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Hello everyone,
Chapter 1 - Page 4
I have been a silent reader on this forum for sometime. On the whole, I like how the plot is unfolding. There are a few things that could be better (eg. Pace and the whole mystery around a few characters) But I want to see how the story evolves.
This is the first time I am writing something on this forum. I hope you like it!
PROLOGUE
"This smells really good! Are you sure you've made it?"
"No, it wasn't me. Angels descended from heaven to serve you a piping hot cup of coffee!"
"Jealous? are we?"
"Jealous? Of you? Dream on darling! Dream on"
"Your denial changes nothing. You're jealous. I wish I could help you, but I can't. You see, one has to conquer their demons. Others can't do it for them."
"Hahaha!! This is the highest level of ignorance, I have ever seen. I am not surprised though. I can't expect an epitome of sensibility and wisdom, from a person who is as vain, as dumb and as annoying as you are."
"Chide me, as much as you like. But the fact of the matter is that you can't believe your stars that you've landed me- the most good-looking person on the face of this earth!"
"Truth be told, I can't believe that I landed a fool like you, at all", said Zoya, with a teary eyes and a dazzling smile.
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Chapter 1 - Page 4
Chapter 2 - Page 7
Chapter 3 - Page 9
Chapter 4 - Page 14
Chapter 5 - Page 18
Chapter 6 - Page 21
Chapter 7 - Page 24
Anupamaa
