GHAM-E-DIL....A Rikara OS

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GHAM-E-DIL

Dubai-----at present

Ji sir kahiye aapne bulaaya hume?? Gauri asks her boss entering his cabin ( Yes sir; did you call me?)

Haan gauri! her boss replies ( Yes gauri)
Dekho gauri tum jaanti ho ki main tumhe apni bachi ke jaise pyaar karta hoon; aur bharosa bhi...he says ( Gauri, you know that I love and trust you the same way I would to my daughter...right??)

Haan sir hum bikul jaante hain iss baat ko.. AUr yakeen maaaniye sir hum bhi aapse waise he pyaar karte hain jaise apne pita se karte...Aapki bahut izzat karte hain hum...Gauri tells him ( Yes ir, I do acknowledge that fact and trust me when I tell you that even I love and respect you as I would to my father)

Magar sir aaj achanak yeh saari baatein kyun? She asks him confused ( But sir why all of this today??)

Gauri dekho! Main jaanta hoon ki jo baat maine kehne waala hoon wo tumhe pasand nhn aayegi; par gauri mere pass koi option nhn hai...He tells her skeptical ( Gauri, I know it for a fact that you won't like what I am about to tell you but please understand that I have no other option)

Sir pehle kahiye toh... She nudges him ( sir atleast tell me what it is)

Gauri jaise ki tumhe pta hai ki humari company india main bhi expansion ke liye try kar rahi thi...Toh gauri wo..Darasal! gauri baat...He hesitates to say further ( Gauri, you are aware of our tries to open up a branch in india..So gauri; Actually...Gauri it is...)

Sir hum jaante hain ki aap try kar rahe the...Par aap itna hichkicha kyun rahe hain...She asks cutting him in between ( Yes sir I certainly am aware about that...But why are you stammering??)

Gauri hume permission mil gyi hai Mumbai main aur isiliye tumhe Mumbai jaana hoga...He speaks in a single breath turning his face away from her ( Gauri we have been approved to operate our new venture in Mumbai so you will have to go there...)

Mumbai? She says shocked...

Not getting any other reaction from her; he turns around to face her only to find her trying hard not to stumble while her eyes are filled with tears...

Making his way towards gauri; he holds her protectively like a father would hold his crying daughter...

Sir hum nhn jaana chahte hain Mumbai.. Aap please kisi aur bhej dijiye... She requests him crying ( Sir, I don't want to go back to Mumbai! Please send somebody else)

Mere bachi! Main bhej deta kisi aur ko lekin tum yahaan ki head designer ho aur meri sabse bharose mand employ bhi aur perfect ho iss kaam ke liye...Main khud jaa nhn sakta issiliye tumhe bhej raha hoon!...he tells her ( My child! I would have gladly sent another person in your place or I would have gone myself but I am stuck here and you are the only one whom I trust..Also you are the head designer here..so I believe you are the perfect choice for it)

Sir Mumbai ne humse humara sab kuch cheena hai; humari bachi cheeni hai humse; humari khushiyaan cheeni hai Mumbai ne...Hum kaise nibhaa payenge aapki di hui zimmedaari...Gauri sobbingly says ( Sir, Mumbai has snatched everything from me; that plaace has spirited away my daughter from me; my happiness was snatched in mumbai.. How will I be able to stand by your trust sir?)

Gauri main jaanta hoon ki tumhare saath jo hua wo nhn hona chaheye tha! Par ateet ke panno se bahar niklo gauri; zindagi bahut choti hai beete hue kisson par rone ke liye; aise nhn jiya jaa sakta...Aur tumhe kya lagta hai ki tumhari bachi khush hogi apni maa ko aise bhaagte hue dekh ke...He explains her life ( Gauri I an empathize with you and I know whatever happened should have not happened... But gauri! please come out of your past; Life is way too short to lament on the past...A person can't live in the past my child! And do you think your lost daughter would be happy to see her mother steer clear off Mumbai)

After some more persuation gauri finally agrees to go to Mumbai!
Gauri! agar tumhe lage ki tumse nhn ho paa raha hai; toh yaad rahe dubai main I will always be there for you...Bhoolna mat ki tumhara pita hai yahan... Her boss tells her ( Gauri, if at any point you feel you can't do this anymore! Just come back to dubai...Never forget that I'm here for you..Your father is here for you)

Ji sir...nhn bhoolenge... she says smiling...Thank you bhi humpe bharosa karne ke liye; hume apni beti samjhane ke liye...she adds ( Thank you sir for trusting in me; for believing in me as your daughter...Thank you for being there for me! And I will never forget)

Gauri finally leaves to her apartment to get her packing done since she has a flight to board at night; Once in her apartment she sits down and rests her head on the headrest; leaning back she closes her eyes

Mumma bachao! Bacho mumma...Mumma yeh gandi aunty mujhe maar degi mumma please bachao... ( Mumma save me! Save me mumma... Mumma this evil aunty will kill me mumma please save me)

Himmat rakho omira; mumma hai na...Darro nhn! Sab theek ho jaayega; mumma aagyi hai dekho...Gauri tells her ( Be strong omira; your mom is here! Don't be scared...everything will soon be fine...Mumma has come omira)

Mumma! Mujhe dar lag raha hai...bahut dar lag raha hai mujhe..Bachao na mumma please...omira shouts while in clutches of a woman ( Mumma! I'm very scared...Please save me mumma...)

