Karthik OS - Nausea (During Vedant-Anushka's Engagement Preparations)

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Pagalpinky

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Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Just read both your stories
You are a great writer
Do you have an index of other stories?
I would love to read more
Thanks so much

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mistofshadows

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Posted: 7 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Anonanon0306
Loved it Nikki!!!Would have never come up with such a plot to voice my distaste for Vedant. Puke inducer is the right description for him!! Absolutely loved your vivid descriptions.. and laughed at Karthik's relief about being male and not pregnant!

After looking at Vedant, I kinda dreamt yellow and this is the result😆😆

I am glad you liked it. Thank you very much.

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mistofshadows

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Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Anjali33
Lovely👏
He's too yellow😆 I'm in love with this dialogue

Amazingly described feelings like care, protectiveness, uneasiness, unhappiness
Loved Siddhant Kartik convo

He puked🤣 hopefully on the oh-so-yellow Nupur

Hehe...thank you so much.

Oh...he definitely puked on Nupur...too much yellow becomes a target for yellow too.

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mistofshadows

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Posted: 7 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: azuria
Heloo dear a very well written and discriptive FF. Funny and to the point.

Thank you very much😊

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mistofshadows

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Posted: 7 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: war_is_peace
that was a brilliant way of writing a mockery! 👏😆
nice 😳

Thanks a lot for appreciating it.

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mistofshadows

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Posted: 7 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Pagalpinky
Just read both your stories
You are a great writer
Do you have an index of other stories?
I would love to read more
Thanks so much

Hey there!

Thank you very much.

I have been meaning to make an index but haven't yet made it.

Though, I have written prolifically in Maharana Pratap, Ishqbaaaz, Manmarziyaan, MATH and Kasam Forums in the past.

Right now I am dabbling in YPNTKH and Dil Hi Toh Hai forum.

If you want the links, plz do PM me.

Niki

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mistofshadows

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Posted: 7 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Riddhimaa...
Awesome os dear

Thank you very much😛

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Lavanya

@KumbhkarnKiNani

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Posted: 7 years ago

#18

Hi Niki 😃

Thank you so much for the PM :)

This is a brilliantly written OS 👏

And a hilarious one as well, trust me Niki, I laughed so hard at some moments in the story. Wonderful exhibition of satirical writing, with a dash of humour added to it :)

I loved how you presented Karthik's distaste for the color 'yellow' through various elements- be it the yellowish decoration or Vedant's himself 😆

He felt nauseous and was very glad that he was male. Had he been a female, he sure would have doubted pregnancy with the amount of time he felt nauseated in these past days whenever he had to be in her proximity- OMG, this was too good 🤣

Vedant's description was so on-point and nicely sketched. He's too yellow 😆

I really liked the concern which Karthik had for Anushka. That was endearing!

Also liked the fact that he shares a good bond with Siddhant. Their conversation was nicely written. Especially this dialogue from Karthik to Siddhant- "She is making a mistake. Not right for her. Too yellow". Goodness me, he literally told Siddhant that Anushka should stay away from Vedant because he is too yellow 🤣 I can totally imagine Siddhant's amused reaction/expressions on hearing that 😆

Poor fellow was already feeling so nauseous, and Nupur's arrival in a tacky yellow ensemble was the final nail in the coffin. And then the 'moment-of-the-story' happened. He puked on Nupur 😆 Too good! 😆

This was such an entertaining OS Niki! I thoroughly enjoyed it :)

Keep them coming sweetheart! :)

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-Lavy