Originally posted by: darsh333
New story!😃im happy that you are writing more and more!and i want you to do that😊 Jo hukum mere aaka.!! *bows down 😊
I was expecting avni going for a job interview and there you go you just turned it out as a marriage interview😆loved the twist😆 Hahahaa 😆 Marriage interview. Thats the apt term 😉
I liked how you brought them together in a lift for this story😆 Thank u for pointing that out.!
I wanted something from neil's part too..i felt avni spoke here more or her part was more said in the story but i guess maybe neil's part is coming up in your next part😊 See, Neil is a secret here to Avni and to readees both.! Suppose that You guys didnt know whose pet name Tillu is and only Neil knew it.! How story would have appeared.! He will spill the beans only at last, till then his expressions and his body language will speak.! 😉
And on hearing the name avni didnt the bulb light up in neil's head??😆 Maybe he was also here to meet his Mother's Best Friend's daughter. Who cares what her name is 😉
Neil wouldnt have thought he would have been introduced as tillu to avni..😕😆 Never.! Not atleast to his supposed bride. His mom is a pro in lending him up in such embaressing situations
Story looks like a happy one with happy twists😊waiting for the next part and do update soon girl😊 Oh yeah it is.! Yupp will update soon.