Bepannah Mohabbat - An AR Mini SS (Completed!!!)

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Bepannah Mohabbat
An AR Mini SS



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Bepannah Mohabbat
An AR Mini SS
Part 1



'Mammi...' Girl turn around hearing the voice...
A bright smile form on her lips as tears form in her beautiful hazel orbs, without waiting she took the little girl standing in front of her in her arms as the little girl gives dimple smile to her mother which shows how excited she was to meet her mother after years...

Girls hugs the little girl as she shower lots of kisses on every part of her adorable face which make the little one smile got wide feeling the love her mother was showering on her... Little girl hugs her mother, hiding her small face on her neck as she inhale the motherly scent which she missed for years...
'Mammi, I m very heavy...' The girl said as she hugs with her arms around her mother neck...
'Of course you are my baby...' Girl said as she hugs her daughter tight...

Tears started to fall from her eyes without any control having her daughter in her arms after years, how she had been craving from the day they got separated and she knows, just few more weeks and she would get her daughter back in her life because now she is old enough to choose with whom she wants to live...

Without caring how her life has been last four years, girl just hold her daughter closed to her heart as she try her best to control the tears but once again, it was falling from her eyes not because of sorrow but of happiness that soon she could get back her daughter in her life...
'Riddhima...' Their moment was disturb by a lady who care Riddhima hair...

Riddhima open her eyes to see one of the closed person in her life, who had support and give her strength to fight to get her daughter back in her life... Smiling to the lady, Riddhima make her daughter stay on the ground as they were standing in a park...
'Kaise ho...???' Lady asked...
'Ab tik hojaungi Aahana Di...' Riddhima said looking at her daughter...
'Main bohot khush hun, tum waapas aagayi...' Aahana said...
'Waapas aana hi ta mujhe Di. apne beti ke paas...' Riddhima said caring her daughter face...
'Amyra bhi bohot khush hai...' Amyra said hugging Riddhima around her waist...
'I love you baby...' Riddhima said kissing her forehead...
'I love you too Mammi...' Amyra said...
'Chale...???' Riddhima asked holding her hand...
'Haan chalte hai, nehi toh humein waapas jaane mein dher hojaenge...' Aahana said as they move out from the park...


RIDDHIMA'S APARTMENT


'Wow Mammi, yeh sab mere liye...???' Amyra asked as Riddhima let them in her apartment...
'Yes my baby, yeh sab aapke liye...' Riddhima said as Amyra look around the decoration her mother has done...
'Lekin aaj meri birthday nehi hai...' Amyra said looking at the wall where it hang a 'Happy Birthday' banner...
'Accha, chalo dekhte hai cake mein kiska naam hai...' Riddhima said holding Amyra hand and letting her towards the hall...

It wasn't a big apartment but had two rooms and a medium hall with a attach open kitchen area... Riddhima has decorate the hall with balloons hanging on the ceiling while some on the floor covering the floor... Letting Amyra look the decoration, Riddhima went to the kitchen to get the cake...

When Riddhima came back with the cake, they move to the three seat couch with the glass table in front of it as Riddhima kept the cake carefully on it... Amyra who was excited to see whose name was on the cake look towards Riddhima with her eyes wide with surprise...
'Amyra...???' Amyra asked not believing...
'Yes my baby...' Riddhima said kissing Amyra temple...
'Lekin Mammi, aaj meri birthday nehi hai...' Amyra said...
'I know princess, aapke birthday pe main nehi ti na... Issiliyeh hum aaj aap apni Mammi ke saath aaj celebrate karte hai, hmm..???' Riddhima said caring Amyra cheek...
'Wow, how cool is that Mammi...' Amyra said being excited...
'Ab cake cut kare...???' Riddhima asked holding the knife for Amyra...

Soon Amyra cut the cake as Riddhima sing 'Happy Birthday' for her, Riddhima wasn't able to move her eyes off from her daughter face as it shows happiness sparkling in her beautiful orbs which resemble her father orbs... Remembering about her father, Riddhima heart started to beat faster as it has been years she hasn't seen him...

Riddhima knows it wouldn't be long but soon she would have to go in front of him, for her daughter, their daughter... Riddhima was lost thinking how they got separated when she was bring back to reality by Amyra who nudge her mother...
'Mammi...' Amyra call her mother, seeing her lost...
'Haan...' Riddhima asked looking at her beautiful daughter...
'Maine cut kardi...' Amyra said pointing to the cake...

Riddhima smile and took a piece and fed her daughter who relish the yummy cake happily, than she fed Riddhima by holding Riddhima hand which has the piece Riddhima fed her who took a small bite knowing this small gesture would make her daughter happy...
'Amyra, chale...???' Aahana came as it was going to sunset soon...
'Aunty, aap jao... Main tohdi der Mammi ki paas rahungi...' Amyra said...
'Nehi bacchi, Dadda aapko dhundenge... Main kiya bolungi aapke Dadda koh...' Aahana said...
'Hmmm...' Amyra said becoming sad because Aahana has taken her without letting Amyra father knows they had come to meet Riddhima...

Riddhima look at her daughter to see her smile vanished which give pain to her heart, she also wish to spend sometimes with her daughter but she knows it wouldn't be good when her father didn't know she has come to meet her mother...

Riddhima felt helpless because she has to wait for some more time to get her daughter back in her life, her father didn't let her meet Amyra for a single time after they got separated... Also the court gave Amyra custody to her father because Riddhima wasn't in such condition to rise a daughter being a single mother...

Aahana stood looking at Riddhima and Amyra, she knows Riddhima would make her daughter understand because she was still too small to understand why her parents aren't together... So controlling her paining heart, Riddhima hold Amyra small hands in her, pulling to close to her heart...
'Baby, aap Mammi ke paas rahenge...???' Riddhima asked...
'I miss you so much Mammi, I want to stay with you but than Dadda would be really sad...' Amyra said being sad for not having both her parents with her...
'I know baby, but you are big enough to decide with whom you want to stay...' Riddhima said...
'I m just seven years Mammai...' Amyra said...
'I know my baby, that's why u can choose anyone who u want to be...' Riddhima said...
'I wish aap dono ke saath rehpaati, aap kyun nehi rehti humhare saath Mammi...???' Amyra asked...

