors.

Shaddha:beta chalo bahar..

Tina:kaha bua..

Shaddha:tumhare mumma ke pas.

Tina:mumma ke pas.

Shaddha:haan jo tumse bohat pyaar karegye.

Chalo abhi.

At thapki's house,

Thapki come out of washroom after bath.she see herself in mirror.

She get flashes from her marriage which disturb her.

Thapki:jitna soch the ho ke uss baremein na socho utna he yeh saare baatein yaad aayte hain.

"Ma..." a voice come from behind.

Thapki turn and find tina standing with shaddha.tina run to thapki and hug her tightly.

Thapki feels her heart beat really fast.

Precap:thapki in pandey niwas

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Aisha

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Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Really nice part. So Thapki will come to PN for the sake of Tina. Waiting to see how Bihaan agrees to that

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Upasna

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Posted: 7 years ago

#14

Shraddha will convince Thapki to come to their house for Tina. Is it fair to Thapki to be the wife of Bihaan?

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Fariha2908

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Part 6:-
At bihaan's cabin,
All marriages thing going on bihaan's mind which fed up him.
Bihaan:jitna soch ta ho ke uss bare mein naa socho utna he yeh saare baatein yaad aayte hai.
I need a drink.
Bihaan left for bar.
At home,
Thapki set her cloths in cupbroad.
Tina:mumma abhi aap humare saath he rahoge na.
Thapki:haan beta ab main humedha aapne beti ke saath rahonge
Tina:yeh...
Shaddha come there.
Shaddha:tina,tv pe tumhara favourite carton aaye hai.nahi dekh na kya.
Tina:haan.
Tina leaves.
Shaddha:thanks thapki ke tum iss ghar mein aaye sach mein abhi mujhe bohat acha lag raha hai ke mere bhai ke zindegi mein koi hain.jo usse bohat kush rakhe gye.
Thap ki:waise tumhare bhai aayenge kab.
Shaddha:pata nahi kab aayenge ya nahi.
Thapki understand what she means.

At bar,
Bihaan is drinking when a girl come to him amd firt with him.he smile and talk her.
In car,
When bihaan coming close to the girl.
Thapki's face come on his mind,he get disturb and asked the girl to leaves.
He himself surprised with his behaviour.
Bihaan come to his home.he sit down on sofa.and closed his eyes.
Thapki come there with water.
Thapki:yeh le giye paani.
Bihaan shovkingly open his eyes and see thapki there.
Bihaan:tum...
Tum yahan kya kar rahe ho..
He shout.
Thapki:woh woh..
Shaddha come there.
Shaddha:main laye ho isse.
Bihaan:shaddha tum.
Shaddha:haan main mujhe aapke shaadi ke barein sab pata chal gaya hai.
Aur ab se thapki yehe rahe gye.
Bihaan:paar kyu.
Main yeh shaadi annual kar raha ho.
Thapki:tum yesa nahi karo gye.
Bihaan:kyu kyu nahi karunge.
Thapki:kyu ki main yeh keh rahe ho.
Samjhe.
Bihaan:you...
Thapki:fresh ho jao.kapde rakhe hain main ne.
Bihaan:mere ghar mein mujh pe hukum jama raha ho.
Thapki:yeh mera bhi ghar hain shaadi kiya hai tumne.
Bihaan:kya afat hai.
Bihaan leaves.

At room,
Bihaan is sitting on his bed.
Bihaan:yeh ladki bhi na mere ghar pe chale aaye sab samjh tha ho paiso ke liye aaye hain.
Abhi ek blank cheak isske mouh pe marke aayta ho.
Bihaan was leaving the room when thapki enter the room with tina who is sleeping on thapki's lap.
Thapki look at him and then place tina on bed.
Bihaan:what the hell?
Tum log mere bedroom mein kya kar rahe ho.
Thapki:badminton khel rahe hain.
Dekhta nahi hai kya tumhe soone aaye hai.
Bihaan:kyu iss ghar ke baki rooms mein kya chohe billi bare hain.
Thapki:pati patni ek saath he soote hain
Bihaan:what the hell?tum yahan nahi soo sakte mere bedroom mein.
Thapki lie down on bed.
Thapki:woh toh mein soo chuke.
Tumhe problem hain toh tum jao bahar soo.
Bihaan:yeh mera room hain main uahan se kahe nahi jaane wala.
Thapki:toh main bhi nahi jaane wali samjhe.
Waise yeh bed bohat chota hai.
Hume soone mein taklif hoge teen log sone mein.
Bihaan smile and lie down on bed
Bihaan:soine mein taklif hoge na tabhi sudroge tum.
Bihaan sleep on bed with tina and thapki.she smile its her trick.
Tina is sleeping between them.
Thapki:dekh na bihaan dere dere sab thik hoga.
Precap:mission bihaan sudaro.

