Shivika SS: Ties that Bind ~22.3~ LAST PART + EPILOGUE pg 10

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Himanshi

@Blink_Cat

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Posted: 7 years ago

#61

amazing updates,,, pinky anika scene was amazing, so is t angest emotional that was, bt t end note was amazing with t happiness of them.. so beautifully written.

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Nohsin10

@Nohsin10

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#62

Fantastic update

Totally loved it

Annika is really strong

Love pinky & Annika's bonding

Shivaay was angry

Lovely epilogue

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Thwisha617

@Thwisha617

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#63

Wow!

Reading an update like this is so intriguing n blissful but difficult working around.i have been glued to the phone past one hour with ppl asking what needs to b done at work n i get disturbed n start the story all over again!😳

This ia Lovely Anisa.

The Love,hate,revenge,pain n beautiful end.

Its a blockbuster!!!!👏

Thank u for penning it down.what i liked The most was his questions to her after The storm. The line ' she Lives with one foot out of The door'👏

I do believe nobody should be so sacrificial on each other's behalf.yes protecting loved ones is important but not at The cost of one's own self😳 and even if they do The family needs to rush to their support before not after!

Edited by Thwisha617 - 7 years ago

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sky-if

@sky-if

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#64

Wow! Just why oh why couldn't you be on the IB CVs team? Sigh. Thank you for a lovely SS!

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abhilasha

@jaansahiba

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#65

You know what!! I had just read thecfirst part of your story once and had left it where it was b'coz i had liked the idea of annika getting kidnapped but not the idea of shivaay's memory loss. But man, when i today saw that u had updated the last part and the epilogue, i started reading just these two part like an os, and god, i'm in with your writing skills. A part of a story written so brilliantly that it can be read as an os also, symbolises great writing in my world.
I am so happy that annika's pregnant. And shivaay's outburst was a much needed one. And shivaay being grumpy when he was a baby was so funny ;) Shivika taking each other's care was so good. But the last intense and hot, just made my day. I always wanted writers to write on this phase of pregnancy, where we can witness the naughty mommy and dady. Annika keeping hands on shivaay's eyes was so funny. And shivaay addressing anika as biwi was so great.
Love,
Abhi
P.s. "Stop it! I DON'T CARE who the hell he is. If he is an Oberoi, our COUSIN, why is he after MY WIFE!?
^^ This line, was the most awesome one 😊

Edited by jaansahiba - 7 years ago