Tamanna hai tujhe paane ki : Ishra SS shot 9 pg 29 - Page 14

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Ishrardreams

Shot 7

So flashback starts !...u have strted it very well !!!...so ishra wre best friends... ...supporting each other in their most difficult situations...n at last the proposal!!every thing whatever u wrote was lovely👏...I personally enjoyer evry bit of it ...but yaar ..why made u to...eliminate their parents character?.. Its OK...
Waiting eagerly for the next!!!!
...I think if u combine together u ll getva very very big comment !!!!..it took my ten minutes!!..but it'd OK...
I m coming in 5mins

Thanks alottt... 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
Lovely update
I luvd d fb
Clean n simple
So he proposed her on their success party n she accepted
Eager to know morw
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: akriti154

Lovely update

I luvd d fb
Clean n simple
So he proposed her on their success party n she accepted
Eager to know morw
Continue soon
Thanks for pm

Thank you sooo much akku di..!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
Sry for the late update guys..
The link to the previous shot if necessary..

Shot 8

Few months passed by.. In this time their success grew and even Ishra were enjoying their life.. One fine day... Ishra and Romi were very busy working on a new project.. Just the Raman's assistant came in..

A : sir some one has come to meet Ms.Ishita Iyer..!!

All the three were shocked listening to this.. Till now except Raman and Romi no one else knew her surname.. !!!

R : wh..who has come to meet her..?? and how do know her name is Ishita Iyer..!!

I : yeah.. Who has come to meet me..

A : I don't know there are two men.. They say that they are your relatives mam..

I : Relatives..?? My relatives..?? Who..?? Do I really have relatives..?? I myself didn't know it..!!

All of them went out to see who it was..!

They saw two men in their early fifty's waiting for her..

M1 : ishu kanna.. Kaisi hoo beta..??

I : kaun hai aap log..?? Aapko kaise patha ki mera naam Ishu hai..??

M2 : hum dhono tumhare papa ke cousins hai.. Hum unke chachaji ke bete hai..

I : ek minute mujhe khud patha nahi ki mere papa kaun hai.. Tho main aap logon par kaise vishwas karon..??

M1 : ye dekho..!!

He shows a pic to Ishita in which her mother stands smiling holding a man's hand.. It looked like her wedding pic..

M1 : ye tumhari maa hai na.. Unke saath jo kade hai.. Vahi tumhare papa hai..

I : haan ye tho meri maa hai.. She had tears in her eyes seeing the pic.. Matlab..! Ye mere papa hai..!!

Ro : agar aap log sach mein bhabhi ke chacha ho tho itne dhino se mile kyon nahi..? Aur bhabhi ke papa kahan hai..?

Both were irritated by listening 'bhabhi' from Romi and looked at Raman then looked at each other... They became a lil uncomfortable but didn't let them know.. But Raman noticed this one...

M2 : ab voh uss duniya mein nahi rahe..!

I : kya..??

M1 : haan aur unki aakri kwaahish thi ki unki beti mere bete se shaadi kar le..

R : (shocked) kya..??

M2 : haan veer bhaiyya chahte the ki unki beti Mahesh bhsakte.. ke bete se shaadi karle..

I : iska matlab unhe patha tha ki unki ek beti bhi hai.. Agar unhe sab patha tha .. Tho unhone hume kyon chod diya..? Kyon..?? Agar mere papa zinda the tho meri maa kyon akheli seh rahi thi..??

Mahesh : nahi ishu tumhare papa acche insaan nahi hai.. issliye tumhari maa ne unhe chod diya...aur main unke baare mein nahi bathana chahtha hoon..kyonki voh nahi chahte ki tum bhi unhe nafrat karo..

Prakash : par beta tum unki aakri ichha puri kar sakti ho na kanna.. tum karogi na Karthik se shaadi..??

Ishita was about to say something but Raman interrupted.. Romi was also not understanding his reaction..!

R : kyon nahi..! karegi na shaadi Ishita.. tumhare papa ki aakri wish thi.. tumne Karthik se shaadi karni padegi..

Ro : par bhai..!

R : haan sahi keh rahe hai uncle ji...

Ishita gave him a irritating look.. While those two smirked seeing each other.. this was also noticed by Raman..

R : uncle ji aap log jaake aaram ki jiye uss room mein..

He send them into the waiting room.. Ishita was about to go from there but Raman dragged her to his cabin she romi also followed him..but waited outside knowing they'll need some lone time..

I : Raman aapko hoo kya gaya hai.. Main aise hi kisi se shaadi kyon karon.. ?

R : kyon nahi karogi ..? Tumhare papa ke aakri wish thi..!!

I : aapko sunai se rahi hai ki aap kya bolo rahe ho.. Raman mein aapse pyaar karti hoon.. Main aapse shaadi karna chahthi hoon.. naaki kisi aur se.. !!

Raman cams forward and held her by her shoulders..

R : Ishi you r not understanding..! voh log tumhare chacha hai unhe tum par mujse zyada hakh hai.. voh tumhare bura nahi chahenge na..!!

She got out of his hold..

I : Bura.?? Raman mujhe aaj tak nahi patha ki mere papa bhi hai.. aur aaj kya patha chal gaya.. is it necessary that I should value him and his wishes.. Don't I have a heart..? I too have wishes.. I love you Raman.. Main aapke bina nahi jee sakti.. !! Aur mujhe patha hai aap bhi mere bina nahi reh sakte.. Tears started flowing from her eyes..

