Rikara 'I Love My Anti-Fan' A/N pg 83 - Page 44

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Posted: 7 years ago
I really didn't expect you to give up on this 😒
Take a break Vivi...continue whenever u feel like...but just don't end it .🥺
I know how it feels to hv no inspiration 😔 But trust me , everyone loves this !

I really enjoyed and loved this part ❤️
Keep writing .
Edited by AhamyTed - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
That was by far my favorite chapter
It was just perfect
you had laughter, romance, just everything!!


And Vivi I completely understand you, It is hard to write if there is no inspiration left. With RiKara barely there on screen it gets harder to write for them but I really hope that you won't stop this story.
Take your time and then return to us ❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
The update was far far amazing than what I've thought of it to be!
U need not stop dear writer!! Go on
The update was awesome n the next one too will be awesome as will
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Posted: 7 years ago
Gosh Vivi..!! 👏
It has to be my fav chapter of this story.. ❤️
Tipsy Gauri is always adorable.. 😃
I loved the way she confessed before everyone that she's the obe who's in love with Omkara..that little writer can surely not tolerate Omkara with someone he's not comfortable with..
The way Omkara declared Gauri as his made me go aww..he's definitely possessive about his writer.. 😉 😳
And the kiss..!! Ufff.. ☺️
I loved it throughout.. 😃 😳
If you're not inspired enough then take a break..we're ready to wait.. 😳
I'll be an achha bachha and won't trouble you for update.. 😃
But don't leave it Vivi.. 💔 Pleej..?? 😭
Edited by tasnimrodela - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
It is best chapter till now. On first part where Gauri doesn't get any clue of what Avay wants to say is funny but that last part is really cute with her clarification.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Thank you so so so much for updating. This is beyond beautiful. I love ppl who love food as I love it too❤️ Your Om is truly a hero!
Instead of looking for inspiration from the show can I request you to look at your ardent readers like ME and continue this.
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Posted: 7 years ago


Am I Your Vamp?


As he carried her off planning to head towards the parking lot Om heard a slight whimper. Looking down to see Gauri's glossy eyes and pink cheeks "Whats the matter? Gauri licks her lips to taste the frosting "I thought that since I had solved your problem that I could go back and finish the last piece of chocolate cake. Om lets out a chuckle "Solve my problem? I think you made things worse. Gauri's eyes widen with confusion "worse? how so? Gently putting her down onto the hard concrete so that he could open the passenger car door "Sit. Wanting to resist Gauri refused to budge only to have Om lean closer to nudge her in. "Tell me...how did I make it worse? Before closing the car door Gauri could see Om smirk at her. Gauri could not figure out what she had done wrong and when Om finally got into the driver's seat Gauri once again asked him "Om...tell me. Not wanting to talk about it with a tipsy person Om leans over to grab Gauri's seatbelt and by doing so the little writer froze. With his lips only a breath away from hers Gauri could no longer remember what she wanted to say...his dark chocolate eyes was causing her heart to beat rapidly. Not knowing that she was grabbing her seatbelt tightly against her chest she started to hiccup again. **Hiccup..Hiccup** Gauri's eyes grew wider as she starts to remember how Om had stopped it just moments ago. His lips curved up seeing Gauri bite her lips to stop the hiccuping. "If you bite any harder your lips will bleed. His warm husky voice made everything he said a blur. Gauri could only stare at his lips not knowing she was biting down harder on her lips. With his thumb Om gently grazed over Gauri's soft lips "let me help you once again. Her lips still tasted like chocolate while her tongue unskillfully tried to chase his. With his warm lips pressed against hers Gauri could not help but grab Om's black collared shirt to deepen the kiss. His tongue was so hot that she felt as if it was so hard to pull away. Only when she started to get dizzy due to lack of air did Om forcefully pulled her grip off of his collar "Breathe... If Gauri thought she was tipsy before than she is definitely drunk now. The only thing Gauri remembered after the kiss was saying "You are not allowed to help anyone else with their hiccup problems. Finally securing her seatbelt "Only if you admit that your first kiss was taken by me...finally. Her cheeks grew even hotter as Om made her realize he indeed has taken her first kiss. Trying to avoid his stare Gauri could only muster up the words "It's undeniable that you have taken my first kiss. Gently moving the loose strands away from her face "I hope to be the only one...not just the first... Not brave enough to meet his eyes Gauri stared off into the night as he drove them back to the apartment complex.

Right when Gauri entered her apartment she changed her clothes and brushed her teeth to get ready for bed while telling herself not to drink so much wine next time. And as she laid down on her comfy bed her last thoughts were still of Om and their kiss.


