You know what!! I had just read thecfirst part of your story once and had left it where it was b'coz i had liked the idea of annika getting kidnapped but not the idea of shivaay's memory loss. But man, when i today saw that u had updated the last part and the epilogue, i started reading just these two part like an os, and god, i'm in with your writing skills. A part of a story written so brilliantly that it can be read as an os also, symbolises great writing in my world.
I am so happy that annika's pregnant. And shivaay's outburst was a much needed one. And shivaay being grumpy when he was a baby was so funny ;) Shivika taking each other's care was so good. But the last intense and hot, just made my day. I always wanted writers to write on this phase of pregnancy, where we can witness the naughty mommy and dady. Annika keeping hands on shivaay's eyes was so funny. And shivaay addressing anika as biwi was so great.
Love,
Abhi
P.s.
"Stop it! I DON'T CARE who the hell he is. If he is an Oberoi, our COUSIN, why is he after MY WIFE!?^^ This line, was the most awesome one š
Edited by jaansahiba - 7 years ago
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