She came to hug him but he pushed her back.. She was shocked by his action..

R : (angrily) Ishita just stop it..!! Whatever he is.. He's your father.. You've to respect him and his desires.. His wish was that you've to marry Karthik.. What's soo big in that..??

I : Raman what's wrong with you.. Aap ye keh rahe ho what's soo big.. Seriously Raman...?? Main aise nahi karoongi chahe kuch bhi ho jaye.. Main sirf aapko chahti hoon.. Abhi nahi Raman bachpan se main aapke saath hoon.. Main sirf aapse pyaar karti hoon.. Aur kisi se nahi..

Ishita wiped her tears and leaves the cabin even without looking back.. Romi was listening to their talk.. He was crying by now.. He called Ishita..

Ro : bhabhi .. !!

She didn't listen to him.. She just ran from there.. Romi went inside the cabin and saw Raman dropped himself on the couch and was crying bitterly.. He couldn't see his brother like this and went to him.. Raman hugged him tight and was crying in his brother's embrance.. Romi was trying hard to console him.. He was shocked seeing Raman like this..he had never seen him this broken..

R : (crying) Romi..!! Maine.. Maine use danta.. Voh ro rahi thi.. Maine us par chillaya.. I did soo wrong.. Mujhe aisa nahi karna chahiye tha..

Ro : (having tears in his eyes) bhai agar aapko ye sab patha tha.. tho fir aapne bhabhi ko danta kyon..? aur aapne unse shaadi karne ke liye kyon kahan..?

Raman wiped his tears..

R : kyonki .. Mujhe lagta hai ki vo log joot bolo rahe hai.. voh log mujhe genuine bhi nahi lagta.. unka kuch aur motive hai yahan aane se.. Nd I'll have to find the truth..

Ro : tho fir aapne bhabhi ko kyon danta..?? aur unhe sach kyon nahi bataye..??

R : kyonki agar main ye sab batha deta tho voh kabhi nahi manegi.. Mujhe pehle poora sach jannna hai.. aur agar poora sach janna hai tho drama ko aage badaana padega aur ye Ishita kabhi hone nahi degi.. issliye maine uss par chillaya thaki vo gussa ho jaye aur mujse thodi dhoor rahe.. maine dekha ki voh log mujhe Ishi ke saath dekhjar thoda uncomfortable ho gaye..

Ro : bhabhi bohot ro rahi thi..

R : patha hai.. lekin main kya karon..?? main kuch nahi kar saktha..mujhe inka sach janna padega.. aur bas ek baar patha chal jaye.. tho main khud Ishi ko sab batha doonga.. Romi mera ek help karega..?

Ro : haan bola na..

R : mujhe un dhono ke baare mein aur details chahiye.. and also keep an eye on them constantly.. now check them once..

Ro : teek hai bhai.. main dekhtha hoon..

Romi leaves the cabin.. Raman sees their college pic on his table... She was hugging him from back and smiling.. He goes to the table and picks the frame... He caresses her face

R : (with tears) I'm sorry Ishi.. but I promise mai sab teek kar doonga.. tumhe kuch nahi hone doonga..

He hugged the pic close to his heart and sat down in his chair..

That's it for now friends.. Nowadays I'm finding it difficult to update.. Now I'm understanding the value for a single comment and I'm able to understand the feeling of all the senior writers.. Plz spare a moment to comment.. It really means a lott.. Both positive nd negative are allowed.. and do hit like..
Edited by lavsusername - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update..
Two men suddenly popped out and claimed Ishita as their relative..
They wanted to get her married with their son..
Ishita denied but Raman wanted to find their motive..
Raman behaved rudely with Ishita who was hurt..
Plz update soon..,
Thank you..
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Posted: 7 years ago
superb update
i think ishitas father must have written his property on ishitas name and after marriage her property will get transfer to her husband that is why her uncle want her to get marry to his son raman got doubt on them he asked ishita to get marry to her uncle's son ishita was crying raman scolded her ishita ran from their raman was crying too raman asked romi to get information's about those mans
pls update soon
thanks for the PM
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: divz9769

superb update

i think ishitas father must have written his property on ishitas name and after marriage her property will get transfer to her husband that is why her uncle want her to get marry to his son raman got doubt on them he asked ishita to get marry to her uncle's son ishita was crying raman scolded her ishita ran from their raman was crying too raman asked romi to get information's about those mans
pls update soon
thanks for the PM

Thank you sooo much...!!!! You guessed it pretty well.. But there's lot more to know..😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
Lovely updt
So ishita's uncle want her to get married to his son
I think it's because of some property
But how can her uncle's son can marry her
They r cousins naa
Anyway I think there r lot more then what's looking like
Want raman to be with her always
Updt soon
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: cutieruhi

Lovely updt

So ishita's uncle want her to get married to his son
I think it's because of some property
But how can her uncle's son can marry her
They r cousins naa
Anyway I think there r lot more then what's looking like
Want raman to be with her always
Updt soon

Thank you sooo much di...
Your view is right..
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Posted: 7 years ago
Lovely update .
Ishra lost their parents at early age and started living each other in process of supporting each other .
Raman proposed her in a success party and she accepted it happily
Her uncle want her to marry his son.
Hope this uncle thing end soon

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