Riddhima heart miss a beat hearing that question, she knows Amyra would ask but she wasn't old enough to understand the situation which make her father left her mother... Riddhima move down from the couch, sitting on her knees as she kiss Amyra both hand, she look at her once again...
'Sahi waqt pe aapko batadungi main kyun, abhi aap itna jaan lo aapki Mammi aap aur aapke Dadda ke saath nehi reh sakte...' Riddhima said...
'Kab bataenge aap mujhe...??? I m big girl now, 7 years ki hun main...' Amyra said...
'Abhi aap itni badi nehi huvi hai bacchi, aap yeh baat samjhe ki main aapke aur aapke Dadda ke saath kyun nehi hun...' Riddhima said...
'Phir kab samjhungi main..???' Amyra asked...
'Jab aap itni badi ho ki aap meri sandal pehen sakun, tab aap samajh paaenge...' Riddhima said...

Amyra pout hearing this which make Riddhima smile to her cute action, Riddhima cupped her face and kiss her forehead as it was difficult for her to let go her daughter as well the way its for her daughter... Riddhima stood up and hold Amyra hand making her stand too...
'Be a good girl Princess, I promise you... Jaldi aap meri saath rehne aa sakti hai...' Riddhima said...
'Lekin aap kyun nehi aa sakti Mammi...' Amyra once again asked...

Riddhima look at her daughter face which shows how desperate she wants the answer for it but Riddhima was helpless because she is too small to handle the truth and it would be better that she never know the truth behind her parent separation...
'I know, abhi bas nehi aa sakti aap... I can understand, I will miss you Mammi...' Amyra said hugging Riddhima...
'I will miss you too baby, I love you...' Riddhima said caring her hair...
'I love you too Mammi, bye...' Amyra said moving out from the hug and giving Riddhima a flying kiss...

Riddhima smile at this and soon Amyra move out with Aahana to leave as she wave her hand bidding bye to her mother who wave back as Riddhima watched her daughter move away from her sight... Again fresh tears form in her eyes feeling how empty her life is without her daughter by her side...

Without her fault, she lost all the relation she had in her life with the love her life... Still it breaks her heart to remember that dreadful day which changed her life to such intention that for sometimes, she thought she would never be able to live...

If it wasn't of her best friend and Aahana, Riddhima wouldn't be able to make herself strong for her daughter... Riddhima was great to them because they were big support in her life when she was kick out from her husband house and separated from her daughter...


THREE DAYS LATER


Guy knock a door as he wait to get the permission, when he heard a quick 'Come in' he enter the room to see a Man sitting behind the table as he was on a call... Man asked the guy to sit as he continue with the call and soon end it as he face the guy who was eagerly waiting for the Man to end the call...
'What happen Mr. Mishra...???' Guy asked as soon the Man give him full attention...
'Bad news Mr. Mallik...' Mr. Mishra said...
'Kiya huva...???' Mr. Mallik asked...
'Armaan, your ex-wife wants the custody of your daughter...' Mr. Mishra said...
'Aise kaise, mujhe mila hai uski custody woh bhi court through...' Armaan said...
'I know that Armaan, lekin tumhare ex-wife ne custody ke liye court gaye hai... Hearing ek week baad hai and I m afraid that she might get it... Being your lawyer, it's my duty to inform you...' Mr. Mishra said...
'My daughter wouldn't ever go leaving me...' Armaan said...
'I hope so Armaan, she is old enough to choose with whom she wants to stay... If she choose her mother, we can't do anything to make her stay with you...' Mr. Mishra said...
'Woh mere bina nehi rehpaenge...' Armaan said...
'Main samajh sakta hun Armaan, lekin isbaar tumhare ex- wife ki case bhi strong hai... Sab kuch Amyra ke upar depend hogi, hum kuch nehi karpaenge...' Mr. Mishra said...

Armaan was left shocked as he never thought his ex- wife would come back to get his daughter custody... Armaan knows even she has equal right on his daughter but he don't believe like that due to the situation they got separated...

Armaan has successfully kept his daughter away from her mother because he thinks that the lady wasn't good enough to be around his daughter... How much he loves his ex-wife, he just can't ignore the truth he saw with his own eyes... Maybe he wouldn't have believe if someone else told him but he saw the truth with his own eyes which breaks his heart to several pieces...

Not having another option left, Armaan left from the room thanking his lawyer as they had to wait for the hearing... Armaan mind was clouded as the realization hit him badly that in few days, he might not have the chance to live with his daughter...


SOMEWHERE ELSE IN THE CITY,
CAFE'


'Are you sure Amyra would choose you Riddhima...???' Girl asked as Riddhima told her about the hearing which court has given to them as she had put chargers for her daughter custody...
'I know Amyra ke liye mushkil hoga uske Dadda se dur rehna lekin bohot saal rehliya woh apne Mammi se dur... Woh khud chaahti hai meri saath rahe, kuch din tak sahi...' Riddhima said...
'Lekin uske baap...???' Girl asked...
'Nikki, woh kuch nehi karpaenge ab... Bohot saal tak mujhe apni beti se dur rakkha hai usne, ab aur nehi...'Riddhima said...
'Phir bhi Ridzy, woh apne tarafse koshish zarur karenge...' Nikki said...
'Jitna koshish karna hai, woh kar sakte hai... Lekin ab main apni beti se dur nehi reh sakte... Main yeh sab karna nehi chaahti Niks, lekin main majboor hun... Amyra ke Dadda ne mujhe majboor kiya, kash ek baar woh mujhpe trust karta... Meri baat sunleti toh aaj hum apne hi bacche ke liye court jaana nehi padti...'Riddhima said...
'Ridzy, jo huva woh koi badhal nehi sakte... Amyra ke baap koh tumpe ya uske mohabbat ke barosa hota toh ek baar tumhare baat sunta aur tumpe barosa karta...' Nikki said...
'Uske mohabbat ka pata nehi Niks, lekin aaj bhi main unse BEPANNAH MOHABBAT karta hun... Woh apne gussa chodne koh tayyar nehi hai toh main bhi apne liye aur safai nehi dungi... Bohot dard huva mujhe, itna dard ki mujhe yeh sochne pe majboor kiya kash, kash hum kabhi mila nehi...' Riddhima said...