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Thapki agreed to come to Bihaan's house to make him a better person. Hopefully, now he will accept Tina and give her the love she wants from her dad. But I fear that Thapki will go once her mission will be over.

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Fariha2908

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Part 7
At bihaan's cabin,
All marriages thing going on bihaan's mind which fed up him.
Bihaan:jitna soch ta ho ke uss bare mein naa socho utna he yeh saare baatein yaad aayte hai.
I need a drink.
Bihaan left for bar.
At home,
Thapki set her cloths in cupbroad.
Tina:mumma abhi aap humare saath he rahoge na.
Thapki:haan beta ab main humedha aapne beti ke saath rahonge
Tina:yeh...
Shaddha come there.
Shaddha:tina,tv pe tumhara favourite carton aaye hai.nahi dekh na kya.
Tina:haan.
Tina leaves.
Shaddha:thanks thapki ke tum iss ghar mein aaye sach mein abhi mujhe bohat acha lag raha hai ke mere bhai ke zindegi mein koi hain.jo usse bohat kush rakhe gye.
Thap ki:waise tumhare bhai aayenge kab.
Shaddha:pata nahi kab aayenge ya nahi.
Thapki understand what she means.

At bar,
Bihaan is drinking when a girl come to him amd firt with him.he smile and talk her.
In car,
When bihaan coming close to the girl.
Thapki's face come on his mind,he get disturb and asked the girl to leaves.
He himself surprised with his behaviour.
Bihaan come to his home.he sit down on sofa.and closed his eyes.
Thapki come there with water.
Thapki:yeh le giye paani.
Bihaan shovkingly open his eyes and see thapki there.
Bihaan:tum...
Tum yahan kya kar rahe ho..
He shout.
Thapki:woh woh..
Shaddha come there.
Shaddha:main laye ho isse.
Bihaan:shaddha tum.
Shaddha:haan main mujhe aapke shaadi ke barein sab pata chal gaya hai.
Aur ab se thapki yehe rahe gye.
Bihaan:paar kyu.
Main yeh shaadi annual kar raha ho.
Thapki:tum yesa nahi karo gye.
Bihaan:kyu kyu nahi karunge.
Thapki:kyu ki main yeh keh rahe ho.
Samjhe.
Bihaan:you...
Thapki:fresh ho jao.kapde rakhe hain main ne.
Bihaan:mere ghar mein mujh pe hukum jama raha ho.
Thapki:yeh mera bhi ghar hain shaadi kiya hai tumne.
Bihaan:kya afat hai.
Bihaan leaves.

At room,
Bihaan is sitting on his bed.
Bihaan:yeh ladki bhi na mere ghar pe chale aaye sab samjh tha ho paiso ke liye aaye hain.
Abhi ek blank cheak isske mouh pe marke aayta ho.
Bihaan was leaving the room when thapki enter the room with tina who is sleeping on thapki's lap.
Thapki look at him and then place tina on bed.
Bihaan:what the hell?
Tum log mere bedroom mein kya kar rahe ho.
Thapki:badminton khel rahe hain.
Dekhta nahi hai kya tumhe soone aaye hai.
Bihaan:kyu iss ghar ke baki rooms mein kya chohe billi bare hain.
Thapki:pati patni ek saath he soote hain
Bihaan:what the hell?tum yahan nahi soo sakte mere bedroom mein.
Thapki lie down on bed.
Thapki:woh toh mein soo chuke.
Tumhe problem hain toh tum jao bahar soo.
Bihaan:yeh mera room hain main uahan se kahe nahi jaane wala.
Thapki:toh main bhi nahi jaane wali samjhe.
Waise yeh bed bohat chota hai.
Hume soone mein taklif hoge teen log sone mein.
Bihaan smile and lie down on bed
Bihaan:soine mein taklif hoge na tabhi sudroge tum.
Bihaan sleep on bed with tina and thapki.she smile its her trick.
Tina is sleeping between them.
Thapki:dekh na bihaan dere dere sab thik hoga.
Precap:mission bihaan sudaro.