Omira nhn mere bache! Rona nhn ...aa rahe hain papa...Om says ( omira my child...don't cry your father is here..)

Himmat bhi mat karna aage aane ki warna...the evil lady gently pushes omira but holds her back in time preventing her from falling ( don't even dare to step forward...)

Omira!! Gauri shouts seeing her daughter standing at the edge

Nhn swetlaana nhn! Aisa mat karna... dekho please humari bachi ko jaane do...Usne kuch nhn bigaada hai tumhara. Chod do Humari bachi ko please hum haath jodte hain tumhare aage...gauri pleads crying ( no swetlana no! please don't do this. Just let my daughter go...She hasn't harmed you in anyways... Please leave her..i beg you swetlana)

Tum jo kahogi hum karenge! Par please humari bachi ko neeche uttaaro...she adds ( I will do whatever you want me to...Just let my daughter come down safely)

Nhn gauri! iss aurat ke aage bheek maangne ki koi zaroorat nhn hai tumhe! Om says angrily ( No gauri, you don't have to beg infront of this lady)

Omkaraji humari bachi hai uske kabze main; dikh nhn raha hai kya aapko! Kaise pita hain aap...Gauri reminds him ( Omkaraji our daughter is under her clutches; can't you see?? What kinda father are you?)

Bhaut hogya naatak! Jaldi se faisla karlo ki tumhe meri shart manzoor hai ya nhn...swetlana threatens them ( Enough of your drama! Decide fast whether or not you guys agree to me)
Zaada waqt nhn hai mere pass barbaad karne ke liye!! Swetlana adds ( You don't have much time in your favor)

Manjoor hai hume! Gauri tells her hurriedly ( I agree)

Nhn mazoor hai mujhe! Om sternly announces ( I don't)

Omkaraji! Kya kar rahe hain aap! Aankhein kholiye aur dekhiye humari omira hai uske kabze main..!! wo uske dhakka de degi agar humne uski baat nhn maani toh...Maan jaayie na omkaraji! Humari beti ke khaatir please...Hume humari beti laa dijiye waapis...haath jodte hain par padte hain hum aapke...Gauri pleads in dread while crying inconsolably ( Omkaraji! What are you doing?? Just open your eyes and see our daughter; our omira is there with her.. She won't tink twice before pushing omira if we don't agree to her... Please agree omkaraji! For the sake of pur daughter, please agree! Please get me my daughter back...I beg you; please)

Gauri! wo meri bhi beti hai. Magar main apni beti ko bachaane ke liye apni biwi ko daaw par nhn laga sakta samjho gauri please! Omkara explains her while silently ordering the poloce to go ahead and arrest her... ( Gauri, she is my daughter as much she is yours..But gauri I can't trade my wife for my daughter...Please understand gauri..understand my turmoil!)

MUUUMMMAA! !!!!!! thud...

OOOMMMIIIRRRAAA omkara and gauri shout seeing their daughter lay in the pool of blood...

Kaha than a hoshiaayari nhn karna mere saath...swetlana says gritting her teeth... ( I had warned you to not act smart with me..)

Hahahahahhahahha...she laughs devilish

Aankhein kholo omira...! Aankhein kholo...dekho mumma hai yaahann...ek baar aankhein kholo omira..gauri nudges her tapping her face ( Open your eyes omira! Open your eyes...See mumma is here by you; just open your eyes once)

Omkaraji kahiye na isse ki aankhein khole; aapki toh princess aapki har baat maanti hai na; kahiye na ki hume aise na sataaye aur aankhein khol de...gauri requests him yearning for her daughter to open her eyes... ( omkaraji! Please tell her to open her eyes. She is your princess; she listens to everything you tell her so please tell her to open her eyes!)

Omira...!! Dekho papa ki baat maanlo.. aankhein kholo omira..! aise tang karna theek nhn hai..om orders her while crying! ( omira, Please listen listen to papa and open your eyes! It's not good to be stubborn with your parents omira...)

The ambulance arrives; gauri and om take omira to the hospital only to have them announce her dead on arrival...

