Aditya Zoya FF : UNDEFINED chap 1 updated 17/05

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hello guys im new here ... I am Gitanjali and im going to write my fantasies ... at first I posted it in another characters but later thought that Adi and Zoya will be perfect match for my storyline .. because im their one of biggest fan rightnow ..
its story of hopes and second chances ... its story of love and hate ... its story mirage and facts
... its story of undefined souls ...With unsaid words ... presenting our Aditya and Zoya in new love bond ...




PRESENT 14th May 2018 ...

It was dark every where. . I was looking for him ... I got scared of thunder and cold wind running through my spine ... where is he ... my eyes were searching for him ... I walked aimlessly ahead .. afraid yet with immense desire of him ... I called his name loudly in that dark ... bt there was no reply .. my eyes started flooding .. where is he ... I called him again ... my voice was full of pain .. I walked ahead slowly again ... where was he ... jaan .. where are you ...I need you .. I take another slow step but get stumbled on something .. my balance lose and closed my eyes tightly afaird that I will hit ground now .. bt before i could touch the floor strong pair of masculine arms caught me ... I clutched his arms by her little hands ...

- ssshhh ... I'm here .. I'm here ...


He secured me in his arms .. I knew he would come .. I buried my face in his chest holding him so tightly .. he wrapped his arms protectively around me .. I could feel his rapid breaths .. I looked up slowly .. I couldn't see anything in dark but I felt his intense stare ... his one hand pulled me closer .. Our mouths inches apart .. I closed my eyes and surrendered ... I felt his lips touching mine ... current flowes through my body whenever his soft lips touches mine ... his hold tightened around me .. and I melted in his embrace ..


- Zoya ..are you going to wake up or not ...

And boom ...Mom's voice echoed in my ears ... my eyes flagged open .. my face full of sweats ... I closed my eyes again ... another torturing dream ... how badly I wish I never open my eyes .. how badly I wish I could forget everything ... is it that much easy ... I know you will never come back ... I know you will never change your decisions ... still why I keep hoping ... hoping for the day you would come and say ... I want you back ... a lone tear ran down myvcheeks ... another painful day .. another painful wait ... how long is this ia going to continue ... Sometimes I just want to know do you also miss me like I miss you ...


So this is it ... I will update almost everyday because im on vacations ... tell me how you find it ... eager for your reviews .. for pms buddy me ... lots of love ❤️


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HC_Rabia thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
#2
Nice FF❤️dear I loved it.
Do more update😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wonderful Update
Loved it❤️
Well Written
Do Write more

Welcome to the forum Gitanjali 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice start
Can't wait to read what happens next. Plz pm me when you update
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Posted: 7 years ago
#5
Hello everyone I'm back again .. as I promised I will update everyday ..
Here you go ...

Chapter 1

One year ago ...

Zoya's Pov

I was drooling over his pic .. he is such cute .. he looks so innocent .. his dark eyes ... I can dive into them for eternity .. I was busy looking at him and in that moment someone grabbed my phone from my hand .. aaa I screamed loudly ... Mansiii ki bacchii ... she giggled loudly .. followed by Praju's hilarious laughter ..

- Let us also have chance to look at your prince ...

- Nooo wayy .. give my phone backkk Mansii ..

Praju laughed again ..

- Look at yourself Zoya .. you are growing old .. aisehi use roj Facebook pe dekhti rahogi koi aur chidiya tumhare prince ko bhagake leke jayegi ...

Praju said in teasing tone ...

- Oh shut up okk there's no chance .. he is made for me only ...

- Whattt ... what are you saying ... think about Rohan at once ... kya hoga us bechare ka ...

- Let him go to hell ok I don't care ... just give my phone backk right now ...

I ran behind my idiot roommates who never miss chance to drive me mad ... Mansi ran ahead but suddenly knock on someone .. there was Harshda standing .. I sighed .. thank god now at least Harshi will help me .. my breath was heavy due to running behind that monkey Manasi ...


- Thank god you come Harsh .. take my phone from Mansi ... she's teasing me ...

She smiled at me and take phone from Mansi .. I take step to take my phone but she turned and throw phone at Praju ... They all laughed in union ...


- Hawww you all are mean yrrr ...

They laughed again and started dancing crazily singing ..

Jane kyo log pyar karte haii ...
Jane kyo vo kisipe marte hai ...
Jane kyooo jane kyoo ...

I got so much irrited by them ... all of them are such dumbo .. I sat annoyingly on my bed ..

- Jao tum log mai kisise bat nahi karungi ..

- Ole baby don't get upset .. here's your phone take this ! But sab sahi to keh rhe hai .. kitne din Mr. Huda ke pics dekhti rahogi .. at least be friends with him ...

- Yes ... Praju is right .. you should at least be friend with him .. or else uske bacche tumhe auntie auntie bolne ayenge tab use bolne wali ho kya tumhare one sided love ke bareme ..

They laughed again ... a stupid scene imagined in front of my eyes and I shrugged off quickly unable to bear it ..

I think they are right .. I should talk to him at least .. he doesn't even know me ... I looked at my phone at took deep breath .. I was really scared ... what if he refused to be friends with me ... nope he won't .. I will make my puppy face .. Aur duniya me koi aisa insan bana hai bhala jo mere puppy face pe melt na ho .. I laughed to myself .. After so much no no and yes yes I send him friend request ..


Present ..

I went downstairs to see my mom and sister working in kitchen .. nowdays I don't show any eye contact with anyone afraid that they will see my pain ..

- Zoya ... Manisha aunty is coming home today .. we will go out with her ... go and get ready ...

I nodded quietly and went to my room ..I opened my laundry bucket searching for appropriate dress .. while searching I found a cute dress with sky blue colour .. it was his favourite colour .. I picked up that dress .. another load of tears come in my eyes ... as the dress filled my heart with unforgettable memories of our first and last anniversary ...


Here it is ...I hope you will love it .. im bit upset due to poor response to story .. as im new here I can understand it but it will be so supporting if you tell your friends to read this ... your reviews are heartily accepted ...it would encourage me to update sooner ..lots of love .. Gita❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Again another wonder update❤️
Well written
Do continue soon more update
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi.
Thanks for pm. Don't feel sad just because not many people have read it. It could be they just haven't had the time or not seen it. I only noticed it as I was going through each page. I only have acess on my mobile.

Anyways I love it. I hope you continue it please. I would love to read what happened between zoya and Aditya as I feel they did get together but broke up.


Please update soon.


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Outstanding update
Loved it ❤️
Well written
Update Soon
Thanks for the pm dear

P. S
I couldn't open the link in the pm so it took long to find it but thanks for informing or else I would not have noticed its updated.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice concept!!..

Loved the update...

Can't wait to read more...

Do cont soon...

Zoya is cute... She has a crush on Adi!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#10
awesome update dear
loved it very much...

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