Nikki hold Riddhima hand, pressing it softly feeling the pain in her voice... She was one of the person that who has seen how broken Riddhima was four years ago when her husband kick her out from his house as well his life, not only from his life but also he has separated her from their daughter for whom Riddhima has sacrificed her dream as well...

Riddhima gave a small smile as those memories still haunt her every single moment, she control her paining heart as her mind took years back when she first met with her ex-husband... Riddhima never thought, her life would change so much that after being loved by someone, every single thing would be snatch from her in a second of eyes blinked...


FLASHBACK START,
8 YEARS AGO


Girl was arranging dinning table when the door bell rang, checking the time she quickly move to open the door very well knowing who must have come... Correcting her hair and dress, she quickly open the door to be welcome by a flower bouquet which brings a big smile on her lips...
'Happy Birthday Shyna...' Guy said as he gave the girl a dimple smile...
'Thank you Armaan, andar aao...' Shyna said welcoming Armaan...

Armaan move inside as he look around and seeing no one else, he look towards Shyna who came behind him... Keeping the bouquet, Shyna turn around to see Armaan looking towards her... Very well understanding what he must be thinking, Shyna move closed to him...
'Tumhari friends...???' Armaan asked...
'I don't have much friends, issiliye aaj sirf hum dono...' Shyna said...
'Oh, mujhe laga tumhari birthday hai toh friends bhi hoga...' Armaan said...
'Nehi, I don't like much people around... Let's have dinner...' Shyna said leading Armaan to dining table...

Soon they were having dinner while talking, Shyna and Armaan knows each other from childhood... Their mothers are best friends so Shyna used to visit Armaan house with her mother and had been him several time before Armaan left out of country for his further studies...
'Waise Armaan, birthday toh meri hai... Treat toh tumhe mujhe dena chahiyeh ta lekin main khud tumhe invite karke tumhare liye dinner banaya...' Shyna complain as she took the empty plates...
'I know but tum jaante ho na, we aren't closed enough toh mujhe laga ab tak tum mujhe bhul gaya hoga...'Armaan said...
'Aise kaise bhuljaenge, yaad hai humhare mom's kiya kehti ti... Bade hokar hum dono koh shaadi karlena chahiyeh ek dusre se...' Shyna said...
'Haan yaad hai, woh mujhe gussa karne ke liye kehta ta...' Armaan said...
'Toh tum kabhi seriously nehi liya is baat koh...???' Shyna asked...
'Jab mujhe pata hai ki mujhe gussa karne ke liye toh main kyun seriously lun..???' Armaan said...
'Tumhe, main pasand nehi ho right...???' Shyna asked...
'Bachpan mein, yes lekin ab toh dost hona...' Armaan said...
'Haan, issiliyeh tum kabhi meri saath nehi khelti ti... Jab bhi mujhe dekhte toh bahana banakar bhaag jaata ta...' Shyna said...
'Pata nehi kyun, lekin jhoot nehi bolunga... Haan mujhe tab tum pasand nehi ta, lekin ab dost hai hum... Aur aaj tumhari birthday hai toh khana toh humne already kha liya, main coffee bana sakta hun tumhare liye...'Armaan said...
'Fine with me...' Shyna said...

They went to the kitchen and Shyna got everything to make coffee... Armaan check if she got everything and seeing white sugar, Armaan run his hand on his hair... Shyna wait for Armaan to start but when he gave her a look, she raise her eyebrow asking what happen...
'Brown sugar nehi hai...???' Armaan asked...
'Tumhe brown sugar chahiyeh..??? Main abhi lekar aati hun...' Shyna asked...
'Nehi, tum rukho... Main lekar aata hun...' Armaan said...
'Lekin Armaan, tumhe yaha ke shops...' Shyna was cut by Armaan...
'Dhund lunga main, baccha nehi hun jo kho jaunga...' Armaan said smiling and left without letting Shyna stop him..


STORE


It was almost time to closed the store, Armaan enter to see just few people around... Armaan move to search for brown sugar but he couldn't find it so he move to the counter, to ask one of the cashier so they could help him... Just one cashier were in the counter so Armaan move towards her, who stood with her back towards him...
'Excuse me, do you have brown sugar...???' Armaan said as he rubbed his nose as he got some dust while searching for sugar which make his eyes red too...

Girl turn around and gave him a wired look seeing his condition, Armaan look towards her and got lost seeing the girl but soon he was bring back to real world by the girl who question him what he want... Armaan control his fast heartbeat, seeing the girl who manage to make him lost his sense...
'Brown Sugar...???' Armaan asked...
'Sorry...???' Girl said thinking she heard him wrong...
'Sugar chahiyeh...' Armaan said...
'Waha us section mein aapko milenge...' Girl said pointing to the area where sugar kept...
'Waha sirf white sugar hai, mujhe brown sugar chahiyeh... Milenge...???' Armaan asked...
'Yaha nehi milenge...' Girl said being not sure...

