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#11

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
very nice..

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#12

Originally posted by: mijanur
Nice OS Nabeela.

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#13

Originally posted by: pearl100
Hey LL 😃
Wow so beautifully written yaar. You should really continue this, loved the way Zoya defended herself in front of Adi and Mahi...wanted to see this in the show. Would love to see many more changes in her and hopefully, she becomes much stronger. Would love to read more...Please do keep writing more.

Hey pearlyyy 😆 Honestly nobody has ever called me LL..I like it 😛

Thanks dude.. Ikr! Zoya turning badass gradually would be soo great to watch in the show. I love that kinda of character development, it's like we see all of their phases you know. A character's high's and lows.. That's what makes the story better. Same thing with Adi.. I hope they show how his character develops from being this guy who does not like being weak in front of others.. to the guy who is ok with accepting that he is broken.. 😳

I am glad you like it so much babe.. and I will try to continue it if time permits. hehe

Love yaaa

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#14

Originally posted by: .Harini.
Amazing OS

😳 Thankss

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#15

Originally posted by: sh_aarohi
lovely ❤️

Glad you like it! Thankyouu

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Originally posted by: Karan.Preeta
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