GHAM-E-DIL....A Rikara OS

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aayushi1

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Posted: 7 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: rikara94
Ayushi yar its Beautiful and emotional

I was crying while reading 😭

Both were broken and hurt

The moment they lost omira ..was heart wrenching and then they separated

And the moment when she consoled him..was beautifully portrayed

And then fate gave another chance to live together again

Aww they blessed with another baby

Beautifully penned down and i must say you are really good in dialogues

Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful piece of yours

Jyoti!!😊😊

i hate tears yaar...don't cry! I'm sorry if it was a tad bit more emotional than what i wanted it to be..

Gauri lost her daughter but om lost both his girls..>!! Om needed gauri the most after omira died..Alas she held him responsible.!

That's what life is; give second chances and move on...Too short to just lament on the past...optimistic approach is required...

I'm so glad you loved it❤️...Thank you for reading it😊

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OoViVioO

@OoViVioO

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#32

This story was just sooo 😭 When I read the comments I kind of left this to read later...and I was right...it really was emotional as well as beautifully written..tugged at my heartstrings.

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aayushi1

@aayushi1

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: OoViVioO
This story was just sooo 😭 When I read the comments I kind of left this to read later...and I was right...it really was emotional as well as beautifully written..tugged at my heartstrings.

I'm glad you came back to read it😊😊

Thank you so much for all the kind words you have for this story...!❤️

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