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Posted: 7 years ago
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So I just finished re-watching all the episodes and the first 37 episodes are exceptional. The ones after that are not terrible (I enjoy the light banter between Zoya and Adi), but I think the writers went wrong in 2 places:

1. When Adi found out that Mahi sent those goons, his reaction was not upto par. He didn't live up to the passionate speech in the hospital to Mahi about not tolerating anymore of her antics against Zoya. Instead of doing something about incident, he just decided to use her to get a reaction out of Zoya.

2. It was clear that Adi softened towards Zoya after the suicide attempt. And yes, he feels like she is the only person who understands his pain, but now that Zoya is back to her old self, he should be making an effort to become friends with her in my opinion instead of trying to annoy her some more. We should also get some more changes in their feelings towards each other. Adi still taunts Zoya about her "cheater husband" and Zoya still sees Adi as an enemy and overlooking all the sweet things he has done for her.

So now that we know that the writers have started fumbling in the first 40 episodes itself, my worry is whether they will live up to our expections for the epic love story we are expecting. Considering how much Zoya and Adi loved their partners, and how much the betrayal hurt them, it will be difficult to show them not only fall in love, but fall even harder than the first time around. I sincerely hope Jenshads chemistry is not wasted!

With that said, what type of a story do think will do justice for these two?

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Posted: 7 years ago
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For ur first point, Adi got very angry and he was about to react when Zoya turned up, told Mahi to leave and warned Aditya to stay away from her and Mahi. He should have told Zoya Mahi's truth but he didn't because he knew Zoya will not believe him.
I do agree with ur second point. Instead of showing AdiYa friendship, they ruined the track with Adi-Mahi angle. Even though I still loved AdiYa scenes bit still there was no need to show Adi flirting with Mahi. Maybe they showed this to make Mahi a cruel vamp in the future but I seriously hope they have ended the flirting angle.

I feel that they showed filler episodes because they're waiting for IPL to end and after that, they will bring Yash-Pooja murder mystery with Apoorva's entry.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Best solution keep your expectations low 😆 many ppl feel disappointed with almost everything in the show because they expect a lot. I'm sure after IPL, episodes will turn out better than it has been this week and last week but these promos the channel keeps releasing make the serial look more dramatic and mysterious than it actually is 😆 🤔
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I agree! The writers missed a great opportunity after the suicide drama. I'm really hoping that it's only filler episodes due to IPL and Rangu being a total b to them by changing their time slot and messing with the on air timings.

They need to show us more depth in AdiYa, individually and as a pair, they need to show us more of their relationship with their spouses and how it will be different for them this time around
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Posted: 7 years ago
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For the first point, I feel like Adi didnt tell Zoya just cause that Zoya blindly trusts Mahi. He probably wants Zoya to find out about Mahi's kartoot by herself. So, I really hope Zoya soon gets to know how evil Mahi actually is.
and completely agree with your second point. I made a post about it before as well. I really dont know why Adi still brings up 'cheater husband'. haa we know he was a cheater and so was your wife, but it does not mean that Zoya has to listen to this everyday. And for Zoya, I dont know why she dislikes Adi this much. Yeah he taunts her, but helps her at the time of need as well.

So yeah i hope they do justice to the chemistry JenShad have and use it to the fullest. this show has a very good potential, nor its upto cvs to make it an amazing show.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I think it's Zoya's ego probably that's making her dislike Adi? She organized Aditya's birthday party because she wanted to prove Pooja loved him so much and therefore she didn't betray him thereby proving Yash's innocence too. But then her plans were foiled and she realized the truth that Yash indeed cheated her. After Aditya saved Zoya's life, her attitude towards him should have changed but looks like she's upset that his belief of the affair turned out to be true and her belief that PooSh were innocent turned out to be false. She did thank him for saving her life but still she's upset that his belief won and hers didn't.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Tulips-

For ur first point, Adi got very angry and he was about to react when Zoya turned up, told Mahi to leave and warned Aditya to stay away from her and Mahi. He should have told Zoya Mahi's truth but he didn't because he knew Zoya will not believe him.

I do agree with ur second point. Instead of showing AdiYa friendship, they ruined the track with Adi-Mahi angle. Even though I still loved AdiYa scenes bit still there was no need to show Adi flirting with Mahi. Maybe they showed this to make Mahi a cruel vamp in the future but I seriously hope they have ended the flirting angle.

I feel that they showed filler episodes because they're waiting for IPL to end and after that, they will bring Yash-Pooja murder mystery with Apoorva's entry.


I agree that Zoya wouldn't have believed Adi. What didn't connect with me is the scene where Adi wants to befriend Mahi to irritate Zoya. It would have made more sense if Adi's motivation was to keep Mahi close so as to keep an eye on her and hopefully keep her away from Zoya.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: jumz86


I agree that Zoya wouldn't have believed Adi. What didn't connect with me is the scene where Adi wants to befriend Mahi to irritate Zoya. It would have made more sense if Adi's motivation was to keep Mahi close so as to keep an eye on her and hopefully keep her away from Zoya.




I guess thats what he is doing indirectly, Mahi hasnt done anything bad to Zoya since that happened. She stops herself from being mean to Zoya infront of Adi. so I dont know if that was Adi's motive or not hahahaha
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Tulips-

I think it's Zoya's ego probably that's making her dislike Adi? She organized Aditya's birthday party because she wanted to prove Pooja loved him so much and therefore she didn't betray him thereby proving Yash's innocence too. But then her plans were foiled and she realized the truth that Yash indeed cheated her. After Aditya saved Zoya's life, her attitude towards him should have changed but looks like she's upset that his belief of the affair turned out to be true and her belief that PooSh were innocent turned out to be false. She did thank him for saving her life but still she's upset that his belief won and hers didn't.



yeah maybe! well said! 👏
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: jumz86


I agree that Zoya wouldn't have believed Adi. What didn't connect with me is the scene where Adi wants to befriend Mahi to irritate Zoya. It would have made more sense if Adi's motivation was to keep Mahi close so as to keep an eye on her and hopefully keep her away from Zoya.

i too feel thats the reason coz ever since mahi n adi angle has come she hasnt done any harm to zoya..indirectly he is protecting her...he saw how mahi wanted her to be dead,then saneding goons was too much...n he knws she has gone through lot n also suicide n mahi would have done more deadly...bt as of now she is under adi's control

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