Nhn!! Aise nhn ho sakta meri bachi mujhe chod ke nhn jaa sakti...nhn jaa sakti meri bachi mujhe chodke!...gauri mumbles sitting on the chair (No!!! It can't happen...My daughter can't leave me and go... My daughter can't go leaving me here)

Abhi toh 3 saal ki bachi thi wo! Nhn bahut choti thi wo abhi apni maa se door jaane ke liye.! Nhn nhn nhn! Meri omira nhn jaa sakti... gauri speaks fisting her hair... ( She was just 3 years old..! way too young to leave her mother and go away...! NO no no!! my omira can't go...)

Waking up with a jerk; she picks up the picture of her daughter; caressing the picture she says...

Omira; Meri bachi maaf kardo apni maa ko...Nhn bachaa paayi aapki muma aapko; fail hogyi muma omira..Par muma aapko bahut miss karti hai omira..Kissing the picture; she continues Aapko pta hai aaj 5 saal baad aapki mumma Mumbai jaa rahi hai; uss shehar main jisne aapko humse cheen liya tha; humari aankhon ke saamne humari bachi ko cheen liya humse...Maaf kar do apni muma ko omira; nhn bachaa paayi aapki mumma aapko.. ( Omira, my child pardon your mother... Yourr mother was unable to save you. But she misses you a lot omira.. You know today, after 5 years your mother is going to Mumbai, a place that snatched you from me...snatched you infront of my eyes... Please forgive your mother omira... I couldn't save you)

A lone tear escapes gauri's eyes wiping which she gets up and packs her stuff; all set to leave she takes a final glance at her house and with a heavy heart makes way towards the airport in a taxi. With a heavy sigh she boards the airbus; and lands in Mumbai within the next 4 hours...
She makes her way out of the airport where she sees a person waiting for her as arranged by her boss...She goes and settles herself in the car whoch begins moving soon after...

Gauri's POV
5 saal beet gye; par aaj bhi lagta hai jaise kal ki he baat ho ki hum Mumbai main rehte the... Issi shehar ne hume humara pyaar diya tha magar issi shehar ne humse usse kahi zaada kuch cheen bhi liya...! Hey Shankar ji! Madad karna apni chirraiya ki..himmat mat tootne dena humari. Bas hum humaara kaam karke waapis chale jaayen jaldi aur kuch nhn chaheye hume!! ( 5 years have passed, yet it feels as if I was here just yesterday... This place gave me my love and look at the irony that this place took away more than it ever gave me.. Oh lord! Please help your child.. Don't let me break, don't let my courage break... Just help me complete what I am here for and return back...I don't need anything in life)

Coming down the pike, they reach the apartment gauri has been allotted by her boss... Getting down she moves inside after thanking the chauffeur. All tired because of the journey gauri orders some food and goes to bed hoping to have a good day at work tomorrow...

The morning seeps in waking up gauri and she quickly leaves after her morning routine of a lukewarm shower followed by a small conversation with omira's picture and her breakfast..

Gauri's POV
Hey shankarji! Madad karna apni iss chirraiya ki. Aaj humara pehla din hai kaam par kuch gadbad mat hone dena. Bahut he mushkil se aapki iss chirraiya ne apna mann banaaya hai iss shehar main aane ke liye; sab sambhaal lena please! (Oh! Lord.. Guide your child.. Today is my first day at work; please let it pass smoothly... It took a lot of strength for me to come back here to work... Just handle everything please)

Reaching her office; she gets down and moves inside only to be welcomed warmly by the entire staff... A smile adorns her lips seeing the people under her wing! A quick briefing session was all she needed to boost the co-workers to give their best.. Making her way towards her cabin; she is surprised to find a room exactly like the one she had for herself in the dubai office..Quickly ringing up her boss, she thanks him for the detailing he kept in his mind and also updates him about her strategy..

Weeks pass and gauri got religiously involved in setting up the new venture...! She had set up a routine whoch had her spending most of her time in the office for she knew going back home will bring back the memories; memories of that unfortunate day where she lost not only daughter, but also the love of her life.. But her efforts of staying back proved in her favor because just within 2 weeks; the company has made a name for itself with the brilliant designs that it has for the clients to select from..!

One morning in her office,

Good morning ma'am! Aapko kis se milna hai...The receptionist asks a middle aged lady graciously clad in a chiffon saree...accompanying the middle aged woman was a young fresh girl dressed elegantly in a pencil dress...

Hey! I'm Mrs. Jhanvi singh Oberoi and I would like to meet the head designer of your company...The middle aged woman says

Ma'am unfortunately she is in a meeting right now...the receptionist answers..

It's okay, we don't mind waiting...The young woman says

Prinku are you sure...?? Jhanvi asks the young woman

Yes mom! I want her designs only...prinku tells jhanvi

Ok mam! This way please, the receptionist says and leads them to the waiting room opposite gauri's cabin!

2 hours pass and finally the meeting is over with gauri cracking the deal.. Walking out of the board room she walks her associates out and see them off...

