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Posted: 7 years ago
part 10
happy family
glad that armaan learned cooking
u knw this small small things matter in any relationship


waise didu why u deleted WA
wapas aajao
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Posted: 7 years ago
so hereis my comment for all these part which i missed actually not missed actually but last week u updated the part too fast fof me to cope up thats y got late
mujhe lga ho tha seeing amyra its not armaan dream but the moment was beautiful then his realization abt ridhz
n their scene was also beautiful how he apologised n she forgave him their moments was sweet n adorbs
then armaan proposal was sudden n cute actually
lovdd their moments after their remarrige
it was adorable how they tease laugh n enjoy together
i loved their family moments
shyna ji mar gyi didnt expected that yaar
socha tha kuch action dhamaka hoga or ridhz will beat her or koi acha sa solution to get rid of her but nothing sort of happened!!! *pout* anyways glad that her chapter end but ar a confession bhi maine kafi romatic or thrilled imagine kiya tha are kuch hua hi nah i thought armaan ko realize hoga he will take first step but ye bhi ulta hua

loved ar romantic moment it was simple n sweet
someflashback scene was awdorble
amyra was so calm n mature yaar but i wish she was little bit naughty
armaan ridhz moment in the hotel their flashback scenes was sweet adorable i loved all the other scenes
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: T.Peru

Nice update

Finally both are together & happy with their daughter
Now their is now problem in their life
All well that end well
Thanks for PM
Update soon


Thanks dear...
Glad u enjoy the story...
Yes, finally they are together and Amyra got her parents back...
u r most welcome :)
Take care ...
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: NishitaRahman

Wow mindblowing part.love the part.love AR and their children.keep writing such beautiful story.thanks for pm.❤️


Thanks Nishi..
Glad u love the part...
In Sha Allah will come with more new stories...
Keep loving and reading...
Take care :)
You are most welcome :*
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: DMGThings

Awww! Happy, happy family. Cho cute! Matlab, Amyra is the best ! <33333

And I like how Armaan learned how to cook just to give Riddhima a day off. The little things are always important .

Itna sab Hone ke baad bhi they're happy together toh I'm happy for them. New baby and the old one is so happy and they're both so happy, yeh dekhke mujhe bohot achcha laga !



Thanks dear...
Glad u love the part... and enjoy the story...
Heheh yes, Amyra is the best...
Why not, after all she is AR's daughter :D
Aise kaise nehi seekhte... He knows, whatever he has done it make three of them suffer...
Toh apne galati toh sudarna hi hai...
Ridz ne itni aasaani se maaf kardiya toh kiya huva, jo galat hai woh galat hi hoga na...
Happy to know, u love the part...
Take care :)
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Prizi

part 9


oyye hoyye everything is ok now...
amazing update didu
so hapoy fr amyra


Heheh yes, everything is ok now :D
Thanks Priyu...
Me too ;)
Love u...
Take care :D
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Prizi

part 10
happy family
glad that armaan learned cooking
u knw this small small things matter in any relationship


waise didu why u deleted WA
wapas aajao


Thanks Priyu...
Yes, Armaan learn cooking just for his princess's...
Of course I know, after all main bhi toh relations mein hun...

Aise hi, now I m back...
Take care :)
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: lashyyy

so hereis my comment for all these part which i missed actually not missed actually but last week u updated the part too fast fof me to cope up thats y got late
mujhe lga ho tha seeing amyra its not armaan dream but the moment was beautiful then his realization abt ridhz
n their scene was also beautiful how he apologised n she forgave him their moments was sweet n adorbs
then armaan proposal was sudden n cute actually
lovdd their moments after their remarrige
it was adorable how they tease laugh n enjoy together
i loved their family moments
shyna ji mar gyi didnt expected that yaar
socha tha kuch action dhamaka hoga or ridhz will beat her or koi acha sa solution to get rid of her but nothing sort of happened!!! *pout* anyways glad that her chapter end but ar a confession bhi maine kafi romatic or thrilled imagine kiya tha are kuch hua hi nah i thought armaan ko realize hoga he will take first step but ye bhi ulta hua

loved ar romantic moment it was simple n sweet
someflashback scene was awdorble
amyra was so calm n mature yaar but i wish she was little bit naughty
armaan ridhz moment in the hotel their flashback scenes was sweet adorable i loved all the other scenes


Hi Pal...
it's really fine...
I know I had been updating too quickly for you to cope up...
I m happy, u read and comment :D
It mean's a lot to me...