The next morning Gauri woke up with a slight headache. Thankfully it was a Sunday so there was no need to go to work and face everyone. Bhavya also made an effort today and came by for lunch. Seeing Gauri just sitting and eating junk food and drinking soda Bhavya knew something was up.


Bhavya: So...aren't you going to tell me what happened on your little date with Omkara?


Gauri: Date? It was not a date. More like a get together with co-workers.


Bhavya sits closer to her friend who was still stuffing her face while sitting on the sofa "Well you sure did call me and ask me what to wear and how to do your makeup lastnight.


Gauri bashfully looks down at her bag of chips "We kissed.


Bhavya shockingly "What?! You kissed?


Still not wanting to look away from her bag of chips "Twice.


Bhavya laughs at her innocent friend "Twice?!


Gauri reaches for her can of soda to chug it while her friend smiles ear to ear staring at her.


Bhavya: So...are you guys like...dating now?


Gauri jerks her head up "I dunno.


Bhavya: Do you like him?

Gauri: I dunno.

Bhavya: Does he like you?

Gauri: Maybe?

Bhavya wanted to strangle her friend "So it was just a kiss and nothing else?


Gauri proceeded to tell Bhavya all that happened that night to the best of her recollection and while doing so she could only see her friend smile grow bigger and bigger.


Bhavya: It seems to me that you like him and didn't want to see him dance with another woman Gauri.


Gauri wanted to scream into her couch pillow "AHHH I don't want to feel like this! What to do? So embarrassing..He said I made things worse...and now I'm too embarrass to face him.


Bhavya: How did you make things worse?

Gauri: He didn't tell me. Do you think he likes me?


Bhavya knew that Omkara likes Gauri the minute she saw them together but she wanted her friend to go through these moments of realization on her own. "I don't know. Why don't you ask him?


Not being able to handle having Om consume her mind Gauri turns on the TV only to see videos and photos of Omkara and Ishana dancing last night. The buzz was that these two were an item. Gauri didn't know that because of the stunt she pulled Pinky had to make sure to go all out and leak the pictures of Ishana and Om to the press and every media outlet.


Gauri: Omg Bhavya...what if Omkara wanted to spend time with that Ishana and I ruined it for him?


Bhavya: I doubt it.


Gauri: But look at the photos and the video...they look perfect together.


Bhavya: But you said you heard your boss forced him to.


Gauri: But still...I never asked him if he was forced or willing. I can't just assume...OMG I am like a real-life VAMP!...I forced him to take me to the party...that's like blackmail...I got drunk and claimed him in front of everyone...OMG...I am a VAMP.


Bhavya starts to laugh "You are not a VAMP


Holding her can of soda and watching the gossip on her TV Gauri started to get jealous at all the close up shots and not knowing that she was crushing the can in her hand. Only when she felt the fizz on her skin "OmG!


Bhavya: What now...


Gauri lifts up the crushed can of soda "Look...I just did a Vamp Thing...pure jealousy!


Bhavya: You are not a VAMP. Too naive to be one.


Gauri: NO! I write for a serial Bhavya... I know how to spot a VAMP.


Bhavya could only shake her head at her crazy friend when all of a sudden Gauri jumps up from her sofa "Wait. I could be a heroine too right? All I have to do is ask the ML if he sees me as a VAMP or a heroine.


Bhavya leans back on her sofa "So...you are going to ask Omkara?


Gauri pushes her specs up and looks confidently towards the door "Yes. I will go ask him right now if I am his VAMP or Heroine.


**Hope you guys like this...I thought of this when new VAmps were introduce in the serial 😆**

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Posted: 7 years ago
wowan update after so long
gauri
can anyone be cuter than her?
their kiss😳
gauri thinks herself a vamp in Ishkara story🤣she is so naive
thank you so much for this cuteeyyy update👏
can we expect an update from ur another ff "the king also wants"...it is also not updated since a long time😭
would like to receive more nd more beautiful updates from both ur ff s👍🏼
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Posted: 7 years ago
YOU UPDATED!!!!

Oh man! This makes my heart sooo happy!! I was hoping Om and Gauri's story would be all over the media outlets but this is waaayyy more funny!!! Gauri just cracks me up so much! I'd love to know what's going in Om's head 😳

Thank you so much for the update! And I hope you keep getting more inspiration and motivation!!!

Cheers,

Neet
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Posted: 7 years ago



Love it!!!!!! 😆


First the new definition of Friends with benefits, and now vamps!!! This is amazing, your reverse take on things. 🤣


Vivi you should deffo write more comedy. You are really good at it. 👍🏼



This update is just icing on the cake. The good news which usually comes on thursday, came today, and now this update.


Unexpected updates get me hyped like nothing else!!!

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