Gauri...she hears a familiar voice calling her out..

With her heart in her mouth she turns back, to find a person who she had given the position of her mother... A lady who loved her just like she loved prinku! Jhanvi...

Maa escapes gauri's mouth!

A tall figure emerges from behind jhanvi and running towards gauri engulfs her in a bone crushing hig without giving her a chance to react...

Prinku , gauri calls out
Ji bhabhi! Prinku...priyanka says

Getting out of the hug...gauri moves towards jhanvi, bending down she takes her blessings to which jhanvi just pulls her in a hug

Gauri takes them to her cabin.. Ordering some refreshments for them, the three ladies talk to each other... Priyanka tells her the reason of their visit and gauri informs her that she is the person who priyanka wants to meet while jhanvi is lost...After confirming about everybodys' well being from priyanka, gauri turns quiet when

Kahaan thi bacha tum?? 5 saal hogye; kitna dhoondha humne tumhe, om ne tumhe kitna dhoondha..kahaan chali gyi thi tum..? jhanvi asks unable to control her curiousity ( where were you my child?? 5 years have passed, We had spent months searching for you...Om had spent so much time searching for you, but we failed..Where did you go??)

Gauri tells her how she went to dubai and settled there. She informs her how with the help of an old man, who took her as his daughter she was able to come back to life; cope up with the loss of her lifeline..

Kyun gauri??Kyun chali gyi thi tum? jhanvi asks her. ( why gauri??)

Maa!..hum. wo.! Jo kuch bhi hua uske baad hum sambhaal nhn paaye khudko...Nhn thi hum main itni himmat ki hum kisi ke saamne aa saken...Gauri tells them truthfully ( Maa! I failed to handle myself after whatever happened... I wasn't heroic enough to face anyone..)

Bache jo hua hum usse badal nhn sakte par tumhe pta hai na ki jo bhi hua tha usme tumahra koi kusoor nhn tha..jhanvi asks her... ( We can't change what has already transpired but my child I hope you know it wasn't your fault)

Humara toh nhn magar humare pyaar ka tha maa! She tells jhanvi... ( Mom! It was my love's fault even though not mine)

Bache! Wo kusoor waqt ka tha; omira ki kismat ka tha...hum kismat ko nhn badal sakte...Mera bacha toh sirf ek zariya ban gya apni he beti ki maut ka... Jitni wo tumhari bachi thi utni he om ki bhi toh thi na gauri...jhanvi tells her sadly! ( My child! What was wrong was the time; omira's detiny... and we can't change our fate...My om was just a form through which omira's destiny destroyed us...! Gauri, omira is as much is om's as she is your daughter)

Maa chodiye na! puraane zakhmon ko kuredne ka kya fayada hai? Hume humari bachi waapis toh milegi nhn... gauri tells her crying ( Maa! Just let it be please! What we will get by opening the old wounds...I will never get my child back)

Haan meri bachi! Wahi main kehna chahti hoon ki chalo apne ghar chalo... Bahut soona hai tumahre bina mera ghar..Jo hua bahut bura tha..main jaanti hoon use bhula dena aasan nhn hai par kab tak aise zindagi kaatogi...Aaj tum kaam par logon se ghiri hui toh ho par andar se akeli ho! Zinda toh ho tum magar jee nhn rahi...jhanvi explains her (Yes my child! I also want to tell you the same thing.. Come home gauri, My adobe is not as it was when you were there...It is lonely without you.. Whatever happened should have not happened; it was unfortunate and I agree it's easy said than done but please try and move on. Till when will you live like this...Today, you are surrounded by people at work but you are alone from inside.. You are alive today but you aren't living)

Nhn maa! Hum kabhi wahaan nhn jaayenge...Hum nhn dekh sakte omkaraji ko! Unhe dekh ke hume wo sab yaad aayega; apni bachi ka khoon se bhara chehra yaad aayega hume...she tells her panicking ( No maa! I will never come back there... I can't face omkaraji... Seeing him will bring back all those memories; it will bring back the sight of my daughter's blood stained face)

Beta jab se tum bina kuch btaaye chali gyi om ne kisise theek se baat nhn ki...zinda laash ban ke ghoomta rehta hai...Ajeeb ajeeb si baatein karta rehta hai...Mera beta andhere ke saaye main ghirta chala jaa raha hai gauri!! jhanvi tells gauri ( Child!; Om hasn't spoken to anyone since you left leaving him.. He roams like a living corpse.. Nobody understands what he mumbles... My son's life is being clouded by darknesss)

