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Pori

@Pori

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#111

YAYYAYYY!!! you updated!!!🤗

Seriously? Aditya doesn't believe in marriages and is willing to live like that? Breaks my heart💔

ZOya definitely deserves better than a husband who does't care about her. But please don't turn Yash into negative, I kinda sorta like him😳

Wedding next?? are we gonna get some awkward romance?😆

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jerry73

@jerry73

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

#112

I'm really happy you updated after a long time! Was waiting for your update... So the next chapter is the wedding😆, you write really beautifully, please PM when you update next.

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InkedImagination

@Queen0fDarkness

Dazzler

+ 11

Posted: 7 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: Pori
YAYYAYYY!!! you updated!!!🤗
Seriously? Aditya doesn't believe in marriages and is willing to live like that? Breaks my heart💔
ZOya definitely deserves better than a husband who does't care about her. But please don't turn Yash into negative, I kinda sorta like him😳

Wedding next?? are we gonna get some awkward romance?😆

I hadn't thought of making Yash negative 😆

I try to give it a realistic edge to my stories and not everyone turns obsessive and psycho 😆

Hopefully a successful wedding 😉😆

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InkedImagination

@Queen0fDarkness

Dazzler

+ 11

Posted: 7 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: jerry73
I'm really happy you updated after a long time! Was waiting for your update... So the next chapter is the wedding😆, you write really beautifully, please PM when you update next.

Lol I wouldn't call 10 days a long time 😆😆

Sorry, I don't send PMs out due to the limited amount of free time I have.

I use my phone for most of the surfing and only come online to post updates.

Thank you for commenting x

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ikhtiyar

@ikhtiyar

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#115

AdiYa shaadi on the way 🥳 I like Yash in your story btw

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InkedImagination

@Queen0fDarkness

Dazzler

+ 11

Posted: 7 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: Ikhtiyar
AdiYa shaadi on the way 🥳 I like Yash in your story btw

Thanks 😳 I like Yash as well here 😆

Wish Yash and Pooja had been shown in a way that in the show we liked them.

But it turns out, with their presence I dislike them even more.

Hoped to see they had logical reasons for straying away from their partners.

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meepha

@Meeph

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#117

Nice ff

Pm me when u update plz

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AparnaChinnu

@AparnaChinnu

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#118

Aditya is not understanding that marriage is not a game... it will become a mess and shaadi... so many complications

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jhankarbeats87

@jhankarbeats87

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

#119

Hi! Read all the updates together and it was simply wow. Especially the scenes of Aditya and Zoya squabbling, he fat-shaming her while she giving it back equally. Though Aditya is clearly smitten by Zoya to some extent (though he wouldn't admit that even to himself), Zoya is infatuated with Yash. So since Papa Harsh id suffering cancer and decided to play cupid...how all of it play's out.

Will be waiting for more. Do send me a PM. 😊

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@Coffee_Chips

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#120

Since you don't pm just now caught up with the last 3 updates. So much happened & whou! Zoya & Aditya getting married is weird because they don't like each other at all, if we leave aside the hatred factor because I don't feel they hate each other 😕

Poor Harsh. Aditya is thinking practically & taking the wise decision. If Harsh doesn't survive, maybe at a later stage Aditya & Zoya can get a divorce. I think that's why he's willing to marry her a/c to how you've implied it. Obviously I've no proper idea LOL

Anyway waiting for the Big fat wedding & poor Yash. Though Zoya also likes him, nobody can't stop what destiny has decided for each individual, I get that idea reading the last chapter.

Continue whenever possible 😊

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