Glad u love everything about the parts..
From Armaan apologized to Ridz, she forgiving him...
Armaan sudden propose and their remarriage moment...

Ab AR ke bacchi ho aur family moment na ho...
Aisa toh ho hi nehi sakte, it always make their moment complete with their kids...
Hahaha, tujhe abhi bhi action chahiyeh...
uff she was syco, what to expect from her...
Usne itna try kiya, Armaan uske hote hote chut gayi uske haat se...
woh kaise accept karte yeh baat...
Toh khud ko hi khatam kardiya apne paagalpan mein... ;)
Acchi baat haina, kissi aur ka haat ganda nehi huva haahha...

Lolz, lagta hai, jo tumne socha...
Waise kuch bhi nehi huva...
Chalo ek taraf toh acchi baat hai...
As it happen the way u not expect it to ;)

Hmmm , maine socha usko naughty bataun..
But har baat toh yehi hota hai...
bacche naughty hote hai issiliye maine ulta usse mature and calm bana diya...
Chalo acchi baat hai, u love every single moment of AR..
Be it alone or with Amyra... or their new born baby...

Thank u so much Pal...
Take care...
Love u :*
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Posted: 7 years ago
heyya m back !!! n agin with loads of comments is pending oh gowd aisa kab hoga jab koi pending comment nah hogi n i will read n comment fresh *pout*
aah i miss those days seriously
anyways so the comment is bepannah i guess or new story bhi i readed will comment todah itself m turning lazy these days ye story bhi almoat 15 days se comment baki h mere laziness ke charche na suno to better h

ok it was sweet n adorbs how armaan took care of ridhz
their again becoming parents which is very much expected from last part hahaha
cuteness is the way armaan n amyra took care of her
loved how ar surprised her on her bday n her excitement is love
it was sweet n adorable update with an happy ending i loved story as i m hoping it to be ur comeback n its concept n the way it excutedwas beautiful but end me gadbad hui thodi but overall it was fantastic n in the list of my fav
so is it a full stop or an epilougue is coming ?
if u asked me dont write n epilougue it perfect the way it end
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: lashyyy

heyya m back !!! n agin with loads of comments is pending oh gowd aisa kab hoga jab koi pending comment nah hogi n i will read n comment fresh *pout*
aah i miss those days seriously
anyways so the comment is bepannah i guess or new story bhi i readed will comment todah itself m turning lazy these days ye story bhi almoat 15 days se comment baki h mere laziness ke charche na suno to better h

ok it was sweet n adorbs how armaan took care of ridhz
their again becoming parents which is very much expected from last part hahaha
cuteness is the way armaan n amyra took care of her
loved how ar surprised her on her bday n her excitement is love
it was sweet n adorable update with an happy ending i loved story as i m hoping it to be ur comeback n its concept n the way it excutedwas beautiful but end me gadbad hui thodi but overall it was fantastic n in the list of my fav
so is it a full stop or an epilougue is coming ?
if u asked me dont write n epilougue it perfect the way it end



Hiyya Pal..
Long time, I was just waiting for your comments...
Hahaha, seems like u r really being very much lazy...
Hmm ab itni din baad aayenge toh, pending parts toh hogi...
Kyunki, koi na koi zarur update karenge ;)
Jab bhi usse waqt mile, right :D
Koi nehi darling, u take ur sweet time ;)
Main wait karlung :D

Glad u love the last part of this story...
hahah, haan kyun nehi...
Ek bacche se kaise family complete hogi...
Aur waise bhi, Armaan and Ridz bacchon koh kitna pasand karte hai...
Ridz toh apni Amyra ke liye, padai tak sacrifies ki...
So why wouldn't they try for another child when they get together...
Happy to know, u love every bit of this part :D

Heheh kabhi na kabhi, kahin na kahin...
Gadbad toh hona hi hai :P because no one is perfect right ;)
Yes, its full stop..
No more part, not even epilogue...
Hehe main puchungi tohdina :P itni din baad...
If I had a doubt, main pehle hi puchti...

Hope u will love reading other stories and new ones as well...
Which I would post, some days :P hehehe...
Take care :)
Keep loving and reading...

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