Na tum khush ho aur na wo; tum dono ne apni zindagi ki sabse anmol khushi khoyi hai...par gauri tum om ki zindagi bacha sakti ho, sirf tum bacha sakti ho use...kyunki tum uski zindagi ki roshni ho; please beta haath jodti hoon main tumhare aage nikal lo mere bache ko uss andhere se...Mujhe dar hai ki main usse kho dungi...Jhanvi pleadingly adds ( neither are you happy nor is he, You both have lost the most precious jewel of your life... But gauri you can save om; save his life..only you are capable of doing this.. Because you are the light in his dark life.. Please my child I beg you...pull my son out of darknes... I'm afraid to lose him)

Himmat nhn hai humme maa...gauri tells her ( I am not lion hearted mom)

Gauri! tum ek maa hone ke saath ek patni bhi ho...Aur aurat itni takatwar hoti hai ki koi bhi dukh sehn karsakti hai bina kisi ke sahaare ke; par beta mard itna takatwar nhn hota..Wo dikhata hai ki wo hai himmatwaala par usse zindagi ke mod par aurat ke sahaare ki zaroorat padti hai... Tumne toh omira ki maut ko jaise taise barsdash kar liya par mera bacha nhn kar paaya; kosta hai wo khud ko..usse tumhare sahaare ki zaroorat hai... jhanvi explains her... ( Gauri, you are wife along with being a mother.. And a woman is strong enough to bear the wrongs without anybody's support but a man is not gauri.. A man's personality is a big deceive...He appears to be courageous but he needs a woman at every point in his life... You have coped up with omira's death but my son failed... He curses himself, holds himself responsible for her death... He needs you gauri)

Ji bhabhi!! Mom sahi keh rahi hain..Main jaanti hoon aapke liye mushkil hoga par please bhabhi koshish toh kijiye..! bhaiya ko zaroorat hai aapke sahaare ki...5 saal hogye hain, maine unhe hasta nhn dekha... mujhe mere bhaiya; mom ko unka beta lauta dijiye bhabhi...priyanka requests gauri. ( Yes bhabhi! Mom is right... I know it will be tought for you, but atleast try! My brother needs you by his side... 5 years bhabhi, 5 years since I saw him smiling.. Please return me back my brother, return my mom her son.)

A strong independent woman that she had turned herself into in the past 5 years is now a broken soul; even though she blamed om for their daughter's death she knew om could never intentionally harm her... Listening to her love's misery, she is in tears...agreeing to jhanvi she goes with them towards OM..

AT OM
Entering a house which was at some point her own now seemed strange to her.. It brought back all those feelings, the emotions and the moments that she had experienced with om, omira and the other members of the family! Tears made way through her eyes but she continued walking imbibing everything...

The family was pleasantly taken aback by the sight of their 2nd daughter in law; the soul of this house; the voice behind all the laughter...they were equally pained to see her like this... A lot of questions were running in their minds but one signal from jhanvi and they kept those buried within them only for them to later be answered by jhanvi..

Pleasantries and hugs were exchanged between gauri and the other members...But gauri's eyes were continuously searching for a person, a person who was her life, her love, her soul...Her OMKARA
Sensing the disappointed frown on her face, jhanvi through her eyes gestured gauri towards their room.. Without any further due, gauri started walking towards their room..their paradise that had seen them fighting, laughing, enjoying, their confession and them making love to each other..

Feeling too overwhelmed, she twisted the knob of the door only to be stumbled by the sight in front of her...
Her omkara is sitting in a room full of paintings... The man she fell in love with was no longer the same...His mane was untidy and unkept very unlikely of his being, his beard was overgrown, he had lost a considerable amount of weight...But the only thing that was still the same was the look in his eyes; the sparkle he had in his eyes seeing her...She caught the look when he looked up to see who the intruder is..

Without any words spoken she made her way inside; taking a look around she knows who he is babbling to, yes omira and gauri! his lifelines...one his heart and the other his soul...

Omira dekho aapki muma aayi hain...she hears him speak to the painting... ( Omira look your mother has come..)
Gauri...?? Kya tum sach main ho? Pta hai tum hazar baar mujhe nazar aati thi! Par jab bhi main tumhe choone lagatha tum gayab ho jaati thi...gauri..please iss baar mat jaana... kya tumhe maloom hai kitna mushkil hai tumahre bina jeena?? Kya tumne khaana khaaya ?? dhiyaan rakha karo na apna he keeps on babbling ( gauri...?? are you there for real?? You know I see you so many times but you leave as soon as I step ahead to touch you. Gauri please don't leave this time... Do you know how hard it is to be alive without you? Did you eat gauri? Take care of yourself..)

Omkaraji! She says only to have him look at her and realize that she is for real..

