~pari~ THREAD 3 updated new thread 29th april - Page 35

Created

Last reply

Replies

824

Views

126.8k

Users

162

Likes

4k

Frequent Posters

kabslocks thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago
Beautiful updates.
Thanks for resuming this story.
manjeet6 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago
Hey dear
Welcome back
Awesome update
Feeling sad for Geet Maan is breaking her slowly slowly with his behavior
I'm scared for him because I think ki jis ceez se wo khudh ko bachana chah raha hai kahi uss ke saath wahi na ho jaaye
Beautifully written
Loved it
maansi25 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago
Thanks for resuming the story
Back to back updates
Maan is being stubborn
Geet declaring her love
Waiting for the clouds to be cleared

Ps
Please update Dundhale Aks
Waiting for puchki

angel0912 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago
Welcome back good to see you
Madhuri53 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 7 years ago

Part 28 - Geet is right. He was making it complicated. He still could not make out what his feelings are. Geet was so adjustable with his mood swings bet being friends and more than friends. Still she didn't lose hope. He was thinking her like the geet handa which was far fetch for him and all she want to be his geet which he never understood. Hope this dev-nt coming to California make him to realise his actual feelings.

Madhuri53 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 7 years ago

Part 29 - Oh...he is a jerk. He can't see what she felt for him and always made her sad. he was stuck at the friends tag only. He arranged her stuff so lovingly; it was like she was living with him, that made her happy. He couldn't read all these signs. I agree with geet that he is still nave to understand all these. But still he didn't know that he was hurting her and may be pushing her away forever. Hope he soon realise his feelings.

muskanp thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 8
Posted: 7 years ago

Part 30



Maan dropped her at the airport, he hugged her dearly - u don't have to come for the anniversary.

Geet - I will be there, I shall tell adhi to coordinate with Sasha for booking the tickets.

Maan kissed her forehead. While they were waiting, there was a delay in her flight.



He smiled and walked with her to the coffee shop. She excused herself to make a call. He saw her pacing angrily. He had never seen her like this. He tried to recollect, if he has ever seen getting angry. This was new, but she looked cute.. He thought to himself. He couldn't stop himself admiring her, her nose that seemed flaring, her eyes was spitting fire.. He definitely didn't want to be the person on the receiving end of her temper. She almost threw her phone in annoyance. He picked it up and walked to her, she instantly smiled - really sorry

Maan - kis pe itna naraz ho rahi ho?

Geet - nahi wo adhi.. Then she just left it. Look at the brighter side, I got more time with you

Maan - what happened?

Geet - this guy can't complete one sentence properly dammit!!

Maan - why did you hire him at the first place

Geet smiled - actually I am just irritated my flight is delayed, its going to disrupt my schedule tomorrow in London. Bechara Adhi is not bad.

Maan almost got jealous of this Adhi now.

Geet laughed - trust me u wouldn't mind me working with Adhi, he is really sweet guy.

She patted his cheek - I think he is interested in my offices receptionist

Maan - but u said u just hired him

Geet - yah!! I really didn't want to hire another guy as my assistant. I found them all so incompetent and I land up spending so much time with them, they start.. U know... what I am saying

Maan - no way are you kidding me

Geet - wo .. don't even get me started

Maan - really!!.. I thought that was more to do with female assistants.

Geet almost pounced at him - what the hell do you mean. Men think no end of themselves. I had this guy who would wear his shirt with buttons open.. Showing off his breast.. she made a disgusting look..

Maan - and you didn't like it

Geet hugged him - shut up jaan, you of all the people should know I don't like such cheap displays.

Maan played with her locks trying to understand himself. It was so perfect around her.



Geet made little cute face when she to go.. I can't wait to our India trip.

Maan smiled wondering why was she so patient with him. Why she was doing all this for him.



A week had passed. Maan got a call from his bank regarding the investors. Maan dressed in his best business attire. He walked in with confidence unlike in past. He laid out the documents & opened the excel sheet in his laptop to give brief on his progress.


Bank Manager - how is business Maan

He smiled confidently - U can start seeing the figures green soon

Bank manager - Maybe it's time to expand
Maan stared at him - What do you mean?
Manager casually - Well, investors saw the last reports we gave and they... were impressed. They see opportunities in bigger cities and asked if you were willing to take the business there.
Maan - I think, it's too soon. Although I admit I have been thinking about this.
Manger smiled - u have been doing great. The numbers you're giving me plus the ones on your pipeline are pretty impressive.
Maan sat comfortably, his heart was beating hard in excitement. He felt so wonderful with himself. He composed himself. I am really flattered - thanks. I really appreciate that my investors believe in my work and I was able to live up to their expectations. Please do let them know that, but we already doing a lot.