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Part 8:-

Next morning,

Bihaan is wake up and see the scenorie.thapki and tina sleeping while hugging each other.

Bihaan see thapki's hair come on her face which disturbing her sleep.he unknowingly move toward thapki and remove her hair and admired her.soon reality hit him.

He come to washroom and look at himself at mirror.

Bihaan:kya kar raha tha main usse yesa pyaar se kyu dekh raha tha.

Bihaan pandey just relax..

Woh ladki bas yahan paiso ke liye aaye hai.

Saare ladki ek jaise hote hai.

Chahe woh sheena...

Remembering sheena,bihaan's blood boils.

He come out and see thapki setting somethong on cupbroad.

Thapki:oh tum bahar aagya.chalo ab main naah lete ho.

Bihaan get angry and pinned her on wall.

Thapki:bihaan yeh tum kya kar rahe ho.

Bihaan:wahe toh main jana chata ho ke tum kya kar rahe ho.

Yeh patni bane ka natak kyu.

Thapki:koi naatk nahi hain tum bhi jante ho ke tumne mujse shaadi ki hai patni ho main tumhare.

Bihaan:yeh shaadi toh mein manta he nahi..

Kyu yeh pati patni kya naatk chal raha hain.

Maine bola tha na main yeh shaadi annual karna wala ho.

Paar tum yahan mere ghar tak chale aaye.

Ache se jaanta ho kyu aaye ho tum mujse paise niklne.

Am i right.

Thapki:wrong...

Main yahan iss liye aaye ho ke yeh abhi mera ghar hain mera parivaar aur ab main yahe rahunge.

Bihaan:toh raho naa magar yeh patni hone kya natak chorke.

Thapki:patni ho tumhare aur yeh sach nahi badal sakta.

Sayinging that thapki leaves for bathroom.

At breakfast table,

Bihaan is enjoy his breakfast.its delisious.

Bihaan:arre wah kaka aaj toh aapne kamal kya khana banya.

Bihat he acha hain.

Kaka:yeh hume nahi bahurani na banaya hain.

Thapki come there and smile.bihaan get irrted and said.

Bihaan:kya bakwas khana hai na koi shaud hai naa koi...

He is finding words.thapki look at him naughtily.

Bihaan:pura mood kharab ho gaya.

Hum abhi office jaake he breakfast karenge.

Bihaan leaves.shaddha come to thapki.

Shaddha:bhai ab dhere dhere tumhare kareb ho rahe hain.

Thapki:lekin abhi bhi bohat door hain.

Shaddha:yeh dooriyan bhi jaldi mit jaye gye.

Thapki:usse din kya to intezar hain.

Waise tum nasta karlo abhi tumhare bhai ne tarreeff aur gussa dunno kar gaye.

They both laugh.

At night,

Thapki and tina on sofa.doing some painting.bihaan come to home and see them.

Thapki:arre wah tina toh bohat ache painting karte hai.

Shaddha also come there.

Shaddha:bilkul bhai ke tarh,bhaibko bhi painting karna bihat acha lagta hain.aur woh bohat acha bhi karte hain.

Arre bhai aap aaya gaya,humne toh dinner kar liye.aap late ho.

Thapki:main aapko serve kar dete ho.

Aaj saara khana maine bana yah hain.

Bihaan:tum doctor ho yahan cook,jo har waqt khana bana the rahte hoon.

Hume nahi khana.

Hum chale soone.

Bihaan leaves.

At night,

Bihaan wake up from sleep being hungry.he see thapki is sleeping with tina.

Bihaan:iss ke chakar mein raat kya khana he nahi khaya.

Bihaan leaves from there.thapki wake up and follow him.

Bihaan come to kittchen and take out food and start eatting.

Bihaan:waise khana banate hai bohat acha yeh thapki.

The kittchen lights get on.bihaan see thapki and shaddha standing on there.have a naughty smile in their face.

Precap:days passes.

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