MEEVAN SS : KISSA SLAP DA!!! (Part 2 updated) - Page 2

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Posted: 7 years ago
#11
Nice. U should continue this.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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i liked the scene, plz continue!👍🏼
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: anjani-pagli

i liked the scene, plz continue!👍🏼

Thank you.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#14
Nice one!! Do continue dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 2

English translation of hindi dialogue in (...).

Next morning

Vivan's Room

Vivan was now determined to win Meera's forgiveness at any cost and prove to her that he regrets his decisions and actions and that he was not like this he respected women because for him a man who raises hands on women was not a man but a monster and he was not a monster and he has to free himself from this guilt otherwise he would go mad and that was not done not done at all.

On the other hand Meera could see how persistent Vivan was for her forgiveness and was doing all the possible things to make her believe that he really was sorry whether it was by hurting himself or by opening about his feeling and past to her. And now she was in a dilemma of whether to forgive him or not

Meera : hai babaji kuch ton ishara dedo ki mein woh gunde master ko maaf karu ke na aur woh toh mere haath doh ke peeche pada hai. (hai babaji give me some signs whether should I forgive that gunde master or not. And like that also he is so persistent for my forgiveness what should I do.)

Roma kapoor has seen the budding tension between the love birds and decides this would be the perfect time to separate them and take Vivan back to London because she can't allow Vivan to meet Pammi Kapoor as she will lose all the hard work that she has done on Vivan for so many years because this Kapoor empire belongs to her and no one else.

Roma: sorry love bird's tumhari love story toh main shuru hone se phele end kar dungi kyunki Vivan mere haathon ki katputli hai aur voh mein kissi halat mein nahi kho sakti sorry darling. (sorry love birds your story is going to end even before it starts because Vivan is my perfect puppet and I cant loose him so I am very sorry darling). As it is said Rome was not built in one day as so was not Roma.

That's it guys hope you enjoy the second part and I hope to see a lot of likes and comments to see whether should I continue this or not.

PS : I know this SS is slow because it requires a built up so please bear with me.

Edited by RK-ki-Kaneez - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice update dear
U r r8 this story supposed to be ss
So go-ahead n update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#17
Nice continuation, take all the time you need dear!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#18
Nice continuous...and ya plz in the tile with update note write a page no also...It was very nice
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Posted: 7 years ago
#19
Nice ss dear do continue soon please.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: hailly

Nice ss dear do continue soon please.

Thank you and I will try continuing as soon as possible.

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