Tum?? tum kyun aayi ho yahan?? door raho mujhse; bahut door raho please...nahi toh tum bhi mujhse door chale jaaogi ..meri omira ki tarah! Please mere paas mat aanaa...JAAOO he shouts.
GET OUT...GAURI PLEASE JAO...!!!PAR MUJHSE DOOR MAT...J..JA..JAANA.. Tears fall from his eyes...and he runs towards the shelf, taking a big teddy bear which was the only memory of omira...now hugging it tightly he walked to the bed and sat near one of the legs of the bed, hiding his face deep into the teddy bear he keeps mumbling. ( You?? Why have you come here?? Stay away from me please...Or else you will leave me...Like my omia... Please don't come near me!...GOOO.. Get out gauri. Please go but don't leave me!)

Gauri is shocked seeing him act like this...Building up courage she goes near him, taking the teddy bear she makes him look at herself...

Dekho gauri kitni sundar lag rahi hai humari bachi...he tells her pointing towards a picture ( just see how pretty our daughter looks)

Sitting down near him, taking his hands in hers and controlling her dam that threatens to burst she says; Omira bahut sundar bachi thi afsos ab wo iss duniya main nhn hai omkaraji ( Yes omira was the most beautiful child; alas she is no more)

Aisa mat bolo gauri; main roz usse baat karta hoon, meri bachi se...he tells her ( don't say like this gauri! I talk to my daughter everyday)

Kya wo bhi aapse baat karti hai?? She asks him curious ( Does she also talk to you)

Nhn! Wo bas sunti hai aur hasti hai...he says recollecting their talks ( No, She just listens to me talking and smiles)

Omkaraji! Wo issiliye kyunki omira iss duniya main nhn hai, par aap usse mehsoos kar sakte hain...she tells him caressing his face ( Omkaraji, that is because omira is no more in this world...You talk to her because you can feel her)

Hugging him; she says omkaraji! Hum jaante hain ki aap nhn maan paayen hain iss baat ko ki humari bachi nhn hai humare saath par aapko manna padega; jaane dena padega usse...Hum hain aapke saath, aapko jo kehna hai humse kahiye hum sun rahe hain... ( I know that you haven't been able to accept her death but you have to, you have to let her go... I am with you, share whatever you want to with me...)

Hugging her back! He says.. wo roz raat ko mujhe nazar aati hai jab main aankhein band karta hoon toh! Uska khoon se bhara chehra mujhe naza aata hai gauri.. Meri befkoofi ki itni badi saza mili hume, meri bachi aur tum dono juda hogye mujhse...! And cries...!! ( I can see her whenever I close my eyes gauri... The sight of her blood stained face scares me...I lost both my girls owing to my stupidity)

Loud cries are heard; the cries of two souls who are sharing their agony today, the cries are letting their emotions flow...For om his cries are all those buried feelings of 5 years...For gauri the tears are om's pain that are pricking her heart! Om is letting out his tears for losing his daughter; while gauri is crying thinking about leaving om when they both needed each other...


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After an hour of crying;


Jaao na gauri! yahan se mujhse door jaao...nhn toh tumhe bhi main waise he kho doonga jaise omira ko khoya tha! He tells her ( Leave gauri...Go away from me...Or else I will loose you like I lost omira...)


Hum kahin nhn jaane waale aapko aise chod ke...she tells him in a finality ( I am not going anywhere leaving you)


Fer pehle kyun gyi?? Kyun chali gyi tum gauri? kyun gyi mujhe chod ke?? Pta hai kitna akela pad gya tha main...he speaks still hugging her but this time onto her waist ( Then why did you desert me earlier? Why did you go away before gauri? Do you have any idea how lost I was?)


Apni bachi ko khone ke baad bhaura gye the hum, sochne samjhane ki shakti kho bethe the apni aur aapko kusoorwaar maan bethe the! She tells him honestly (I had lost my capabilities to think rationally after losing my daughter... My mind had accepted you as the culprit)


Kuch galat toh nhn tha! Tumne mujhe kusoorwar mana kyunki main tha ...Meri galti thi! Agar uss din main thoda samjhdaari se kaam leta toh humari omira saath hoti humare; apne maa baap ke pass hoti wo...8 saal ki hoti wo...he tells her guilty ( You didn't do an wrong gauri! Your mind accepted me as the culprit because I was the one at fault...! Had I been a little cuationate about the happenings; our daughter, our omira would have been alive... she would have been here with her parents)


Main kamzor tha; nhn bacha paaya apni bachi ko uss aurat se...Tumhe na khone ke darr se apni bachi ko aur tumhe kho betha! He adds ( I was torpid as a snail to not understand my surroundings... I was weak to not be able to rescue our daughter from that woman... Fear of losing you lead me to loose our daughter...)


Par aapne jaan ke nhn kiya wo!..she consoles him ( It wasn't intentional)

Wo aapki bhi beti thi aur hum jaante hain ki aap kitna pyaar karte hain usse...Kabhi aap jaan booch kar aisa kuch nhn karenge jisse aapki princess ko koi takleef ho...haina?? she asks him and he nods in tears ( She was your daughter as well and I very well know how much you adored her.. You could never even in your wildest dreams think about harming omira..)


