Our love (part posted on 7th sept)

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Fariha2908

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Posted: 7 years ago

Thahaan ff our love
Intro:-
Bihaan pandey:a sussesful bussiness man in noida.lives with his daughter tina and sister shaddha.he hate women and become womenizer after his wife betray him.
Thapki:a orphan who lives in orphange.she is a doctor.a strong and determind girl.
Shaddha:a sweet girl who wants her brother to be same loving person like before.
Tina pandey:3 year old little girl who loves her papa a lot but her papa always ignore her.
(guys,give comments a lot,i will post 1st part soon)

Edited by Fariha2908 - 7 years ago

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Upasna

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Posted: 7 years ago

Bihaan as a womanizer is too hard to imagine.

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Aisha

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Posted: 7 years ago

Finally intro is out. Now waiting for the first part. Plz post soon

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Fariha2908

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Posted: 7 years ago

Part 1:-

At morning,

The sky is dark for the rain.the storm just be come.

A beautiful girl standing at the window and enjoying this view of nature.

She is our thapki.thapki take a silp of coffee and smile and watch the atmoshphera.

Suddenly someine shouting on her name.she run down stair and shocked to see the view.

A man holding his hand on his chest and a women holding him.its bauji and vasundra.

Thapki:bauji kya hua aapko.

Vasu:pata nahi mujse baat karte karte kya ho gaya innhe dill pe hor lag raha hain

Thapki:mujhe lagta hai ke yeh heart attack hain.

Jaldi inn he hospital le jaana hoga.

At road,

Thapki is calling for taxi and vehicles but no use.she is suparb tensed.

A car coming from otherside..she place her hand for lift.

The car stop.

Thapki:please humare madat ke ji unhe heart attack hua hai hospital le jaana bohat jaruri hain

The guy is none other than is bihaan pandey.

Bihaan look at bauji and nod yes.

He help her to sit bauji on car and went to hospital.

Atfer reaching hospital,

Thapki take bauji inside without saying anything.

Bihaan also didnt stay there but left from there.

At pamdey mansion,

Bihaan reach at his house and se his sister waiting for him.

Shaddha:bhai aap kaha the mein litne pareshan the.kaha the aap raat ko.

Bihaan:tum jante ho main kaha tha.

Shaddha get sad.

Bihaan drinking water.

Shaddha:kab tak aap dusre ladkiyun ke zindegi barbaat karte raho gye

Bihaan get angry.and throw the glass of water on floor.

Bihaan :main kisi ke zindegi barbaat nahi karta samjhe

Woh mean ladkiyan aapne marzi see mere saath aayte hai bed pe samjhe.

Shaddha:mama ke aap ke saath galat hua hai paar aap aane saath kyu galat hone de rahe ho.

Bihaan dont say anything and left forom there.as he enter in his room and sit on the bed.

He feel two tiny hand on his shoulder.he look back.and find his daughter tina.

Tina:papa aap kaha the..

Mela aaj bidthday hai aapk dhul toh nahi gaye.

Tina is 3 years hild so she talk like this.

Bihan hold her hand and shout on shaddha who come there.

Bihaan:yeh ladki mere kamre mein kya kar rahe hain.

Le jao isse..

Shaddha:tina beta tum mere room mrin jao main abhi aayte ho.

Tina leaves from there cryingly.

Shaddha:bhai,aap tina ke saath yesa kyu karte ho woh aapke beti hain.

Bihaan:magar woh aapne ma sheena ke bhi beti hai.jab bhi main usse dekhta ho mujhe ussme sheena kya dhoka yaad aayta hain.

Saying that bihaan left for wash room.

Precap:thapki and bihaan 2nd meet.

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Fariha2908

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Posted: 7 years ago

Part 2:-

Tina is crying on shaddha's lap.

Tina:papa mujhe humesha datte kyu hain.mujse woh bilkul pyaar nahi karte.

Shaddha:nahi beta..papa tumse bohat pyaar karte ho aur kyu na kare tum ho he itne pyaari.

Tina:jooth bol rahe ho aap na.

Shaddha:nahi..

Shaddha hug tina and composed her.

At orpanege,

Thapki:thank god ke bauji ko heart attack nahi aaya varna main toh darr he gaye the.

Vasu:bala ho woh ladke kya jis ne hume lift de.varna kya hota.

Thapki:haan ma sahi kaha maine toh unhe thik se thanks bhi nahi bo paye.