Seeing the wired expression she was giving to him, Armaan realized what she must be thinking... Armaan shake his head not believing that the girl might think of him as a dealer, thought to explain her but she didn't let him speak because it was time to closed the store...
'Sir, close karne waqt hai...' Girl said...
'Aap mujhe galat samajh rahe ho, main dealer nehi hun... Mujhe brown sugar chahiyeh, jo packet mein hota hai...' Armaan said...
'Sorry Sir, filaal humhare paas nehi hai...' Girl said...
'Aap samajh rahe ho na main...' Armaan was cut by the girl...
'Yes Sir, lekin humhare paas nehi hai... Sorry...' Girl said waiting for him to leave...

Not having any other option, Armaan left but she wasn't sure that if the girl believe him or not... As the girl said it was time to closed the shop, Armaan left as he couldn't also find it and he knows they wouldn't lie because they would want the customer to do purchase from their store...


FOLLOWING DAY


'Nehi Rahul, main apne job mein khush hun... Dusri job karna, it not possible...' Armaan said...
'Arey sochke jawab de dena Armaan, aur full time tohdina karna hai... Part time job hai, tumhe accha salary bhi milenge...' Rahul said...
'I don't know Rahul, bas kuch din pehle toh aaya hun... Aur ab job bhi join karliya toh mujhe, apne liye bhi tohda waqt chahiyeh...' Armaan said...
'Common Armaan, itna accha chance hai... Sochke jawab de dena, koi jaldi nehi hai...' Rahul said...
'Tik hai, tum itna keh raha hai toh main sochunga...' Armaan said...

They were in a cafe' to have a cup of coffee, while talking about their life and work... After coming back, today Armaan met Rahul who is a good friend of him from collage time... Rahul was offering a job to Armaan from the company he work as his boss wanted someone like Armaan...

As Armaan was already on a job which give him a good salary, he don't want to leave it because he has no one else to spend other than himself as his parents live in Delhi while he was in Mumbai... Armaan earn much more than he needed so he wasn't ready to take another job, not yet...

As they wait for their coffee, Armaan saw the sugar packets kept on the table... Seeing the brown sugar, previous night incident came in his mind which had been disturbing him a lot... Armaan took a packet and thought to ask Rahul what he think about him...
'Rahul, kiya tumhe lagta hai main drug dealer hun...???' Armaan asked looking at the sugar packet...
'What...???' Are you crazy...???' Rahul asked...
'Matlab nehi lagta...???' Armaan asked...
'Of course nehi lagta, kisne kaha tumhe...' Rahul asked...
'Thanks buddy, I have to go... See ya...' Armaan said hurriedly, leaving...
'Arey suno toh...' Rahul call him but Armaan already left without listening to him...

Rahul kept looking at Armaan figure which soon left the cafe', he wondered what happen to him suddenly that he left like that without even letting him speak... Rahul thought was disturb with his mobile, checking the caller he quickly answer it...
'Yes Ma'am, I think he will take the job...' Rahul said as he kept looking the direction where Armaan left...


STORE


Armaan enter the store and move to the counter, searching for the girl who was there the previous night... Not finding the girl, he ask another cashier but they didn't know about whom Armaan was asking... Even he don't know her name so not understanding how he could find her, he left...

Armaan stood in front of the store not understanding where to find the girl, don't know why but he felt uneasy thinking that the girl mistook him... Armaan badly wanted to clear things with her but to his bad luck, he don't know her name so it wouldn't possible to get any information about her...

Restlessly, Armaan look around to see the same girl walking the other side of the road... Smile form on his lips as he wave to her, to get her attention but being a little far Armaan couldn't get her attention with other people crossing his view...
'Hey...' Armaan quickly move towards her, catching her in time before she took another path...
'Hi, aap...???' Girl asked being surprise...
'Haan woh main aapko yeh dikhane aaya ta, yehi brown sugar hai jo maine kal store mein lene gaye...'Armaan said showing the sugar packet...

Girl smile seeing how Armaan came to explain her about which sugar he was asking, he don't know why he was feeling so restless thinking what she must think of him which he aren't and it was bothering him so much... Seeing the girl smiling, Armaan relax but wait for her to speak...
'Aap issiliye mujhse milne aayi...???' Girl asked...
'Haan woh pata nehi kyun, lekin itni khubsurat ladki mujhe galat samjhe, mujhe accha nehi laga... Waise I m Armaan Mallik...' Armaan said forwarding his hand...
'Riddhima... Riddhima Gupta...' Girl said holding Armaan hand as they shake it...



Hello Friends and Readers...
I m starting a new SS, which would be of 10 Parts...
Hope u all would love and enjoy it...
Do leave Comments and press Like...
Keep loving and reading...
Take care...
Love you All...



With Love,
Rihoohaws...
Edited by RihooHaws - 7 years ago
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YASSS RIHOO, NEW SS !WWWOOOTTT!
I'm so excited! Ab is chapter se toh yeh lagta hai ki AR fell in love, lekin Shyna ko Armaan pasand tha , is liye she created probs between AR jiski wajah se unka divorce ho gaya . Mostly toh I think she made it look like Ridzy was having an affair . So, Armaan left her and took custody of Amyra . Lekin, ab jab Ridzy will fight for custody , Armaan will come to know that Shyna ne jaan boojhke sab kiya .

Jo bhi ho , I'm very excited to read ahead! Jaldi, jaldi update dena. Please !
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Wow mindblowing part.love the part.story ka name,cover pic,concept just beautiful.outstanding story.thanks for pm.eagerly waiting for next part❤️
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Originally posted by: DMGThings

YASSS RIHOO, NEW SS !WWWOOOTTT!

I'm so excited! Ab is chapter se toh yeh lagta hai ki AR fell in love, lekin Shyna ko Armaan pasand tha , is liye she created probs between AR jiski wajah se unka divorce ho gaya . Mostly toh I think she made it look like Ridzy was having an affair . So, Armaan left her and took custody of Amyra . Lekin, ab jab Ridzy will fight for custody , Armaan will come to know that Shyna ne jaan boojhke sab kiya .