I'm sorry gauri! he says Meri wajah se sab bikhar gaya; tum toot gyi; humara parivaar barbaad hogya; humari bachi chali gyi...I'm sorry gauri...main aaj tak koi khushi nhn de paaya tumhe! Please chali jaao; mujhe meri tanhaayi main chodo aur jaao he tells her crying ( I'm sorry gauri! Everything got smashed into smithereens because of me; you broke because of me; Our family got ruined because of me; our daughter went away because of me...I'm sorry! I failed to keep you happy...Please let me be with my loneliness and go..)


Nhn omkaraji! Hum aur omira aapke dil main rehte hain...omira toh kabhi laut ke nhn aa sakti par hum aapke saath hain, aapke pass hain hum! She says rubbing his back ( No omkaraji!! Omira and I reside in your heart...Omira can never come back but I am with you; I am by you..)

Maana hum naaraz the; bahut toote hue the par hmare zehan main aaya he nhn ki aap bhi toote hue honge, takleef main honge...Apne gam main hum itna doob gye ki aapke baare main socha he nhn..! Maafi toh hume aapse maangni chaheye omkaraji ...Hume maaf kar dijiye she says ( I agree I was sulky, I was broken but I never thought that you would be equally affected and shattered as I was... I was so lost in my misery that I forgot you.. Infact I should be the one apologizing...Please forgive me)


Omkaraji! Hum bhale he aapse door the; magar juda kabhi bhi nhn the! Humne har pal aapko yaad kiya hai...she tells him holding his face. ( omkaraji! Even though we were far; but we were never distant..I had remembered you each day )


Weeks pass like this;

Om settles down a little after being assured that gauri won't leave him now! Even though he still blames himself for what happened with omira; but with the therapy and gauri's companionship he is able to accept that their daughter would never return.. He mingles with his family; with his brothers that were once his life...Notably he no longer hallucinates their daughter conversing with him...


Gauri and omkara have been spending more time, om has started painting again...they are confiding in each other more than they ever did...


Omkaraji! Uss din aap kahaan chale gye the?? Aap humare saath haspatal toh aaye the magar humne aapko kahin nhn dekha tha uske baad...gauri asks om one day while they were enjoying their evening walk ( Omkaraji! Where did you go that day?? You came with me till the hospital but I never saw you afterwards)


Main police station gya tha uss aurat ki saza bayan karna...Par jab lauta toh na tumhe paaya na he omira ko..maine tumhe bahut dhoondha par haar gya..! apni bachi ko ek aakhri alvida bhi nhn keh paaya main...he tells her regretfully ( I went to the police station to ensure the punishment for that lady! On my return, I didn't find you or omira. I tried hard to find you but I lost...I couldn't bid my daughter a final goodbye...)


Self condemning herself for that act, gauri drags omkara towards the car and blindfolds him...


Gauri kahaan jaa rahe hain hum?? He asks her irritated with her silence and blindfold ( Gauri where are we going??)


Shhh!! Kuch der aur fer sab pta lag jaayega...she says and continues driving... ( you will know in a little while)


Reaching the place, gauri helps omkara out of the car; un tugging his fold; she takes him near a grave...


Yeh toh...om speaks in between his sobs while falling down on his knees infront of the grave ( This is...)


Omira Omkara Singh Oberoi ki hai...gauri completes his sentence and kneels down next to him... Humari beti ki hai yeh..she adds while caressing the grave and the name engraved on it.. ( our daughter)


Jab bhi aapko omira ki yaad aaye; aap yahan aa jaaya kijiye; zaada door nhn hai yeh!...she tells him ( You can come here whenever you miss her...it's not far)


Hum aayenge gauri..Tum aur main! Humari beti se milne...Main tumahre bina apni zindagi ka koi raasta tay nhn karna chahta...aur yeh toh bilkul bhi nhn! he tells her resting his forehead on the grave... ( we will come; you and I will! To meet our daughter... I don't wish to travel any road of my life without you by my side...and especially not this one)


Hum bhi nhn! Ek baar jo galti humne ki; usse hum dobaara nhn dauhraynge...aapka saath kabhi nhn chodenge hum; waada hai yeh humaara...Gauri tells him... ( nor do I ... I don't want to repeat the same mistake again..! I will never leave you, I promise)


Listening to such words from gauri, om leans forward and covers the distance between their lips and it rains...A kiss to seal their promise of eternity whose witness is their OMIRA...


Bin mausaam barsaat shuru hogyi...yeh Mumbai bhi na...Gauri complains getting out of the kiss ( Unseasonal rain...This Mumbai!)