At bihaan's office,

Bihaan's pa come to him.

Pa:sir hum jo high way project bana chate the gooda village se woh band ho gaya hain.gaonwale ne rok ke rakha hain.

Bihaan:tum ek kaam karo saare tayari kar lo.hum aajhe yahan jaayenge.

Pa:ok sir.

At orpengae,

Thapki get a fax and get happy.

Vasu:are thapki kya hua bohat kush lag rahe ho.

Thapki:ma..hume finally gooda gaon mein medical camp karne ki premission mill gaye aaj he nikal na hoga.

Thapki and bihaan photo are shown.

Precap:2nd merting

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Upasna

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Posted: 7 years ago

Thapki will get a chance to thank Bihaan. Will Bihaan even recognise her?

So it is Sheena who betray Bihaan. Bihaan should not behave like this with Tina. The way he hates Sheena, later Tina will hate him like this. Thapki's entry in his life is going to change this.

Shraddha will be a friend to Thapki.

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Fariha2908

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Posted: 7 years ago

At orpenage,
Thapki handover money to vasu.
Thapk:yeh le gye mere salary ke paise aap isse jarurat kya saman le aaye gya.
Vasu:beta tu aapne kamai ka paise saara hume kyu de dete hain.
Thapki:aap aur bauji toh hain mere sab se bafe kamai aap log agar naho hote toh na jaane mera kya hota.

Mere aapno ne he toh sayad mujhe raaste pe chorke ke chale gaye the.
Aap aur bauji mujhe wahan se le aaye aur mujhe ek naye zindegi de.
Vasu:ab purane baatein chor aur naye baat sunn.
Thapki:kya.
Vasu:tere liye ek rishta aaya hain.
Thapki:bilkul nahi main shaadi nahi karunge.
Vasu:par kyu.
Thapki:pata nahi..
She laughed.
Thapki:mera bus kya time ho gaya hain main nikal the ho.
Okey bye.
Thapki leaves.
(She dont know that in this trip her whole life going to change.)
At pandey niwas,
Bihaan pack his bag.shaddha come there.
Shaddha:bhai aap kahe jaa rahe ho.
Bihaan:haan kuch din ke liye sher se
bahar mere naye project ke liye.
Tum aapna aur tin..
Bihaan stop and shaddha smile.
Shaddha:aap tina se bohat pyaar karte ho na bhai bas jaata te nahi ho.
Kyu...
Bihaan dont say anything but leaves.
Bihaan sitting on car.little tina ftom balcony,Waves him bye.
But bihaan dont respond which heartbroken tina.
At village,
Thapki set her medical camp well and her work going on well.and here bihaan is also same village near the camp.
He is open bridge but villagers dont agree.bihaan trying to understand them that its for their good.
But no succeed.
At cottage,
Bihaan to his pa.
Bihaan:aman,kya hai yeh sab yeh log toh raazi he nahi hote hai.
Suddenly he get dazed.aman hold him.
Aman:sir aap thik ho.
Bihaan:haan.
Aman check bihaan.
Aman:oh my god sir,aap ko toh bohat bukhar hai.main doctor bulata ho.
Bihaan:nahi nahi mujhe village doctor pe koi barosha nahi hain.
Aman:nahi sir pas mein noida se medical team aaye hoi hain medical camp ke liye.
Hum yahan se laa aayte hain.
Aman leaves.

Doctor come with aman who is none other than is thapki.
Thapki see bihaan lie on bed.she remember he is the same person who helped her on the day.
Thapki treat bihaan happily.
Thapki:mr pandey,yeh injection dene ke baad aap kafi haad tak thik ho
jayenge.
Bihaan:kya main aapko jaanta ho.
Thapki:haan uss din aapne mere aur mere bauji ke madat ke thi.
Yaad hain.
Thanks ke aapne uss din humare madat ke
Bihaan remember.
Bihaan:haan yaad aaya.
Thapki:yeh injection thoda drugy hain aapko bohat neend aaye gye aap aram se soo gaye abhi.
Abhi mein chalte ho.
Thapki was leaving when bihaan hold her hand.
Thapki turn and look on.
Bihaan stand up difficultly.he look at thapki and hug her tightly.
Thapki get shocked.
Precap:unexpected.

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Fariha2908

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Posted: 7 years ago

Part 3:-

Thapki is shocked with sudden hug of bihaan.before she can do anything.

She hear his murmuring.

