Adiya FF : Nishidh- A forbidden love story(chapter 3) Updated

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Posted: 7 years ago

Nishidh- A forbidden love story

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Nishidh- A forbidden love story, set in the early 1900 tells the story about two individuals, Suchitra (Jennifer winget) and Aditya (Harshad Chopda).

Nishidh tells you the story of 21 year old Bengali girl, Suchitra, who used to live in a small village of Calcutta. In order to support her old widowed mother and 3 younger sisters she agrees to marry the 50 year old landlord Omarnath Thakur (Ronit Roy) . Omarnath Thakur was one of the richest landlords of Calcutta and had 3 children, two daughters and a son. After his wife died he married the 21 year old Suchitra, who was well-known all around her village because of her ravishing beauty. After the marriage, she had accepted her fate and was living her new life but her entire world turns upside down when the handsome musician from London, Aditya Saha, comes to live in their neighborhood. Aditya and Suchitra gets bind together by the spell of love but will the society accept their pure love or will they term it as forbidden?

Edited by ramisaaAli - 7 years ago

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geet0910

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Posted: 7 years ago

Hey ramisaa, sounds a nice concept. 👍🏼 pls start writing soon😳

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Karia

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Posted: 7 years ago

Interesting Prologue.

Please Continue. .. Can't Wait

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Posted: 7 years ago

oh my god this sounds interesting ..pls start writing soon dude 🤗

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It was 3 o'clock at night, the entire Howrah station was as noiseless as a mouse. Some men were sleeping on the platform some were sleeping on the bench. The silence of the station was disrupted by the rumbling sound of the train which was arriving on platform no. 9. Soon the train came to a halt and when the train's whistled stopped a tall man in his late twenties stepped down the train. He was wearing a big black coat with grey waistcoat and white shirt. The black fedora was concealing his eyes. In one hand he had a suitcase and in the other he held a cigar. The man was looking here and there searching for someone.

'Aditya dada'' an old man called from the back. He turned around to see him running towards him, he threw the cigar away and as soon as the man came near him he took off his hat revealing his handsome face. Aditya Saha was a well-build man with striking facial features, his sharp jawline and grey eyes would make any girl go weak on her knees but despite of being so charming he was not much into girls for his true love was music and therefore the shy young lad had dedicated his entire life to music. But little did he know that the city of Joy, was going to change him forever.

'Namaskaar'' he said politely.
'namaskaar namaskaar...main hari kaka apke ghar ka care-taker'' said the old man
'hai mujhe pata hai baba ne apke bare mein likkha tha ek chitthi mein''
'oh tab toh bariya hai...ap yeh saman mujhe dedo aur chaalo''

Soon the two reached their house. It was Aditya's ancestral house but after his parent's demise no one lived there except for hari kaka. It was a two-storey white bunglow with a huge green windows and Juliet balconies. There was a big lawn in front of the house. While hari kaka was opening the main gate, Aditya noticed a big white neo-classical mansion just in front of his house. It had huge Corinthian pillars and broad windows. Just beside the gold gate there was a big name plate which said 'Thakur Dalan''. He looked curiously at the house, there was something about it which made him very inquisitive.

'Aditya chalo'' said Hari kaka after opening the gate. They walked through the lawn and entered the house. As soon as they entered the house Aditya scanned the entire house and finally his eyes stopped at a portrait. He went near it and touched it very lovingly.
'Dada aur boudi (bhabi) bohut acha tha'' said hari kaka
'hmm ' he nodded
'aap unke guzar jaane ke baad pehli baar aya hai na idhar?''
'haa..6 saal baad. Calcutta ki bohut yaad a rahi thi isiliye ageya''
'Dada hotei tou apko lekar itna gorbo (proud) korten...kitna bara gayak baan geya aap'' said hari kaka with a huge smile
He turned around and smiled at him.

That day in the afternoon Aditya was sitting in his balcony trying to write a new song. He was lost in his work when it suddenly started to rain. He put down his pen and paper on the side table and went near the railing. The smell of the rain and the cool breeze made him feel all peaceful. He was looking around when something or should say someone, in the Thakur Dalan caught his attention. A short thin girl suddenly came out of the house and was hurriedly collecting mangoes that were scattered in the lawn. She took as many she could and ran inside. The girl was wearing a deep magenta saree but Aditya couldn't see her face. Suddenly she came out again and this time she was not alone there were other women and children with her, she had brought all of them outside to dance with her in the rain. He tried very hard to see her face but from such a distance he couldn't see her. But he really wanted to see her and even he didn't know why, so after failing to hold his curiosity any longer Aditya ran downstairs. He went out of his house and stood in front of the 'Thakur Dalan''. Through the gaps of the Iron Gate grill he tried to see her. And finally when he did her beauty struck him like a thunder bolt.
She was the most beautiful creature he had ever seen, her sparkling eyes and thick black hair took his heart away. He was so lost in her that he didn't even blink when a passing rickshaw splashed mud water on his face and chest. He stood there like a maniac and kept staring at her.
'Aditya'' Hari kaka came infront of him and was calling him loudly but even his words were not reaching aditya's ears. Then hari kaka held his hand and dragged him inside the house but adi kept on looking at her. It was love at first sight for him.

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Princy

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Posted: 7 years ago

Thanku for the font change ramsu 😳

Awww..it instantly took me kolkata...howrah ......my golden college days ❤️

N adi's entry my gawwwd...the description sounds n feels lyk a hollywood creature n i imagined him the stubble

The saha house mention gave such bengali vibes...i'm totally gonna enjoy this .alrdy strtd watching it in my imaginaruy tv 😆..the tinge of bengal n its culture dshouts out in ur writing ramisaa..loved the update ..so its love at first sight for Mr.Aditya ..the kalakaar ⭐️..reminds me of oi tor moyobi chok gaan 😉 for her sparkling eyes ...

All in all a Lovely update rami...do continue asap ⭐️

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: princy48
res ..!!
hey ramsu can change the font or ..the font color to be darker thoda dekh dekh ke padhna padh rha hai bhai😆 alrdy eye sight hai mereko🤣

Lo princu tumhare liye change Kar diye abhi par ke batana ki kaisa hai😳😆

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: princy48
res ..!!
hey ramsu can change the font or ..the font color to be darker thoda dekh dekh ke padhna padh rha hai bhai😆 alrdy eye sight hai mereko🤣

Princu kuch v😆