RoSid: Badmaash Dil Continuation

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Guys please tell in comments that what u think about the child actors chosen by me

Chp 7: Fake Fight

Tillu wakes up and sees Kaal smiling evilly and asks what are you up to? Kaal says nothing just came to see you two. He goes leaving Tillu doubtful. He goes to the place where Kaal was standing and gets shocked seeing oil with glass pieces.
T: if didi walks on it she'll get hurt, I will remove it.
He was about to pick them up but someone stops him holding his hand. Its Kaal.
K: why do u care about ur step sister getting hurt?
Tillu: because I don't have siblings and never got to know the importance of them till now, but when didi came I got to know that siblings can be there even without blood relation.
K: she is not your sister, she doesn't cares for u
Tillu: whatever
He picks the glass pieces and throws them cleaning the oil from there.
Tillu: don't do anything
Tillu (temporary character in whole story)

He sleeps.
Kaal: plan spoiled ...this Tillu thinks Roli actually cares for him and saved her.
He goes irritatingly.

Next morning, Roli wakes up and slips by the little oil left on the floor. She gets a sprain and hisses in pain. She gets up but again falls on the floor.
R: ouch!
Tillu comes out of washroom and sees her on floor. He helps her stand.
Tillu: how did u fall?
R: don't know
Tillu: ohh maybe the little oil must be still there
R: what u talking about
Tillu: yesterday when u slept, papa put oil and glass pieces on the floor to hurt u, I saw it and cleaned it but still some was left there.
R: papa ki to band baj k rahegi.
Roli

She wakes up Johnny and takes him with her, she goes out of the room and sees him reading newspaper.
R: Johnny, see my own papa tried to hurt me
Johnny: woof woof


Johnny goes to Kaal and pees on him. Roli laughs
. Johnny comes running to her. Kaal makes faces when he realizes what happened. Roli with Johnny escapes from there and goes to her room. She gets ready for school and takes Johnny also with her. She leaves from Kaal's house and goes to her house to leave Johnny there till she comes back from school. Ishani, Lavanya, her brother, Shivaay and Sid with Roli walks to school together. Roli tells them what Johnny did with Kaal. Everyone laughs.
Ishani and Lavanya

Vidya

Simar

So after walking for sometime, they reach school and meets Vidya and Shivaan. After assembly, everyone goes to class sitting in their usual arrangement. The teacher gives them a project to do. The project partners were like this:
Sid-Vidya
Ishani-Ranveer (newcomer)
Lavanya-Roli

The partners sit together. Sid and Roli looks at each other wanting to be each other's partner. Lavanya notices this.
Lavanya: if u want I can fulfill ur wish.
R: what wish?
Lavanya: u want him as ur partner, I know that.
R: what can u do to fulfill my wish?
Lavanya: ummm, let's fake fighting but be careful we don't laugh while laughing, we have to do so by showing teacher.
R: will it work?
Lavanya: I hope so

They both sigh to make themselves a little angry. Roli tears a paper to pieces and throws them on Lavanya.

R: tumhara paper tumko he mubarak ho, I don't need ur help, u play pranks on me and now became my partner.

She says loudly, everyone looks st them as to what happened, she winks at her other friends.
Lavanya: Miss Roli, u tore my paper, do u know its made from wood, u wasted a piece of tree.

She says trying not to laugh.
R: aai badi tree lover kahin ki, teacher change my partner plz.
Teacher: u can choose anyone from ur row.
Roli looks at Sid and smiles.
R: Teacher, I want my bench partner to be my project partner as well.
Teacher: who's that?
R: Sid

Sid looks at her with the same wish.
Teacher: OK change ur places.

Roli fakes an angry glare to Lavanya but she was thankful to her in her heart. Sid sits next to Roli.
S: how do u understand my wish?
R: I was telling my wish, we both were fighting fakely, it was fun by the way.
S: what's our topic of project?
R: Supernatural powers.
S: interesting, let's meet tonight at my place.

They shake hands.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely superb update dear
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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this kaal is behaving like a step father.so sweet of tillu to clean everything to save roli .loved him saying about understanding the value of siblings.but tillu is a temporary character?won't he be there when they grow up?sad that still roli got hurt due to the oil.it was so funny that johny peed on kaal.lavanya roli having fake fight for rosid to be each others partner was cute.project topic is interesting.thanks for uploading pics . loved all the child artists you chose.though I always imagine avika herself as little roli balveer girl too is cute as roli.I thought ishani and lavanya are identical twins. but seeing anjali sanjana as ishani la only I realised that they are not identical .in which serial did the girl who plays simar acted?
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

this kaal is behaving like a step father.so sweet of tillu to clean everything to save roli .loved him saying about understanding the value of siblings.but tillu is a temporary character?won't he be there when they grow up?sad that still roli got hurt due to the oil.it was so funny that johny peed on kaal.lavanya roli having fake fight for rosid to be each others partner was cute.project topic is interesting.thanks for uploading pics . loved all the child artists you chose.though I always imagine avika herself as little roli balveer girl too is cute as roli.I thought ishani and lavanya are identical twins. but seeing anjali sanjana as ishani la only I realised that they are not identical .in which serial did the girl who plays simar acted?

She has also acted in Baal Veer only n I will show her soon in my Baal veer ff..shocking that only I write Baal veer ff .no?
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: salley145

She has also acted in Baal Veer only n I will show her soon in my Baal veer ff..shocking that only I write Baal veer ff .no?
Yes in mehbeer version too he wasn't there. Simar also wasn't there from starting, I can add up his character if u say

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Posted: 8 years ago
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U added Tillu only here?Tillu is not there in Mehbeer version?ya plz dont remove Tillu from this ff.such a lovely character.In mehbeer version when did Simar enter then?I hope Tillu n Prem will be there post leap
i think balveer ffs r not there as its a kids' show.all ffs r love stories na

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Tillu was there in mehbeer version but temporarily but Simar wasn't there in the whole story
Meher never had any real sister, she had only her cousin twin sisters

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

U added Tillu only here?Tillu is not there in Mehbeer version?ya plz dont remove Tillu from this ff.such a lovely character.In mehbeer version when did Simar enter then?I hope Tillu n Prem will be there post leap

i think balveer ffs r not there as its a kids' show.all ffs r love stories na

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Posted: 8 years ago
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thanks for adding simar.but may I know why you made changes in Rosid version though it's a converted ff?

Originally posted by: salley145

Tillu was there in mehbeer version but temporarily but Simar wasn't there in the whole story
Meher never had any real sister, she had only her cousin twin sisters

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Posted: 8 years ago
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For every fan's sake
Every writer might be doing it secretly, who knows?
You see Atheet ka bhoot ardeep version have a lot of changes but its also converted

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

thanks for adding simar.but may I know why you made changes in Rosid version though it's a converted ff?

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Posted: 8 years ago
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i must say ..i loved the changes.the changes tou made in atheet were essential and they were superb

Originally posted by: salley145

For every fan's sake
Every writer might be doing it secretly, who knows?
You see Atheet ka bhoot ardeep version have a lot of changes but its also converted

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