MEEVAN SS : KISSA SLAP DA!!! (Part 2 updated)

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Posted: 7 years ago
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MEEVAN OS : KISSA SLAP DA!!!

Guys I am new to this forum I started watching the serial day before yesterday and completed all the 65 episodes in these 2 days and right now I am in a Meevan trace. So here I am with my thoughts.

KISSA SLAP DA!!!

Meera POV

Meera couldn't believe that the shelf life of her and Vivan's friendship was so small, she knew that they always were at crossroads about his mom but never in her wildest thoughts she believed that Vivan would even think about raising hands on her because he was always her savior even during the time they were enemies he even saved her from Sumeers mom and her slap so this was a total shock for her and she couldn't believe that the man that she trusts would try to do something like that.

Vivan POV

He knew very well what he did was wrong and quite offensive but it was quite an impulsive reaction and he didn't know what to do and now Meera has stopped talking to him and these feelings that he is going through are very unsettling and hence it becomes quite important that he confronts Meera and apologies to her and with that all these weird feeling would go away because he can't live with this guilt anymore.

Vivan's bedroom

Meera was sitting on the dressing table and going on with her night routine and at the same time Vivan enters the room.

Vivan : Meera.

Meera : Vivan please stay away I don't want to listen to anything anymore. I have heard and seen enough for today.

And with that she switches off the lights and lies down on the bed facing opposite to Vivan and by that time Vivan also sit on the bed and tries to think of ways he could talk to her.

Vivan : Meera (in a soft tone) I am really sorry mujhe nahi pata mujhe kya hogaya tha mujhe mere gusse par control karna chahiye tha but I went out of control.

Meera : out of control toh tumhara gussa hamesha ho jata par yeh matlab nahi ke tum sab ko chhaata marte phiro.

V: I am really sorry aise mujhe baat karna mat chodo agar chahe toh tum mujhe slap kar sakte ho aur give me what even punishment you want but just talk to me Meera I don't know I can't bear your silence anymore.

M: I don't know Vivan please give me some time I really am very hurt.

So that it people I have left an open ended ending so please feel free to like and comment and tell me how much you liked my OS.

Index

part 1 : page 1

part 2 : page 3

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Agar kaleerein webseries hota to aisa hi scene hota
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Gud start
U can continue this os
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Originally posted by: clairvoyance

Agar kaleerein webseries hota to aisa hi scene hota

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Thank you for your appreciation.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: kgmu

Gud start

U can continue this os

Thanks and yes I can try and continue this OS bit only if more people want me to.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: TRRRP

Do continue dear...

Thank you and surely I will try and continue.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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More more more please...😊
Nicely written.

Poor Vivaan
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sofna

More more more please...😊

Nicely written.

Poor Vivaan

Thank you and surely I will try to continue.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Good job sweetie
Hope u enjoy this serial.
And yay if possi and part 2
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: .ROSY.

Good job sweetie

Hope u enjoy this serial.
And yay if possi and part 2

Thank you and yes I am throughly enjoying the show.

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