Ishqbaaz OS : Sunday of Oberoi Family

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hello everyone ...It's the first time I am writing something here. Some of you maybe know me because I write in other sites...
So here I am with a random OS which I had written about 3-4 months ago during a lazy Sunday but never published it anywhere because I felt it's not worthy to publish. But today when I was going to delete it from my memory card suddenly a thought comes in my mind that as I had spend my time in it so why not to publish it... So all kinds of tomatoes and chamelis are welcomed for this random piece of OS...
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How you spend your Sunday? By doing cleaning? By just being lazy? By going out? With friends? Doing hangouts? Spending time with family? Aaa...let's see how this family spend their Sunday... This family.. aree Oberoi family... Before that let me clear it to all of you that it's just a small glimpse...There's many more things with which and by doing which they spend their Sunday.

Shivay enters his bedroom and hears the batuni Trivedi sisters are talking and laughing about something. He knows when these two and not to forget Bhavya i.e, three Obahus are together they don't notice what is going around so he clears his throat to make the two sisters realize about his presence in the room.
"Aree Shivay when have you come?" (Aree Shivay aap kab aye?)Anika asks seeing Shivay standing near the bed.
"Just now..."Shivay answers Anika's question but his eyes were looking toward his sister-in-law cum little sister Gauri who was trying hard to suppress her laugh.
"What were you both discussing? What is so funny Gauri?"( Tum dono asi kya baat kar rahi thi? What's so funny Gauri?)Shivay asks smiling but with a curious look.
Hearing Shivay's question finally Gauri openly burst out laughing.
"Aree I am saying you Gauri his face was something as must watch at that time."(Aree mai tuje bata rahi hun Gauri inka chehra na us okt ekdam dekhne layak tha.)Anika says in her excited voice.
Shivay isn't able to understand even a head or tail that what these crazy sisters are talking about. Hearing Gauri's loud laughing sound Ruvya and Om also come to Shivika's room and asks the same that what is so funny that Gauri is laughing so much...
"Rudy Bhaiya you are a great photographer..."( Rudy Bhaiya aap na ek bohot hi acche photographer hai...)Gauri says controlling her laugh.
"Aa thank you Bhabi...You know how..." Hearing Gauri's compliment Rudy who was going to boast about it was stopped in middle by Omkara's question...
"Now what has he done?"(Ab isne asa kya kar diya?)
"What do you mean by that O? No one compliments my talent here other than my Bhabis and if Chulbul bhabi is praising me then why are you feeling so michmichi?"( App k kehne ka matlab kya hai O?Yaha pe mere bhabhis k ilawa kisiko meri talent ki kadar hi nehi hai aur agr Chulbul bhabhi meri tarif kar rahi hai to apko itni michmichi kiu mach rahi hai?)Rudra retorts back to his elder brother.
"Michmichi that is what we are talking about only...Rudy that michmichi face picture that you had taken of Shivay we are talking about that only...That was and is the best picture of Shivay."( Michmichi ..isi baremai hi to hum baat kar rahe the..Rudy tune jo Shivay ki wo michmichi shakalwali photo li thi na hum usike baremai baat kar rahe the. Wo picture na Shivay ki best picture thi aur hai.) Anika says in the middle of brothers conversation.
"Which picture?" Ruvya and Shivay ask together while Om rolls his eyes realizing that again his bhabi Anika is going to make fun of Shivay about something... It's their daily routine after all ...without any fight this couple can't go to sleep. But he can't deny one thing Shivika's this nokjok sometimes look irritating but it's always entertaining.
"Aree that 'pant phat gayi' picture.."(Aree wo pant phat gayi wali picture...)Anika says in her usual jolly tone.
In response are heard and seen different types of reaction.
