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daenerysnow

@daenerysnow

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Posted: 7 years ago

#81

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Thankyou!

The sadist in me also roots for them above the girls but then there would never be an end. The boys memories will scar them as they never really revealed themselves for who they really were so in a way the girls have a lot of rebuilding to do in the aftermath knowing that the stalker was right under their nose all the time.

Im glad I was able to induce enough shock through the ending.

My FF is heavily inspired from the Scream movie and tv show if anyone has seen it so I cant take full credit as some dialogues have been pulled from it.

Thankyou for sharing your view! Love 2 you too

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daenerysnow

@daenerysnow

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Posted: 7 years ago

#82

Hi Veda

I am glad you enjoyed i as much as I enjoyed writing it, writing the characters etc! Thankyou! You may have guessed Im a horror film fan so i guess that translates through.

Im curious as to whether people suspected Pandit? Perhaps Sameer was more of a surprise?

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Veda1125

@Veda1125

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: daenerysnow
Hi Veda
I am glad you enjoyed i as much as I enjoyed writing it, writing the characters etc! Thankyou! You may have guessed Im a horror film fan so i guess that translates through.
Im curious as to whether people suspected Pandit? Perhaps Sameer was more of a surprise?

Had suspected Pandit in the initial chapters..later on Samar..but never guessed about Sameer! That indeed was a surprise. You did good!

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taliya

@taliya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#84

Woah i didnt expect Sameer to be one of them but i loved it! 2 psychotic brothers...Really interesting characters n suspenseful plot. the ending was exciting with Preeti Naina vs Pandit and Sameer, i also wanted them to win!

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May

@SixteenAgain

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#85

Wow! What a twist... I had a feeling about Pandit.. but Sameer was totally unexpected.. was fun reading the final part!

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Azraa

@Azraa01

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#86

Oh my. Read the entire FF now and must admit it was enthralling.

Kept me on the edge of my seat from the beginning right to the end.

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daenerysnow

@daenerysnow

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Posted: 7 years ago

#87

Oh my. Read the entire FF now and must admit it was enthralling.

Kept me on the edge of my seat from the beginning right to the end.

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Really grateful, thanks for reading!

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Sairandhri

@Sairandhri

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

#88

Wow! I just read the last 3 chapters after a long break from IF.

The stalker was so intelligent, the Kamya phone call was spooky. You had me guessing first over Samar then Pandit when he gives the creepy smirk at the end of one chapter and the duo of Sameer and Pandit was a shocking revelation in the final. It was superbly thrilling especially as the boys played their game so cunningly. And what makes it more twisted is that the four of them were actually step brothers and sisters?! And Pandit and Sameer dont seem in the slightest bothered about this as they made moves on the sisters and trapped them from the beginning! Superbly twisted characterisations and overall well written!