Jo bhi ho , I'm very excited to read ahead! Jaldi, jaldi update dena. Please !


Thanks dear...
Glad u know how much u have enjoy the starting...
Dekhte hai tumhari baat sahi hai ya nehi :P

hhehe break lagao apni excitement mein...
actually don't, i m loving this side of you hehee...
Sure will try to update soonish...
take care...
Keep loving and reading...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: NishitaRahman

Wow mindblowing part.love the part.story ka name,cover pic,concept just beautiful.outstanding story.thanks for pm.eagerly waiting for next part❤️


Thanks Nishi...
Glad u love everything about this story...
let's see what will happen in coming parts...
take care :)
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wonderful and interesting part yar😛
AR ek dusre se alag kyu ko gaye

eagerly waiting for next part 😃

thanks for pm ❤️

thank u for this new and amazing story 🤗
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Originally posted by: beautifulmess

wonderful and interesting part yar😛

AR ek dusre se alag kyu ko gaye

eagerly waiting for next part 😃

thanks for pm ❤️

thank u for this new and amazing story 🤗


Thanks dear..
Glad u love the part...
Yes, they are separated...
Sure sure... Will update soon...
Pleasure is all mine dear...
Keep reading and loving...
Take care :)
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Bepannah Mohabbat
An AR Mini SS
Part 2



'Haan woh pata nehi kyun, lekin itni khubsurat ladki mujhe galat samjhe, mujhe accha nehi laga... Waise I m Armaan Mallik...' Armaan said forwarding his hand...
'Riddhima... Riddhima Gupta...' Girl said holding Armaan hand as they shake it...
'Nice name... Coffee...???' Armaan said pressing Riddhima hand making her smile...
'Pani puri...???' Riddhima asked getting excited...
'As you say Ma'am...' Armaan said giving her space to move ahead...

Smiling the way Armaan was treating, Riddhima move ahead with Armaan following her as she lead him one of the nearby stall... Riddhima ask the man to give spicy pani puri while Armaan just stood in a distance watching the place where the man was making it...

Riddhima look around to see Armaan standing a few feet's behind, she ask him to join her which Armaan gladly did by moving her side... Riddhima smile and turn around to the man who gave two plates, one for either of them... Being a foodie, Riddhima attack the pani puri without waiting for Armaan...

As Riddhima relish the first one and keep asking the man to filled her with more pani puri's, Armaan just stood by her side staring at her thinking how on earth she could eat such things in such place because Armaan was feeling uneasy to see the not too tide place where the man was making the puri's...
'Kiya huva...???' Riddhima asked getting Armaan attention as he kept staring the place and the man...
'Hah...???' Armaan asked when he heard Riddhima talking to him...
'Aap kha kyun nehi rahe...???' Riddhima asked as she put another puri in her mouth...
'I m fine, aap khalo...' Armaan said...
'Sahi hai, aap yeh sab kaise kha sakte hai... Aap toh rich family se ho, aap bas brown sugar daalke coffee pee sakte ho... Yeh sab nehi kha sakte aap...' Riddhima said keeping the plate and cleaning her hands...

Without giving a chance to Armaan, Riddhima left from there as she had a feeling that Armaan had a like towards her but she was mean to make him aware that nothing can happen between them because she is from a middle class family and he is from a rich family...

Seeing Riddhima leaving, Armaan move towards her and stood in front of her blocking her path... Riddhima raise her eye-brow as if asking what he wants now as she had very clearly tell him that how much different they are so there was no chance of them to share any relation...
'I want to meet you again...' Armaan said without hesitating...
'Kyun...???' Riddhima asked crossing her hands on chest...

Armaan move his hand on hair giving a nervous smile to her, he knows he was acting like a restless person but he wasn't yet sure if the new feeling which develop the very moment he saw her the previous night was attraction or love...
'Armaan, aap aur main bohot alag hai... Humhare life bohot alag hai, aur yeh ek mulakat se hum dono koh pata chalgaya... Aap brown sugar ke bina coffee nehi pee sakte aur main, mujhe road side food bohot pasand hai... Jaise aap yeh sab nehi kha sakte, main aapke brown sugar wala coffee bilkul nehi pee sakte... Issiliye hum dono ke liye accha hoga, hum apne apne raaste mein jaae... Bye Armaan, it was nice meeting you...' Riddhima said very well understanding what must be going in Armaan brain and maybe in heart too...

Riddhima once again turn around to leave but after taking three four steps, Armaan voice make her stop... Riddhima turn around to see Armaan mouth filled with the puri as he asked the man to give one more as he eat it as soon as the man give it...

Riddhima shake her head and smile as it was Armaan way of showing that he could do anything to meet her in their life once again... Riddhima look away from Armaan as she try to control her smile seeing how much spicy the puri was for Armaan as tears had form in his eyes but he didn't care because only thing which matter to him at the moment was that he wants to make Riddhima believe that he is a human just like her...


DAYS LATER


Armaan and Riddhima become good friends, they used to go out together and got to know about each other more... Armaan feelings for Riddhima was getting stronger days by days making it conform to him that it wasn't just attraction but much more...

Mean while in Riddhima heart also feelings develop for Armaan as she was enjoying his company and attention as well which she never get from a guy other than her brother who take care of her being the only family of each other and his not so good friend Vivek, whom Riddhima wish never to get such attentions...

Life was beautiful for Armaan and Riddhima as they found each other, they used to talk and meet after their respective work... Both learn about each other family but Riddhima didn't tell much about his brother because she wasn't sure if she should when they just become friends few days ago...

So like another normal day, both meet for lunch as Riddhima has night duty so she wouldn't be able to meet him at night.. After lunch, Armaan drop Riddhima near her house and left... Riddhima smile seeing how their friendship has got strong in these couple of days, she turn around to leave when someone call her name...
'Shyna...???' Riddhima turn around to look who it was...
'Oh so you remember me...???' Shyna asked removing her shades...
'Of course, kaise bhul sakte ho... Mujhe laga ta tum waapas aaye ho, kuch din pehle tumhare car dekha ta maine... I was wondering how come we haven't meet yet...' Riddhima said very well knowing Shyna must have come to taunt her...

