AvNeil Fan-Fiction : Chase Against Time Ch31: Pg41 on 11/09

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Zara_Imam

@Zara_Imam

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Posted: 8 years ago

#201

Sorry *kaan pakad ke* I saw ur PMs but something or the other kept on coming

Shit! She asked for Ali on waking up😆

Neil n Ananya fought again. Ah, I expected this!

Neil is becoming emotionally attached to Ananya and I love it. He really needs to decode his feelings and sprint back to action again and Ananya accusing him of his incapability of arresting the murderer may add to it

I'm so glad you have Aman in ur story. Must say hez amazing at his work!

Okay Now I'm hella Confused.. What Was In The Video? Being Smart Both Of 'Em Understood That The Murderer Was Playing With Them

I'm Now Literally Impatient n Intrigued How The Story Will Play Now

Continue Soon Before I Die Out Of Excitement😆

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

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Posted: 8 years ago

#202

Originally posted by: Zara_Imam
Sorry *kaan pakad ke* I saw ur PMs but something or the other kept on coming
Shit! She asked for Ali on waking up😆
Neil n Ananya fought again. Ah, I expected this!
Neil is becoming emotionally attached to Ananya and I love it. He really needs to decode his feelings and sprint back to action again and Ananya accusing him of his incapability of arresting the murderer may add to it
I'm so glad you have Aman in ur story. Must say hez amazing at his work!
Okay Now I'm hella Confused.. What Was In The Video? Being Smart Both Of 'Em Understood That The Murderer Was Playing With Them
I'm Now Literally Impatient n Intrigued How The Story Will Play Now
Continue Soon Before I Die Out Of Excitement😆

Oh! That's absolutely fine. At the end you did spare some time to read this one. That itself is a huge deal.

Good to know that Neil's attachment towards Ananya is lovable. I will try to ensure that he sprints back in action soon. #hopefully.

I am glad to incorporate Aman too. He gotta be amazing to be in Ananya's team ;)

Why are you confused? Did I miss out on the explanation that bad? I will try to clear that out in the next one.

You will find out soon how the story plays out. 😉

Don't worry, I won't let you die out of excitement. Not going to let that happen. I will be updating soon enough. Let's see how quick I can make it. ;P

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

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Posted: 8 years ago

#203

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blablabla_mo7

@blablabla_mo7

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#204

Intriguing like hell and no Avneil fight? Haih... thank you that it's getting more frequent on updates..

You write well on this type nail gripping thrillers.. keep going!

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HighOnSarcasm

@HighOnSarcasm

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#205

The ACP's back...not just me even DD is relieved!!😆 Even though he has to forcefully push Ananya out of his head to concentrate on his work.😆

I think I've said it already, but I love Aman...hez such a geeky badass!!

Now that AvNeil have reached the same conclusion I want to see them working together instead of separately on this & more.

Also, I feel for poor Neil...his heart is in a tizzy coz of Ananya & madam cooler than cumcumber isn't even affected by our supercop!!

Waitig for the next update eagerly! Thanks for the PM.

Edited by paayaal - 8 years ago

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Wingsoflove_2

@Wingsoflove_2

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#206

It's awesome.👏

ACP Neil Khanna welcome back😎

His controlled his feeling to concentrate on work.

Loved it. Now hope avneil will work together.

Awesome one.

Continue soon

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srinithi

@AgnesFan

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#207

I love this total cool tech savy Aman ! Such an interesting character you have shaped up . He is as good as his sister in digging crimes .

Looks like both ACP and Ananya are in same page . Though Neil doesn't have a tech savvy like Aman to help him 😆

Are you even in an idea to reveal what this Mr. criminal is upto !_This man has intrigued me the most . When everyone thought he was going to kill Ananya he made a video to mislead all . Wah ! Brains !

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#208

Originally posted by: blablabla_mo7
Intriguing like hell and no Avneil fight? Haih... thank you that it's getting more frequent on updates..

You write well on this type nail gripping thrillers.. keep going!

Thank You! Do you want to read more of AvNeil fights? I might be able to manage that 😉

You don't need to thank me. I have been willing to update this more frequently and I am still trying to achieve that.

I am happy to read that. It's good to know that something that I am attempting for the first time is being well received. I haven't attempted thriller at this level before. But I will definitely try to live up to your expectations now. :)

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#209

Originally posted by: paayaal
The ACP's back...not just me even DD is relieved!!😆 Even though he has to forcefully push Ananya out of his head to concentrate on his work.😆

I think I've said it already, but I love Aman...hez such a geeky badass!!

Now that AvNeil have reached the same conclusion I want to see them working together instead of separately on this & more.

Also, I feel for poor Neil...his heart is in a tizzy coz of Ananya & madam cooler than cumcumber isn't even affected by our supercop!!

Waitig for the next update eagerly! Thanks for the PM.

Thanks for your review, Payal! Everyone around the ACP would be relieved to not have him scowling time to time. Well, let's see for how long he can push her out of his head. He can concentrate on work but can't completely get rid of her thoughts this easily. It's going to be nerve wrecking for ACP Khanna. 😆

Honestly, I do love my supporting characters as well. Especially, Aman. I guess that I am sucker for sibling bond. I have really awesome brother characters in my write-ups. Aman being one of them. I just hope the rest of the supporting characters would be loved as well.

Okay, I guess you'll have to wait for a chapter or two to get there. That is AvNeil working together on this. But till then they are kind of working separately. Kind of.

I get where you are coming from. Whenever Ananya would get adfecaff by Neil, she might be in a bigger messed up state than what Neil is. We never know what happens next? She is a little more focused is all what I can give as an explanation for her cooler than cucumber presence. 😆

I will update the next soon. Don't exactly ask me when this soon is going to arrive though. You really don't need to thank me for the PMs. I love your reviews.😛

Thanks once again.

PS: by the way, I hope you got the answer for your previous question. I have replied to it already. ;P

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#210

Originally posted by: rilsaf
It's awesome.👏
ACP Neil Khanna welcome back😎
His controlled his feeling to concentrate on work.
Loved it. Now hope avneil will work together.
Awesome one.
Continue soon

Thank You!! Yes, ACP Khanna is back and he is trying his best to concentrate on work but I can't really say for how long would he be able to do so. 😆

Everyone is hoping for them to work together. Just a chapter or two away and you will witness that happening. Hopefully.

Thank you once again and I will continue soon. :)