Lagta hai omira khush hai apne maa baap ko fer se ek baar saath dekh ke...om tells her ( Looks like omira is way too happy seeing her parents together after what seems like eternity)


Bhale he hume humare pyaar ne ek doosre se bhaandha ho; magar omira he wo thi jisne uss dor ko mazboot kiya tha pehle...Aur aaj bhi itne saalon baad agar hum saath hain toh sirf omira ki wajah se...gauri tells him

Spending a few moments next to their daughter's final abode; omkara is at peace...tearfully he says GOODBYE that he never was able to and walks away with gauri...



A year has passed since then and omkara-gauri have been living happily enjoying and embracing each other's company despite their busy work schedules...


Yeh kya?? Gauri asks him shocked when she sees him finishing a painting which was omkara and gauri with a child in between and an angel smiling at them from above... ( What is this??)


Yeh hain main tum aur humara bacha...aur wo omira hai! Om tells her happily ( This is you, me and our kid and that one is omira)


Par aapko kaise pta chala?? Gauri asks him pouting... ( But how did you know.??)


Kya kaise pta chala gauri?? he asks her confused while still focused at finishing the painting ( what? How did I find out??)


Yehi ki hum maa banne waale hain...she said ( that I am going to be a mother soon)


Kya?? he asks shocked dropping his brush... ( what??)


Itna hairaan kyun hain aap! Aapko toh pehle se pta tha...she tells him crying ( Why are you so taken aback?? You had already known this)


Gauri! yeh tum kya bol rahi ho?? Mujhe kuch nhn pta tha...aur please rona band karo...om tells her wiping her tears ( gauri what are you speaking?? I didn't know anything and please stop crying)


Agar nhn pta toh yeh kaise bnaaya aapne?? Aur kyun?? She asks pointing towards the painting ( if not, then how did you make this painting?)


Yeh maine haathon se bnaaya aur isiliye bnaaya kyunki yeh meri dil ki khawaahish hai; main chahta hoon ki humara bacha ho; ek family ho theek waise he jaise pehle thi!... aur iss baar main koi galti nhn karunga...he tells her side hugging her ( I made this using my hands gauri! And this is solely because having a family with you is my heart's desire..I want a child; our child; my family; our family like we had before...and this time I wouldn't commit any mistake)


Matlab aapko nhn pta tha?? She asks him innocently ( so you knew nothing?)


Nhn meri chirraiya! Nhn pta tha...aur tumne btaaya bhi toh kaise rote hue...He complains... ( nope my little birdie...I didn' know...and look at you; you told me this news crying)


Par gauri thank you! Mujhe fer se ek baar papa bnaane ke liye...he says with gratitude ( But seriously gauri! thank you for making me a father again)


Aapko bhi thank you; hume mumma bnaane ke liye ek baar fer se...she tells him with love and hugs him! ( thanks to you too for making me a mother again)


8 months pass with omkara pampering gauri every now and then; sometimes he is the overprotective kaara while the other times he dons the hat of posessivekara which gauri enjoys the most...Also in these 8 months omkara had an exclusive chance to see an unseen sight of his wife; a sight of bold gauri...This pregnancy of hers had made om happier because gauri's hormones were always raging with passion; unadulterated passion...


8 months and 2 days plus; gauri is in labor crying her wits out; om holding her hands; kissing her forehead and wiping the sweat beads that cover her forehead due to all the hardwork...one last push gauri! the baby is almost there...he tells her

With all her might she pushes and the sound soothes her ears; for it is the sound of a baby; their baby..! their son ...


Ma'am another push! The other one is still hanging in there...the doctor tells her.! Squeezing om's hand tightly she pushes to get their daughter back into this world completing their family...!




The daughter that led to their separation was also why these both came together once again... Destiny made them fall for each other again.. Destiny returned to them what had been snatched years back...



Thank you so much for reading...I know this was long but i suck at short chapters...


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nathalie_rs_ thumbnail
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This was so nice. I absolutely loved it.
Thanks for the PM.
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very emotional beautiful OS
thanks for the pm
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This was lovely and emotional di
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That hit me right in the feels 😭
It was perfect and so beautifully written
Both were broken and hurt
Life separated them the moment they needed each other the most :(
And then they found their way back to each other
Omira may not return yet her Brother will make her Parents happier than before
WOW JUST WOW
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It was fabulous
Loved it so much
Feeling bad for rikara. They lost their child because of that cunning woman!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I was crying buckets that means you have written beautifully. I didn't like omira gone forever, till half the update I was expecting her to come back courtesy to swetlana.what to do m sucker of hapy endings but as the story progressed I realized she was really gone .Then again you gave us happy ending differently .so I guess all is well.
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It's do sad day they lost their daughter at first...but they were again together...and they created another beautiful life again... beautiful story
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Originally posted by: nathalie_rs_

This was so nice. I absolutely loved it.

Thanks for the PM.


I'm glad you loved it❤️

Thank you so much😊

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