Bihaan:please sheena,yesa maat karo humare bade mein na socho magar tina ke bade mein socho woh choti se bache hai.

Usse abhi apne ma ke bihat zarurat hain.please hume chorkar maat jao.

Thapki realise that its bcoz of the medicine drug for which he lose her sense.she carefully put him on bed and asked to sleep.

Bihaan:nahi main soo jaunga toh phir tum chale jao gye na.

Thapki:nahi..

Bihaan:pakka.

Thapki:pajka.

Thapki smile at his childishness.

Thapki stand up to leaves when amar enter there.

Thapki:acha hua abhi aap chale aaye.aap innke pas rahe yeh aur agar zarurat pare toh mujhe bulaye gya.

Aman:maam sir ke halat abhi thik nahi hui hain aur bahar bohat bafish hain.

Paani bhi hai.aap abhi na jaa sakte.

Thapki:koi baat nahi main chale jaunge.

That time thunder falls.which scare her.and she decided to stay there.

Thapki sit on tool and stare bihaan who is sleeping.unknowning a smile appear on her lips.he remember how he hug him.

Soon sleep take over her.

At morning,

Thapki is sleeping.bihaan wake up and surprsed to see thapki there.then remember what happen in last night.

He see that her hair coming on her face which disturb her sleep.

His hand unknowing when to her hair and remove it.

Dil Diyan Gallan Lyrics

Kacchi doriyon, doriyon, doriyon se

Mainu tu baandh le

Pakki yaariyon, yaariyon, yaariyon mein

Honde na faasley

Eh naraazgi kaagzi saari teri

Mere sohneya sunn le meri

Dil diyan gallan

Karaange naal naal beh ke

Akh naal akh nu milaa ke

Dil diyan gallan haaye...

Karaange roz roz beh ke

Sacchiyan mohabbataan nibha ke

Sataaye mainu kyun

Dikhaaye mainu kyun

Aiven jhuthi mutthi russ ke rusaake

Dil diyan gallan haaye

Karaange naal naal beh ke

Akh naal akh nu mila ke

Bihaan mesmerzied seeing thapki.

The door open with a thud.which wake thapki also.its aman.

Bihaan:tumhe ander aanye ke tameez nahi hain kya.

Aman:sir woh bahar.

When they hear village sound.

"Baahar niklo"

Thapki:yeh awazz kis ke hain.kya hua baahr .

Aman tell them everything ehich shocked them.

Bihaan:yeh log pagal hain kya kuch bhi soch lete hain.

They went out.

People:tum logo ne bina shaadi ke ek saath pura raat guzare ho.

Thapki:dekhe yeh aap log galat samjh rahe hain.main bas yahan unke ilaz ke liye aaye the.

Bihaan:haan woh main bimar tha.

People:woh sab hum nahi jaante magar yeh jaante hain ke tumne yahan ke rule thoda iss ke saza yehe hain ke tum dunno ko shaadi karne hoge.

Bihaan:are you guys mad.kuch bhi.woh yahan mere madat ke liye aaye hui the.

Main abhi police ko call karta ho.

But they is no network.

Someone snatch there phone.

People:tum log humare baat mante ho yaa hum tumhare jaan le le.

They take out sword.seeing all this thapki 's eyes get teary.bihaan see her with pity eyes.

And the say.

Bihaan:thik hain..

Thapki get shocked and look at bihaan.

At mandir,

Thapki sit beside bihaan.panditji rectite mantar.thapki and bihaan stamd up for phere they do it.

Bihaan tries mangalsutra on thapki's neck.applies sindoor on her maang

Tadev Lagnam Suridam Tadev

Naarabalam Chandra Balan Tadev

Vidya Balam Daiv Balan Tadev

Lakshmi Pate Tendra Yugam Swarami

Shubmangal Sawadhan.

Thapki and bihaan finally get married.

Precap:what will happen will they accept each other.

You guys tell.

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Upasna

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Posted: 7 years ago

Bihaan will annul the wedding.

I thought that it would be Thapki who will start feeling soemthing for Bihaan but now looks like it is the inverse that will happen.

These villagers are crazy. Both Thapki and Bihaan came there to help them but they are saying such bad things to them. They even forced them to get married.

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Aisha

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Posted: 7 years ago

#10

I read all parts together. Story bohat fast hai. SHadi b ho gaee wo b zabardasti. Zahir hai aik dam tou kuch nhn hoga but aagay shayad dono ko pyaa ho hi jaye.

Next part jaldi post karna plz

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