Tamanna hai tujhe paane ki : Ishra SS shot 9 pg 29

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jaanishra

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Posted: 7 years ago

Hi everyone this is lavu... Keep reading and enjoy..!!

PROLOGUE

R : ishita jaldi chalo... Hum late ho jayenge... Kya kar rahi hoo yaar??

I : haan haan.. Abhi aayi..!!!

Raman was waiting outside her cabin... Soon Ishita showed up..

I : sry.. I'm vry sry sir.. I'm late.. Main voh.. (St- dhaattt ishu kya kar rahi hai yaar?? Dhant kaani hai kya..?? Ye ravan Kumar mujhe fire kar dhega...!!)

I'm sry sorry sir.. Main late hogayi.. Aur ab meri wajah se aap bhi late ho gaye... Aur ab meri wajah se meeting bhi lat...

He cut her in between...

R : (he made an irritated face) Arre bas karo na yaar... Jab dhekho shuru hoo jaati hoo lecture dena... Tujhe Maine apni lecture likhne ke liye rakha tha.. Sunnane ke liye nahi...

Ishita made a puppy face and was looking down sad and said sry sir I won't repeat this again.. He saw her face and felt bad for scolding her tht to in front of their colleagues...

R : Chalo is baar maaf kar diya.. Lekin agli baar aise nahi chalega.. Chalo abb..

She nodded and went behind him.. Both headed towards the conference hall..

(Author's note - that's it for the prologue guys.. This is my first attempt here.. Plz like comment and give your reviews.. )

INDEX

Shot 1 - pg 3

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ye-hai-mohabbatein/4978076/tamanna-hai-tujhe-paane-ki-ishra-ss-shot-9-pg-29?pn=3

Shot 2 - pg 6

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ye-hai-mohabbatein/4978076/tamanna-hai-tujhe-paane-ki-ishra-ss-shot-9-pg-29?pn=6

Shot 3 - pg 9

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ye-hai-mohabbatein/4978076/tamanna-hai-tujhe-paane-ki-ishra-ss-shot-9-pg-29?pn=9

Shot 4 - pg 11

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/146947992

Shot 5 - pg 13

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ye-hai-mohabbatein/4978076/tamanna-hai-tujhe-paane-ki-ishra-ss-shot-9-pg-29?pn=13

Teaser - pg 14

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/147023496

Shot 6 - pg 16

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/147042372

Shot 7 - pg 19

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/147129234

Shot 8 - pg 23

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/147195394

Teaser - pg 25

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/147217884

Shot 9 - pg 29

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/147285748

Edited by jaanishra - 7 years ago

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myangels

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Posted: 7 years ago

Congratulations ..
Interesting prologue ..
Plz continue soon..
Thank you..

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jaanishra

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: divz9769
interesting
pls update soon

Yes I'll do it..

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jaanishra

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: myangels
Congratulations ..
Interesting prologue ..
Plz continue soon..
Thank you..

Thank you.. yes I'll do it soon..

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raksha

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Posted: 7 years ago

First of all welcome to writing world

And all the best

Coming to the prologue

It's short but nice. Waiting for more to know the story

Updt soon

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jaanishra

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: cutieruhi
First of all welcome to writing world
And all the best
Coming to the prologue
It's short but nice. Waiting for more to know the story
Updt soon

Thanks a lottt di.. yes I'll update it soon..

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Divanru

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Posted: 7 years ago

Welcome to ishra writing world lavu .

Congo for new story .

Lovely start .

Ishita is Raman's pa who is always late .

But still Raman didn't say her anything

Loved the prologue .

Waiting eagerly for part one .

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Pasoori

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Posted: 7 years ago

Hi.

That was a nice prologue that gave me a brief idea of IshRa's relationship with each other. Just a word of feedback: the prologue would've been better if you'd given your readers an idea of the duo's character motivations, respectively 😃

I am awaiting the first part. Welcome to the forum and all the best ❤️

P.S. I love the title. It got me really attracted to the story.

Edited by UmeraTariq - 7 years ago

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jaanishra

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Divanru
Welcome to ishra writing world lavu .
Congo for new story .
Lovely start .
Ishita is Raman's pa who is always late .
But still Raman didn't say her anything
Loved the prologue .
Waiting eagerly for part one .

Thanks a lottt di... I'll update it soon..

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jaanishra

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: UmeraTariq
Hi.

That was a nice prologue that gave me a brief idea of IshRa's relationship with each other. Just a word of feedback: the prologue would've been better if you'd given your readers an idea of the duo's character motivations, respectively 😃

I am awaiting the first part. Welcome to the forum and all the best ❤️

P.S. I love the title. It got me really attracted to the story.

Thank you sooo much..!!! You'll understand gradually by reading the next parts..!! Yeah I'll update it soon..!!