"What...!" Shivay and Bhavya asks together but their expressions are different.
Shivay asks in shock and disbelief that they were talking about it and also that Rudra has taken a photograph of that.
Bhavya asks in confusion that has she heard right?
At the same time RuRi burst out laughing while Om tries hard to control his laughter remembering that day.
"Bhabi what are you talking about?"( Bhabi aap kiss baremai baat kar rahi hai?)Bhavya asks trying to clear her confusion.
"Let me show you..."(Chal mai tuje dikhati hun...) Saying this Anika was about to show her a picture but Bhavya shouts "Noo!"( Nehi..!!)And takes a step back.
Of course which girl would like to see her brother-in-law's picture with teared pant...
"Aree why are you reacting like this...?"(Aree tu ase kiu chilla rahi hai?) Anika asks seeing Bhavya's such reaction.
"Aree Bhavya you should see bade bhaiya's face... he is looking so..."( Aree Bhavya tume na Bade bhaiya ki shakal dekhni chehiye...wo na bilkul...)Gauri stops in middle seeing how her bade bhaiya is glaring toward her now.
"So it's just face..."(To sirf face hai..)Bhavya says with a relief .
"And his attire also..."(Aur unke kapde bhi...)Chirps Rudra.
Shivay snatches that picture from Anika's hand then tears it into pieces.
"Shivay what have you done?"(Shivay ye apne kya kiya?) Anika asks angrily.
"Don't worry bhabi I have more copies."(Koi baat nehi bhabi ..mere paas aur bhi copies hai.)Rudra says proudly.
"Rudy don't you dare..." Shivay warns Rudra. "And when did you take this picture? How come it is with Anika?"(Aur tune ye picture li kab? Ye Anika k paas kese hai?)
"That day only bhaiya..."(Usi din bhaiya...) Rudra answers with a tone which says what a childish question it is...
"Actually Rudy bhaiya's birthday is coming again so we asked Khanna ji to give us some pictures of you three brothers together and in between those pictures it was there."(Wo darasal Rudy Bhaiya ka janamdin aa raha hai firse to humne Khannaji se kaha tha ki aap tino bhaio ki ek saath wali kuch picture e deneke liye aur un sab photos k bich mai ye wali bhi thi.)Gauri answers the other question.
"Khanna!" Shivay says griting his teeth with irritation.
"And I have given that photo to Khanna. He should store all the memorable memories of Oberoi family in his collection right? Who knows which one is required when.."( Aur mene hi ye photo Khanna ko di thi. Uske collection mai use Oberoi family ki sare memorable memories ko store karke rakhna chahiye na? Kisko pata kab konsi wali picture ki zarurat pad jaye..)Rudra says proudly with his logic sign.
"Then where are your and Om's pictures of that day?"(To tumari aur Om ki usdin wali pictures kaha hai?)
"Hey from where have I come in between?"(Hay mai kahase bichmain aa gaya?)Om says with surprise tone.
"One for all,all for one ...remember?" Shivay answers.
"That day your pant was also teared?"( Aapki bhi pant phati thi uss din?)Gauri asks with wide eyes.
"What ? No!"( Kya? Nehi!!)Om shouts immediately with a horrified expression.
"Aree no only Shivay i.e, Billuji's pant was teared."(Aree nehi sirf Shivay mera matlab hai Billuji ki pant phati thi.)Anika says showing her all front teeth with her bright smile.
"Anika stop saying that...ok..."
"Aree do you still feel michmichi hearing pant was teared? But you don't feel michmichi hearing gobar now..."(Aree apko abhi bhi pant phat gayi sunke michmichi hoti hai?Par gobar sunke to ab apko michmichi feel nehi hoti...)
"What's all these..? Will you stop saying this? And Rudra all this is happening because of you ...you are gone.."( Kya hai ye sab?Tum ye bolna band karogi? Aur Rudra ye sabkuch na teri hi wajese ho raha hai...tu to aj gaya...) Saying this Shivay heads toward Rudra with long steps but before he reachs near his brother Rudra already hides behind his bhabhis.
"Shivay dare you touch my brother-in-law..."(Shivay khabardar jo apne mere dever ko chune ki bhi koshish ki to...)Anika warns Shivay shielding Rudra.