Shyna mother knows Riddhima mother when she was alive, so after Riddhima parents death Shyna mother used to help her in anyway she could... That's the reason Riddhima knows Shyna but Riddhima never know that Armaan was her friend...
'Haan bas kaam ki wajahse zyada waqt busy rehti hun, tum kiya karte ho... Meri paas tumhare liye kaam hai, main ek maid dhund rahi hun... Kiya tum aa sakte ho, safai karke khana bana dena...' Shyna said with a smirk...
'Sorry to disappoint you Shyna, lekin main yeh nehi kar sakte... Haan tumhe zarur sikha sakti hun... Itna bhi mushkil nehi hai, ek baar seekhlo... Aasaan hojaenge, aur tumhari paise bhi bachjaenge...' Riddhima said making Shyna boil in anger...
'Anyways thanks but no thanks...' Shyna said...
'As you wish...' Riddhima said...
'Whatever, aur haan... Mere paas kuch kapde hai, shayad tumhe chahiyeh hoga... I mean mom used to give my cloths to you before toh maine socha abhi woh nehi toh main tumhe bata dun... Please do come and take it...' Shyna said taunting very well knowing how Riddhima condition was before...
'Thank you so much Shyna, lekin woh kiya haina... Woh jo kapde haina, woh main nehi pehen sakti kyunki main toh dhoop mein chalti hun... Tumhare tarah air condition kamre mein nehi beiti, aur abhi bhi dekhlo khud koh... Itni waqt ke liye tum car se baahar aagayi toh tumhe pasina aagayi... Jao jao, air condition car mein beito... Wohi tumhare liye sahi jhaga hai...' Riddhima said as now she wasn't the one who used to listen to Shyna taunt like before because she knows, it was how her life was but not anymore...

Seeing how her each word make Shyna boil in anger, Riddhima smirk as she manage to hit her badly giving the same dose she used to give her, taking advantage of her condition... It wasn't like Riddhima but she don't know why, there was no girl in earth that she hates more than Shyna...

Maybe it was because the way she had been treating her from the first day, so Riddhima didn't bother to make peace but return back her dose the way she used to give it to her... Not waiting for Shyna reply, Riddhima left very well knowing Shyna must have got her words...
'Samajhte kiya hai yeh Riddhima khud koh...' Shyna said as she grin being angry on Riddhima and the way she answer back her which she never thought Riddhima would ever dare to do...


WEEKS LATER


Riddhima was collecting cans and bottles which were thrown on the floor, before sweeping the place... It wasn't big but a small hall and they have three rooms as Riddhima live with her eldest brother Prakash who loves her deary and take care of her after their parents died when Riddhima was very young...

However, Riddhima didn't like the friends Prakash have in his life but being smaller than him, she didn't want to tell him with whom he should be and not... Riddhima knows that her brother wouldn't let anyone harm or hurt her and he was doing his best to let Riddhima studies as further as she want...

While Riddhima was busy in cleaning, a guy came and stood near the door seeing Riddhima... He look at Riddhima figure as she was wearing a top and jeans with her hair hold in to a messy bun with some hair falling around her cheeks...

Riddhima who wasn't aware of the lustful eyes being on her body, kept doing her work as she wants to end everything and go back to studies as exams were getting near... Doing part time job and also studying, Riddhima manage everything in the house as no other person live with them other than her and her brother...
'Chikni, ek baar humhare taraf bhi dekhlo...' Guy said moving in, getting Riddhima attention...
'Shut up Vivek...' Riddhima said showing angry eyes...
'Hayye, tumhari ek nazar humhare dil koh kaatil karta hai... Mujhse shaadi karlo, tujhe hamesha khush rakhunga... Tumhare bhai koh koi problem nehi hoga, woh bohot khush hoga kyunki aaj mere wajahse usse itna accha kaam mila hai...' Vivek said...

Riddhima roll her eyes hearing Vivek words and she very well know about which work he was talking, Riddhima didn't like a bit of whatever her brother do to earn money is the reason that she do job while studying because she want herself to be safe and independent...
'Tum insaan kitna matlabi hota hai, chota sa shakti kiya mil gaye, dusron koh apna power dikhate ho...' Riddhima said in a dangerous voice as if she is ghost or spirit...
'Bhooottt...' Vivek scream hearing Riddhima change voice...

Before Riddhima could say anything more, Vivek run away from there making Riddhima laugh seeing how easily Vivek got scared when she speak in a different voice... Riddhima didn't bother to check where he left because she knows he has come to meet her brother who wasn't in the house at the moment...


OUTSIDE THE HOUSE


Vivek came running out and that was the moment Nikki was coming to meet Riddhima, seeing someone running crazily without caring about the attention he was getting with his sudden craziness, Nikki wondered what happen to him as she recognized it was a friend of Riddhima brother Prakash...
'Aaahhh, bhooottt...' Vivek scream when Nikki came face to face him...
'Aaahhh...' Nikki also scream as Vivek run away without looking Nikki as he was sweating badly from head to toe...

Nikki also run inside to see Riddhima cleaning the hall as she act nothing happen, Nikki knows that Riddhima must have done something which make Vivek run away like that because neither she also like Prakash friends because they aren't good at all...