Manger - That's why they are serious about branching out

Maan couldn't stop himself from thinking about her, how she mentioned about it during his trip to California.
Maan shrugged the thought - I am really thrilled with the offer, but it will be a huge step. I don't think I've even proven myself here.
Manager smiled - I think you've proven yourself enough for them to believe that this idea will work if taken upscale, too.
Maan was little concerned now - It will take a lot of money!
Manager - trust me they can handle it

Maan thoughtfully - what is their expectation.. How... soon?
Manager - as soon as you say yes, I guess. You can work out the proposal.
Maan - What will happen to this branch? Would they want to close this down? I don't think I can bear that. This is like my baby. I wouldn't let that happen.
Manger laughed - Relax. You can run two branches, can't you? This branch will still stay. You can have Sasha oversee everything so you don't need to be hands on, and then you can build the second branch.

They started discussing the possibilities. It was almost lunch time the manager convinced Maan, that this is may be a big step, but it's a great opportunity for his company.
By now Maan was mentally planning on the same city that Geet wanted him to move.

Maan - the city could be..

Manager cut in - actually the investors have a city in their mind.

Maan was heart broken. He almost didn't want to do it if it was not California.
Before his heart lose all hope

Manger - West Coast .. California


Maan thought to himself, Wow.. talk about luck!..or... fate!
Hi heart was there, he couldn't stop smiling. That was really good. But he knew, if something sounds too good to be true, it probably is. His hand started getting cold. A thought played in his mind and he didn't know what to do with it. He was afraid to ask the manager. He knew he still had to, because if he didn't, that thought would not let him sleep at night. But he just hoped he was wrong.

Maan cleared his throat - this investor seems to be well off

Manager looked up from the cheque he was writing - yeah.. Its good for the bank you know

Maan - this investor or investors don't they want to clear the previous loan first

Manager - the red figures on the report decreases every month. Now we're on breakeven. When you invest here and there, you know the rules. I'm sure the pressure to see the green will not come until after three months or more
Maan took a deep breath - how many investors were there?

Manager - One

Maan - is this the same person asking me to open a branch in west coast?

Manager knotted his brows and looked at him - why are you asking this?

Maan stiffened - this one investor is she Geet Handa?

Manger didn't say anything for some time and just nodded.


Maan just walked out. He didn't know what to think or do anything any more. He walked endlessly, until he reached a calm corner in the busiest city in the world. He couldn't hold himself together anymore. He screamed at nobody. He felt humiliated. Was Geet playing him all along? Was he... a business investment? She said she knew the reason why she was doing him all these favors... and now he does too! She was making sure she wasn't investing in a losing venture. Sasha and him started working on this business even before he found out that Geet, his pari, was really Geet Handa, the heir born with a silver spoon. When he thought he would never see her again, she had been there all along... investing on him behind his back. Banking on his talents!


He looked at the skyline of New York City



Thanks for the comments and like
lots of wishes
Muskan
Edited by muskanp - 7 years ago
astrisa thumbnail
7th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 7 years ago
part 30
Thanks a lot for updating
beautiful update as usual
Geet is irritated with adi. Maan was quite patient with her.
Oh she doesnt like men who show their chest he he 😆
Everything was going good until maan got chained by his ego after knowing who the new insvestor is
His reaction is very disappointing tho he thinks he haved been decieved bt thats a complete wrong way of thinking
Geet is only trying 2 help him bt he is making d situation very difficult nd sore
Edited by curtus - 7 years ago
love2_soma thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 7 years ago
oh no abb kya hoga...kya maan galat samjhega geet ko?...
lovely update...

loved it very much...
Kkiran thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago
Uhhh ouch that wasnt the best of moves Geet. That really hurt his self esteem and ego. I thought Geet was going to let the matter go, but I guess not. Guess every love story has its own issues this one has one too many to begin with sighs.

Related Topics

Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Dragon-Heart

2 years ago

The Lost Prince MG FF Updated P 36 on Pg 60 / 2-7-2025

Introduction As I already told you that I am going to write period fiction... So here is it... Let's see how is the response. That will decide...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: tellyme

2 years ago

MG FF-Enchanted #2 - Updated Chapter 55 - link pg 140 may 31 MG FF-Enchanted #2 - Updated Chapter 55 - link pg 140 may 31

ENCHANTED - THREAD 2 SUMMARY - Thanks all for completing thread1

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Pumpkinseed

5 months ago

Maaneet Stories Updates~ New Part Updated~pg 44~31.07.25

You can stay updated with all the latest updates in my stories right here in this thread. I will be updating the stories almost every day. Feel...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Dragon-Heart

2 years ago

Kismat Connection 4 Updated Part 24 on PG 46 / 29-6-2025

INTRODUCTION A new season of this fiction. It's not an FF it's an ss

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: priya_21

11 years ago

Priya Fan fiction - Update thread /pg 120-30 july

hello friends... am not able do pm regularly... so please my all friend follow this thread... i post the link here... so you get link easily of

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".