- Remaining part is below it.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Remaining Part--


"Shivay dare you touch my brother-in-law..."(Shivay khabardar jo apne mere dever ko chune ki bhi koshish ki to...)Anika warns Shivay shielding Rudra.
"See because of Rudy bhaiya only we have come to know about that day or else Bhavya and me would not know about this ever."( Dekhiye na Rudy bhaiya k wejese hi to hum us din k baremai jan paye varna Bhavya aur hum to kabhi iss baremai jaan hi nehi patein.) Gauri says as if it has brought a good thing.
"It's not a picture when I am receiving an award."( Ye meri koi award receive karnewali picture nehi hai.)Shivay replies to Gauri because the way she is saying this it's sounding like a picture of a proud moment.
"Bade bhaiya you were looking so cute in that attire so what's wrong with this picture?" (Bade bhaiya aap un kapdon mai kitne cute lag rahe the to kya galat hai iss tasver mai?)
"Why Anika has to spill entire story behind that picture?"( Anika ko uss picture k piche ki sari story batane ki kya zarurat thi?)
"Because happiness increases when we share it."(Kiuki khushiya share karnese/batne se hi to badti hai.) Rudra and Anika chirp together and then do hi-fi.
Other side OmVya chuckle together seeing the miserable state of great SSO in between AniRiRu trio's crazy circle.
"Don't you dare say that Rudy and don't you dare laugh Om. What about you both? You both were also wearing same clothes that day. You Rudra Singh Oberoi the coward baby ...Should I say how you had wear that attire fearing a mere little girl's unbelievable devi power? And you Omkara Singh Oberoi how you had come all the way from orphanage to Oberoi Mansion wearing same similar clothes?"( Tum dono ne bhi to same kapde pehne the us din. Tum Rudra Singh Oberoi... darpok kahike...Should I say kese usdin tumne wo kapde pehne the ek ladki ki unbelievable devi power k darse? Aur tum Omkara Singh Oberoi kese orphanage se lekar O.M. tak pura rasta ase hi same kapde phenke aye the?"
"Why did you even add the phrase 'Should I say?' ?" ( Ye 'Should I say?' phrase use hi kiu kya?)Omkara taunts Shivay because he has already said everything.
"Hay Bhagvan my brother has changed so much. The brother who used to protect me from everything now insulting me like this...My brother isn't my that brother anymore."( Hey Bhagvan mera bhai itna badal gaya...Jo bhai kal tak muje sabse protect karke rakhta tha aj wo ase khule aam meri insult kar raha hai...Mera wo bhai ajse wo bhai na raha.)Rudra says dramatically.
"All for one, one for all ...remember?" Shivay says with smirk.
"Rudy Bhaiya have not you taken Omkara ji's picture of that day?" (Rudy Bhaiya apne usdin Omkaraji ki photo nehi li?)
Rudy tries to remember but before he remembers or replies Gauri starts saying again.
"Hall room has CCTV camera right? I will ask Khanna ji, we can even see full footage of that day."( Hall room mai to CCTV camera laga hua hai na? Hum Khannaji ko bol k dekhenge...hum to us din ki puri video dekh sakte hai iss tarah...) Gauri says excitedly.
"When it comes to all these stupid things why your brain runs so fast?"( Jab bhi ye faltu ki chizon ki baat ati hai to tumra dimag itna tez kiu dodne lagta hai?)Omkara asks not liking Gauri's such excitement to see that embarrassing picture of his.
"My brain always runs fast in everything."( Humara dimag to har chiz mai hi ase hi tej doudta hai.)
"Yeah Gauri ...you and Bhavya can see all the expression of Shivay's face that day."( Han Gauri tu aur Bhavya na Shivay ki usdin wali sare expression dekh sakhte hon iss tarah...)Anika says adding her excitement.
"Hay I am so excited to see my Jatadhari hippi who looks like Sankarji how he was looking in Kanhaji costume..."(Hai mai to badi hi excited hun ye dekhne k liye ki humare Jatadhari hippi jo Sankarji ki tarah dikhte hai wo Kanhaji k kapdon mai kese dikh rahe the...) Gauri says clapping her hands like a small child with excitement.
Hearing all these Bhavya realizes it's not like what she had thought earlier so she is also curious and excited to know what's the real story.
Anika was going to say Bhavya what's the story when they hear Dadi's voice from behind.
"What are you all doing here..."( Tum sab log ye yaha pe ase jama hokar kya kar rahe hon?)
"Dadi it's good that you have come...We were talking about the day when Shivay's pant was teared."( Dadi accha hua aap aa gayi... Hum log na Shivay ki pant phatne wali din k baremai baat kar rahe the.)Says Anika and hearing this Dadi also chuckles.
"You!" Shivay snaps with irritation.
"I will call Khanna and ask him to bring the footage."(Mai abhi jake Khanna ko bolta hun us dinwali footage lane ko.) Saying this Rudra runs to call Khanna while ShivOm call him from behind to stop but which wasn't heard by Rudy.
Then what? One by one all the family including TejVi and ShaNky join all other members and the entire Sunday was spend using the phrase 'Billuji/Shivay ki pant phat gayi' and Shivay asking them to not to say it.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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wow.. nice funny os😆that pisode was epic according to me..
how many times anika & others had repeated shivaay ki pant phat gai😆😆

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thank you so much for commenting... I had written it randomly as I was feeling really lazy that day but I am glad that you liked it... Yes that episode was really funny and it still brings a smile in my face whenever I remember that episode...Bechara Shivay had heard the same sentence again and again...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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hahaha billu ki pant phat gayi..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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🤣 am extremely glad that you posted this one!! It was amazing! Keep it up and yeah, can i get the link to your other shivika works (doosre website waala bhi chalega)? Would love to spend my time reading them! 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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😆lol that was too funny
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thank you so much everyone for your lovely comments. I had not thought that anyone will like this OS but feeling really happy seeing all your positive feedbacks.

@jaansahiba I haven't written any solo fanfiction on Shivika yet but there's is a fanfiction with all the couples on Wattpad - 'Dil Bole Oberoi - The story of Oberoi family', also there's another one which is actually an AniRi fanfiction called 'Sisters'...but you can find a little bit of Shivika there also.You can find these both stories in Wattpad...

And I am really sorry for not replying to all your comments...actually though I have joined this site a long time ago but as I haven't used it much so still I don't know how this site works and because of that I am still learning how to use this site...

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