Also they were very well aware that how Vivek behave in front of Prakash towards Riddhima so it wasn't any used to tell him that Vivek didn't leave a chance to flirt with Riddhima because Prakash wouldn't ever believe it... For Prakash, Vivek is the best of friend he ever got in his life after their parents death...
'Is baar kiya kardiya, tum bohot shaitaan hogayi ho Ridzy...' Nikki asked letting herself fall in the couch...
'Aise logo ke saath aisa hi karna chahiyeh, shaitaanon ke saath humein bhi shaitaan banna padti hai Niks...' Riddhima said...
'Baat toh sahi hai tumhari, accha kiya bhaga diya...' Nikki said laughing remembering how Vivek has turn white being scared...
'I know that Niks...' Riddhima said as they hi-fi each other laughing thinking Vivek expression...


@NIGHT


Armaan was checking the time as he waited not far from Riddhima house, he had called her five minutes ago to get a quick answer from Riddhima saying that she would come out in few minutes but still Armaan was left waiting for her...

Armaan knows Riddhima wouldn't like him keep calling so not having any other option than waiting, Armaan kept playing with his mobile to kill the time not knowing how long Riddhima would take to come... When another five minute past, Armaan thought of calling but he felt a soft breeze giving the feeling that Riddhima was closed to him...

Armaan eyes got closed automatically feeling Riddhima present around him as it give an unknown yet beautiful feeling to his heart... Armaan didn't realized he stood with his eyes closed lost in Riddhima thought until Riddhima soft voice bring him out from his trace...
'Armaan...' Riddhima whisper his name as she stood in front of him, seeing his eyes was closed...

Realizing his feelings were true that he don't need to see her with his eyes to feel her present, Armaan open his eyes to get lost in Riddhima who was looking like an Angel... Armaan was short of words seeing how simply beautiful she was looking in that long red dress he has given her on her birthday a week ago which has open back and V neck...

Riddhima has left her hair open like usual, minimum make up and silver earrings as only jewelry which match her high heels... The dress has cut on right side, revealing her milky leg up to her knee which give a sexy look to her attire...


RIDDHIMA'S DRESS





Seeing Armaan lost expression Riddhima felt her cheeks flush but controlling it, Riddhima fake cough to get his attention which successfully work as it did bring Armaan out from his shock state... Riddhima look down at her hand as she check him when she came towards him and he was looking super dashing with the shirt which match to her dress...

Armaan who didn't realized that his gaze were making Riddhima uncomfortable, kept staring at her as he felt how beautiful she was looking today... Specially when she was wearing the dress he has gift her, Armaan knows Riddhima don't wear such dress but to his request she got ready in that particular dress...
'Chale...???' Armaan asked as her beauty was making him loose control over his sense...

Without saying anything, Riddhima sit in the car as Armaan open the door for her... Soon Armaan was also in the car behind the wheel and their journey to the destination for the night start in silent and it continue until they reach the place which was away from the crowded city...


UNKNOWN PLACE


'Armaan, aur kitni dur...???' Riddhima ask as they had been walking for like fifteen minutes...
'Bas hum almost pochgaye...' Armaan said as he hold her hand and other hand was around her shoulder...
'I m sure yaha andhera hoga, why did you blindfold me...' Riddhima said...
'Uff, kitna sawal karte ho tum Riddhima... Mujhpe trust nehi hai...???' Armaan ask moving his face close to her ear making Riddhima heart skip a beat feeling his warm breath...
'Armaan...' Riddhima just whisper his name as his closeness were affecting so much which make difficult for her to stand on her feet for long...

Armaan smile very well knowing what affect Riddhima was having feeling him so close, as they had almost reached their destination Armaan let go off her hand which make Riddhima scared but feeling his present, Riddhima knew that Armaan didn't leave her alone...

Armaan look at the arrangement and smile very well knowing, how much Riddhima would love it... Still Armaan was nervous but thinking to go ahead with what he has plan, he move behind Riddhima and open the blindfold as he move her side so he could see her reaction...

Riddhima who was happy to be finally freed from that cloth which was on her eyes, open it to be left shocked... Riddhima open her mouth to question Armaan what was the need to blindfold her but seeing the decoration in front of her, the question was lost itself in her mouth before it comes out...

Riddhima wasn't expecting anything like this as she thought, it would be just like a normal dinner but Armaan has make much more plans than those usual dinner they used to share from last few weeks... As Riddhima was in her shocked state which make Armaan smile, he thought to go ahead with his plan...

So to get her attention, Armaan move in front of her putting two steps distance between them and next moment he slowly knee down making Riddhima gasp and cover her mouth realizing what he was up to because it turn truth when Armaan forward a simple yet beautiful engagement ring to her...
'Zyada badi badi lafz nehi hai mere paas lekin bas itna kehna chahta hun main tumhare saath apne baaki ki zindagi guzarna chahta hun... Kiya tum mujhe apni zindagi mein tohdasa jhaga denge, tumhari haat thaam ke har sukh, dukh mein tumhari saath de sakhun...???
Shayad yeh bohot jaldi hai lekin kehte haina, pyar karne ke liye ek pal hi kaafi hota hai... Aisa hi kuch mere saath bhi huva hai... Jis din pehli baar tumhe dekha, main apne dil koh control nehi karpaya aur aaj, yeh dil sirf tumhare liye dhadakta hai...
Ms. Riddhima Gupta, I love you... Will you give the pleasure of sharing your life with me by giving a small space from it...??? I promise you, I will love you forever and deeply because u r only girl I felt like this in my life till date and I wish it to be like that till the day the girl come in my life as my daughter...' Armaan said as he slowly hold Riddhima hand while he still hold the ring in his other hand...

Riddhima was too happy to say any word, so without thinking she just bend and kiss Armaan forehead lingering her lips on his skin... Armaan smile feeling Riddhima soft lips on his skin which send a current pass through his veins...
'So, is that a yes...???' Armaan asked when Riddhima move away...

Riddhima smile and lower her eyes as she nodded her head slowly, that was it... Next moment Armaan slip the ring in her engagement finger and kiss it before standing which make Riddhima cheeks color turn to crimson... As he had been waiting to take her in his arms, Armaan pull her close to him hiding her in his chest...
'I love you, I love you a lot...' Armaan whisper, hiding his face on her hair near her neck...
'I love you too Armaan, I love u a lot...' Riddhima whisper too feeling heaven to be in his arms which make her feel secure and protective...


