SS||FOREVER is a LIE||Chapter 16 Pg 30||22nd Sept - Page 11

Oh God!!they got engaged...

Originally posted by: MissRight

Awww okay so much has happened in this chapter I have all jumbled feelings!! I'll start from the top!

Firstly, Yayyy congratulations Zo!!!!! Starting up your own business is a HUGE thing. #proud!

Adi and zoya share that "hate-em-but-cant-live-without-em" sort of relationship with each other! Lolz it's hilarious.

I love mahi and zoya's relationship here... wish it was the same in the actual show tooo!!!! :(

But SHIT!!! I thought as much as soon as the party started! Parents hooda and parents Siddiqui are going to be IN for it!!

Although Adi has a hero complex.. like dude! She doesn't even LIKE you why would she agree to Marry you!??? He needs to be brought down from his high throne or whatever he sees himself on!

I wish Mahi and Zoya shared a friendship however Indian tv always needs a villain of some sort 😆

Aditya is really on his high horse (he's got reason to be considering he's hot) 😆

He probably considers himself to be God's gift to women.

Originally posted by: jerry73

I loved the update, I've been reading your fanfictions and you write amazingly well, particularly this one. I was eagerly waiting for the next part 😃 glad you updated, eagerly waiting for the next one. I loved the way you have etched out the characters😊👏.

Aww thank you for such kind words.

Hoping to post an update soon - maybe weekend.

Glad you're liking the characters though they are different from the characters on the show.

Wish they at least Zoya strong and filled with confidence

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

W*F...they just done the engagement without even asking both Aditya and zoya...its their life...now they are going to destroy their friendship also...

Yes it's their life - I considered this track for quite some time however to get this story going ahead this seemed the quickest and easiest way as I also needed to keep this title apt for the story 😆

Thank you for your comment.

Originally posted by: Pori

LilMissBossy, you're the boss of this FF, so please do your readers a favour and continue writing long chapters😳

I read this FF in a go and I loved it. You know how to keep the readers engaged and after a point, this felt like the real story... One of my favourite FF!!!!

The story is very well written, nicely organized and the chapters flow so good

Coming back to the characters. I love the way your scripted each and every character. Aditya and his one liners, Zoya is simply awesome and for once I like Mahi or else I cannot stand her in the show... Can't wait for the next part

Thank you very much 😳 😳

I will try my very best but time constraints doesn't always allow me.
Most updates are typed on phone during lunch break at work or on my work computer when most of my colleagues are out of office and I'm alone 😆

I'm really pleased that readers are enjoying the characters.

For some reason, my attempt at following show characters isn't successful majority of the time as I cannot accept Zoya whining and crying and prefer strong females.

Originally posted by: Binzzz

Oh God!!they got engaged...

Felt bad for Yash...was she looking at Yash at that time...?

Beautiful chapter..

Update soon. ..

Yes she was, I should have made it clearer.

She crushes on Yash at the moment - though I'm not sure what she sees in him 😆

Originally posted by: Ikhtiyar

Whooa this is getting so interesting. And I must say I truly enjoy the light hearted moments you write😊Please update, soon!

Thank you, glad you're liking the little comical scenes here and there. They are the most difficult scenes to write for me.

Update coming this weekend... 😃

Oooh so interesting!

I can't wait to see what happens!

Originally posted by: LilMissBossy

Thank you very much 😳 😳

I will try my very best but time constraints doesn't always allow me.
Most updates are typed on phone during lunch break at work or on my work computer when most of my colleagues are out of office and I'm alone 😆

I'm really pleased that readers are enjoying the characters.

For some reason, my attempt at following show characters isn't successful majority of the time as I cannot accept Zoya whining and crying and prefer strong females.