FF: Jaane Doh Naa Epilogue Pg 55 [Sept 12,'13]

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gprs

@gprs

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#451

wow..it's a fantastic story..I read the prologue before I read the silent whispers..but I didn't have the mind to continue it as it deals with redemption track..what a stupid idea that was..

I'm glad I read this..you did justice to the word redemption excellently..I love how you made khushi independent and I love Ayesha..they are just the best part of story..

you made each character very clear and somehow I agree with Ayesha points about Raizadas..Why can't I just hate Arnav..the man always passed through the hate part ..his realization, fight for forgiveness, gratitude for Ayesha, withdrawal from khushi, finally accepting his love , I just couldn't stop thinking about his feelings throughout reading the story..

once I too thought khushi will be good without him..but after all I'm a fan to this complicated people..like khushi I too changed myself...like you explained I too felt payal is not the same to khushi as Anjali is to Arnav..You explained anjali well in the words of Ayesha to Khushi..I'm happy that you paired Ayesha with Aman..I loved this story..thank you for sharing this with us..

you are an amazing writer!! hearty wishes for your happy life!!

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premlata

@Missu_TR

Inactive

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Posted: 8 years ago

#452

beautiful ff
love it all parts beautiful described

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bellarosa

@bellarosa

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#453

Awesome story

Love it a lot

👏

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Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#454

Very interesting story...
I enjoyed reading it..
so much emotions put to test
finally to get happiness

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pran28671

@pran28671

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#455

Such a wonderful story and concept this was.
Thoroughly enjoyed reading it.
Beautiful ending.

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gprs

@gprs

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#456

reread this wonderful work..one of the few stories did justice to the redemption track..not only Arnav,this fiction shows the emotions of family members too..Anjali's limited talk with family,nani's breakdown in front of Arnav,Payal's jealous on seeing Ayesha and the realization,Mami _Ayesha talk are some of my favorite scenes..

Arnav's attempt and acceptence for Khushi's present and how he embedded himself with her,his quirky talks with Ayesha,Aman-Ayesha talks are awesome..

this journey touched so many different emotions..initially from asking forgiveness to accept her changed nature,finding his old Khushi behind the masks,withdrawing himself when she decided to move forward,Khushi is just as much as complex as Arnav here..

the last few chapters are amazing..how Khushi is insecured and Arnav proven his love for her,how Arnav understand Ayesha's need for having a family for herself..especially in the epilogue,khushi's way of showing things to arnav is just brilliant👏👏

An Amazing story👏👏Thanks a lot for such a good story

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Liyosa

@Liyosa

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

#457

You are one hell of writers I come across dear I can't describe it work it's just beyond and the way I portrayed the emotions just awesome really enjoyed it.

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KRISGEET

@KRISGEET

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#458

Wow. What a lovely FF 👏

Am feeling sorry that I wasnt on IF when this story was being written. you have a way with words. You have actually made the characters seem more real rather than idolising them.

All of them seemed real with real emotions n feelings. Ayesha taking the lead amongst them. Found her character to be refreshing.

Edited by KRISGEET - 7 years ago