AvNeil 2S : 'New Beginings.!!' (Complete) - Page 4

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Posted: 7 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: mayurg2010

Ok.. I only have one question to be asked.. when is the next part going to be updated??? Today itself 😉

And to tell you about the part, it was beautiful Thank u so much and ya I am going to use this lift concept in my ff. Please don't mind.. I just loved the concept. Feel free to make it as innovative and as different you can, from this write up.!

Please update the status part sooonnn Will do that for sure.!


Thank u so much dear.!
Glad to know that u enjoyed the concept.!
Much love.!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

she is gonna get a shock of a lifettime, but a pleasant one I am sure


Exactly.!
And a gem in her life too in name of Tillu.! 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
#33
New story!😃im happy that you are writing more and more!and i want you to do that😊

I was expecting avni going for a job interview and there you go you just turned it out as a marriage interview😆loved the twist😆

I liked how you brought them together in a lift for this story😆
I wanted something from neil's part too..i felt avni spoke here more or her part was more said in the story but i guess maybe neil's part is coming up in your next part😊

And on hearing the name avni didnt the bulb light up in neil's head??😆

Neil wouldnt have thought he would have been introduced as tillu to avni..😕😆

Story looks like a happy one with happy twists😊waiting for the next part and do update soon girl😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: Sami72

This is so fun. First your ff and then this. Double treat!!! Thank u so much And that too avni twists things so much. First she said graduation in journalism. And then spilled out the beans. no no she wasnt twisting anything. She genuinely came prepared for Marriage talks only but just that her way of preparing was more like one for an iv. Thats why neil pulled her legs too Tillu. Literally!!! Name. Without even knowing the real name, assuming things. Thats bad.! Ikr.! This is too good. Keep going girl! Writing miracle over my head!! So sweet of u to say that

Much love
Sami


Hey,
Thank u so much for ur review.!
Much appreciated.!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: RomComFan

This is sooo cute, OMG... please please update ASAP


Thank u so much.!
Yes, will update it soon.!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: darsh333

New story!😃im happy that you are writing more and more!and i want you to do that😊 Jo hukum mere aaka.!! *bows down 😊


I was expecting avni going for a job interview and there you go you just turned it out as a marriage interview😆loved the twist😆 Hahahaa 😆 Marriage interview. Thats the apt term 😉

I liked how you brought them together in a lift for this story😆 Thank u for pointing that out.!
I wanted something from neil's part too..i felt avni spoke here more or her part was more said in the story but i guess maybe neil's part is coming up in your next part😊 See, Neil is a secret here to Avni and to readees both.! Suppose that You guys didnt know whose pet name Tillu is and only Neil knew it.! How story would have appeared.! He will spill the beans only at last, till then his expressions and his body language will speak.! 😉

And on hearing the name avni didnt the bulb light up in neil's head??😆 Maybe he was also here to meet his Mother's Best Friend's daughter. Who cares what her name is 😉

Neil wouldnt have thought he would have been introduced as tillu to avni..😕😆 Never.! Not atleast to his supposed bride. His mom is a pro in lending him up in such embaressing situations

Story looks like a happy one with happy twists😊waiting for the next part and do update soon girl😊 Oh yeah it is.! Yupp will update soon.


Hey darshana,
Thank u so much for ur reviews and praises.!
Means a lot to me.!
Stay tuned for finale.!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#37


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Posted: 7 years ago
#38
I loved reading this 2s of yours cos it kind of relaxed me.
This was so natural and he flow if events n your story makes it easy for me to imagine too
Simple stories are magical always😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
#39
Riyaaa meri jaan! Kya baat hai?! Tillu rocked, Avni shocked!

Such a nice feel-good two shot, much needed in this fandom at this time! And much needed for me cause I read your latest OS in Wattpad. Avni was ridiculously cute with her reservations and our Tillu talked her through every one of them. I wonder what else they'd talk about in their "shaadi-interview".

So adorable, the pair of them! Just like you!

Keep entertaining us as usual! 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: plmzaq

Interesting start

Continue soon


Its already completed.!
It was only 2 Shot.!

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