AvNeil Fan-Fiction : Chase Against Time Ch31: Pg41 on 11/09

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Shahnaz

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Posted: 7 years ago

#181

Originally posted by: paayaal
Neilz concern for Ananya came out all wrong in front of her...she doesn't even know he has feelings for her so obv she took his words/accusations at face value...but I think therez a bit of guilt in there too & maybe a smudge of fear...of not listening to him & what could have happened...that's why she was so harsh with her words.

Unless Neil admits to his feelings for Ananya the arguments between them won't cease...because to be a cop he needs to be objective & right now he isn't in the right frame of mind!

You brought Aman back & that too in a positive role...helping his Di...he sounds like a hacker...what does Ananya do when shez not running the orphanage with Neela??

Thank you, Payal. Well, yes, she is clueless about how Neil feels. We will have to wait and see if Ananya is guilty and she fears something.

Admitting feelings? I don't think if he is even sure about his own feelings. But he will surely be back in his element. The Supercop just needs to straighten his thoughts. But anyways, I will work on it .

Yes, Aman. Well, he was a last minute addition. I wanted to get a character and insted of getting a random one, I thought why not him. In the show, his positive side was barely exploited. I wish to do that here. A loyal brother. You will get to know more about Aman and Ananya in upcoming updates. Till then enjoy the ride with Supercop. ;)

Thanks, again for the comment. These inputs surely are of a great help. :)

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Shahnaz

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Posted: 7 years ago

#182

Originally posted by: AgnesFan
This whole conversation turned into a fight because Ananya wasn't of any mood to entertain his questions . Unless Neil realises and confesses his feelings to her she won't stop fighting and he can't get aa straight mind to think about the case. wonder what will be her reaction when he confess ! She had taken his concern wrongly as his police nature .
I'm so happy that you brought Aman to help her . Is he hacker

Thanks for your review.

Ananya, is she ever in a mood to entertain his question? Anyways, Neil realizing and confessing his feelings is what seems to be on your list too 😆

I don't think, I am planning the confession anytime soon. But realisation might be a possibility. Maybe, maybe not. What, I can assure you for now is the case would be their priority. And they will work towards it. ;)

Yes, yes! Aman is here to help. His profession or you can say his role would be revealed to you all in the upcoming chapters.

Once again, thanks a lot for dropping by.

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Wingsoflove_2

@Wingsoflove_2

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Posted: 7 years ago

#183

Their conversation turned into fight.

I think first he need to realize his feeling.

I love his protective nature but unfortunately avni don't like it. Bcoz she don't know about his feelings. Let's see what happens.

Continue soon😛

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

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Posted: 7 years ago

#184

Originally posted by: rilsaf
Their conversation turned into fight.
I think first he need to realize his feeling.
I love his protective nature but unfortunately avni don't like it. Bcoz she don't know about his feelings. Let's see what happens.
Continue soon😛

Thanks for your review!

Yes, their conversation, well more like an interrogation turned into an argument. But what can we say, these two are mostly at each others throat.

Don't worry, he will have ample of time to figure out his thoughts. Might not be now, but he will.

Protective nature, interesting. She has got her head into something else for now. What? You will get to know.

I will update soon. And you will see what happens. Soon! :)

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Tumpa12

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Posted: 7 years ago

#185

loved it

awesome

thnx for pm

update soon

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Shahnaz

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Posted: 7 years ago

#186

Originally posted by: Tumpa12
loved it
awesome
thnx for pm
update soon

Thank You! I will surely update soon! :)

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Shahnaz

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Posted: 7 years ago

#187

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840837

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Posted: 7 years ago

#188

Intriguing...waiting to see how this unfolds.

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Anu

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Posted: 7 years ago

#189

O wow...love his recognition of his growing feelings, and the way you described their friction as well.. let's see if they one together to solve this, or if their egos keep them at odds..terrific job

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HighOnSarcasm

@HighOnSarcasm

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#190

Now the ACP can do his job because the man has at least acknowledged that he has an emotional attachment towards the woman who is an 'almost victim' of his latest case!

Amanz an awesome hacker & they have an amazing system coz both Avni & Neil got the same reports simultaneously even though both were at diff locations...& since they are all smart people they ve realized that the murderer played them!

The intriguez getting interesting...so so so eager to know more!

P.S. Is it Ali?

Edited by paayaal - 7 years ago