AN HOUR LATER


'This place is so beautiful Armaan, yeh sab tumne kab kiya...???' Riddhima asked as she sit in between Armaan leg, resting her back on his chest...
'Maine nehi, main kuch log se karwaya... I m happy, u like it... I know zyada fancy nehi hai, its very simple...' Armaan said holding her in his arms with his arms around her waist as he rest his back on the big tree where they were sitting...
'Issiliyeh toh itni khubsurat hai, its simple yet most unique decoration anyone has done for me... Bohot khubsurat hai, har taraf andhera hai lekin is ped ke paas roshanee hai kyunki tumne yeh bulbs aur lantern use ki candles ke saath...' Riddhima said as she look around their surrounding...


DECORATION OF TREE





Armaan smile hearing how these simple things make Riddhima happy and feel special, he knows he didn't need to put much affect to bring that beautiful smile on her face because small things make her happy and accept it from deep down her heart...

Money never was important to her from the beginning and she has prove it several time by showing her excitement on simple and priceless things Armaan has got or done for her... Armaan never thought, he would fall in love with someone so simple yet kind like Riddhima but he felt bless to have Riddhima in his life...


KAISE BATAAOON From 3G


Kaise bataaun tujhe
Ke dil mera kya keh rahaa
Rahein na faasle yeh
Jo hai apne darmiyaan
(Armaan started to sing as he wanted to express his feelings for her, he wasn't getting the perfect words so he thought to pour it out through this particular song which truly express the emotions of his heart for her...)
Ho...
Kaise bataaun tujhe
Ke dil mera kya keh rahaa
Rahein na faasle yeh...
Jo hai apne darmiyaan
(Being lost in the lyrics, Armaan slowly move his fingers on her bare arms making Riddhima closed her eyes feeling the love which make her heart race fast... Riddhima was still sitting with her back resting on Armaan chest, Armaan one hand was around her waist while other move up and down on her arm...)
Tere kareeb main ho sakoon...
Dede tu apni razaa...
Pass bithaaun
Yeh zulf sawaarun
Aur baahon mein le loon tujhe main...
Hai dil ki yeh kwaahish
Ke sunn le guzaarish
Aur dede tu khud ko mujhe...
(While singing, Armaan slowly move Riddhima hair to side from her shoulder... Riddhima just sit letting Armaan pour out his feelings through the song, letting him also shower his love on her... Armaan slowly move his fingers on her hair, he hides his face on her neck nuzzling behind her ear as he moves his both hands around her waist which Riddhima hold to control herself because she was loosing sense feeling Armaan touch...)
Ooo... O...
Ooo...
Ooo... O ho...
Ooo...
Tujhse mohabbat hui hai...
Meri hai bas yeh khataa
Tujhse main door rahoon
Yeh mujhko gawaara kahaan
Main tere saath mein hi rahoon
Chodo yeh saara jahaan
(Not being able to take Armaan touch, Riddhima turn around while she sing the lyrics pouring her feelings for him... As she hasn't said anything more other than those three words, she knew it was the best way to express her feelings for him which is equally deep as his... Riddhima touch Armaan cheek looking deep in his orbs, not being able to take his unconditional love which was visible in his eyes, Riddhima break the eye-lock and rest her head on his shoulder, hugging him making herself comfortable in his arms...)

Pass bithaaun
Yeh zulf sawaarun
Aur baahon mein le loon tujhe main...
Hai dil ki yeh kwaahish
Ke sunn le guzaarish
Aur dede tu khud ko mujhe...
(Hearing those words from her, Armaan felt that he got everything he desire in life... When Riddhima hugs him, he also hugs her tight as he softly care her body as Riddhima make him believe that she only belongs to him which is the reason that she is in his arms at the moment...)
Ooo... O...
Ooo...
Ooo... O ho...
Ooo...
Ho... O...
Ho... O...
Teri adaaon mein doob loon
Doob loon main tujhi mein...
Ho jaaun tere itne kareeb
Ki main dikhoon ab tujhi mein...
(Breaking the hug, Riddhima stood up but Armaan didn't leave her as he also stood up slowly holding her hand... Riddhima smile feeling Armaan intertwined their fingers and seeing her flush face, Armaan pull her in his arms making Riddhima gasp as she got jammed on Armaan chest...)
Pass bithaaun
Yeh zulf sawaarun
Aur baahon mein le loon tujhe main..
Hai dil ki yeh kwaahish
Ke sunn le guzaarish
Aur dede tu khud ko mujhe...
(Both got lost in each other as Riddhima hands laid on Armaan chest which was visible due to the three buttons left open... Armaan hands were carelessly around her waist, holding her closed to him as they swing holding each other close...)
Ooo... O...
Ooo...
Ooo... O ho...
Ooo...
Ooo... O...
Ooo...
Ooo... O ho...
Ooo...
Kaise bataaun tujhe
Ke dil mera kya keh rahaa


As the song came to an end, Armaan hold Riddhima one hand while singing the last lines of the song and kept it closed to his heart which was beating faster having Riddhima so closed to him... Armaan kept his hand over her hand so she wouldn't pull back her hand, Riddhima was too lost to realized that her hand was in Armaan hold which was kept closed to his heart which was beating her name with every beat of his heart...



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Edited by RihooHaws - 7 years ago
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Awww. Inki love story kitni cute hai! But, yeh chapter padhke I am sure, Shyna ne jaan boojhke AR ke beech mein issues create kiye honge, with Vivek's help, cause she wanted revenge. Plus, woh Armaan ko like bhi karti thi. toh uske liye double lottery!
But, really. Armaan is so cute! I really liked him! Bas ab, I hope ki aage jaake Ridzy se zyada bura na behave kare woh!

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