#3 Song Osthon #2 Jeene laga hu by divan19 on pg 133 April 17 - Page 8

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: divz9769

Beautiful OS

raman was ishitas silent lover he was not able to voice out his feeling because of his financial status he was orphan brought up in orphanage he studied hard and got the scholarship in most popular college of fashion designing ashok and suraj were his room mates he used to do ashoks work for his day to day expenses poor raman felt bad for him the way ashok was behaving with him😡raman always comes infront of ishitas car she is daughter of trustee and queen bee of college all boys behind her in college ishitas father kpet driver for her thinking her driving skill is not proper loved the way ishita supported raman and slapped ashok she asked raman to be her partner in prom night party raman was shocked he is so cute ishita asked raman to tell her if anyone troble him he nodded raman was sad as he doesn't had cloth for party nadeem bhai helped him raman designed the shoes but ashok and suraj cropped that nadeem bhai helped raman with his shoes and dropped him to party ishita was angry as raman was late raman was in mask so she was not able to recognize him ishra dance was nice nadeem bhai called raman and said they are getting late raman ran out from the party ishita ran to knwo his name but he left he got his shoes next day she came in college she wanted to know the boy who dance with her last night she saw raman but ignored him and left he was confused poor raman principal gave credit of designed shoes to ashok which raman had designed ramans dream were shattered ishita is really jkr loved the way she beats ashok for taking credit ishra scene was superb their confession was lovely ishita told everything to her father raman was given the trip of paris for his scholarship ishita to wanted to go with him they got married in one year raman became big fashion designer ishra scene was so lovely
thanks for the PM



Thx dii
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Posted: 7 years ago
#72
Nice os
love it
thanks for pm
update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: Vampire2468

Amazinggg OS😳Loved it so much❀Raman admiring n secretly loving IshuLoved how Ishita taught Ashok n Suraj a good lessonđŸ‘đŸŒThey deserved it😈Awww IshRa confessed their feelingsđŸ€ȘThey got married tooThey both completed their higher studies n Raman became successful too in his career with the help of his IshuPerfect title, song n pics toođŸ‘đŸŒFab narration👏


Thanku so much dear
Glad u liked it 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
#74
beautiful lovely OS
ishras story is like Cinderella's
only thing is Ramans shoe
loved it
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Amazing os dear
Fairy tale type story

So lovely

Jkr is in form throughout she doesn't fear about anything but Raman is just opposite to her

He is fear about her jkr like anything

Ashok is too much

Wow her given back to Ashok was superb

Finally Ishu find her love

Driver brother was too good

Happy for ishra
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Posted: 7 years ago
#76
nadeem bhai did fake accident for ishra meeting as raman loved ishita.so sweet.mask party dance scene was lovely.loved nadeem bhai helping raman.nadeem bhai is like Cinderella Godmother/fairy. Raman running away as he has to keep his clothes back and ishita getting one shoe. .ishita making ashok raman wear the shoe to find the guy reminded me of Cinderella. loved how ishita behaved to ashok exposing him.ishra union was beautiful.happy to see raman as a famous designer and loved the song sequence.nice song .loved the pics
Edited by jasminerahul - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#77
Nice OS harshita .
It reminds me of Cinderella .
He he he Raman became Cinderella and left his self design shoes in the party .
Poor ishita she got embarrassed because of Raman ,all mocked her for choosing Raman as her partner .
The confession part was lovely .
Loved it .
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Posted: 7 years ago
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HHHi friends back with my next OS in this thread . This is on song " khud ko dhoond lenge phir kabhi "suggested by my buddy luvusername .


YE LAMHA JO THEHRA HAI





Raman was working in his room when his mother entered the room with a glass of milk . She walked to him and passed the glass to him ,he saw his mother and spoke " arey ma you hadn't slept yet ,why did you stressed yourself I would have taken myself ".

T- don't pretend as you care for me somuch .

R- I really do ma ,why are you saying so .

T- then what should I say ,how many times I had asked you for marriage ,every time you denies ,ye bhi koi gal hai . kya zindagi bhar aise hi akele rahega , main chain se mar bhi nahi paaungi .

R- ohh ma ,its too much filmy but you know na I don't believe in marriage after shagun's betrayal .mujhe nahi karni hai shaadi vaadi .

T- till when you will cry for that shagun's betrayal ,arey use tujhse shaadi nahi karni thi to nahi ki ,jaane de use , she must be living her life happily then why you are ruining your life ,you also marry and live a happy life .

R- what's the guarantee that the other girl will nice girl .

T- and why do you think that every girl is like shagun ,look around yourself ,all are living a happy married life ,only you are ruining your life in that cheater shagun's memory.

R- what do you wanna say .

T- few days back ,my friend dolly introduce me to a lady madhvi iyer. She is a nice lady , their family is also good , her daughter ishita is very beautiful and nice girl ,meet her once may be you would like her .

R- I knew it ,that you must have seen some girl that's why you are talking like this .

T- haan to ,you just tell me yes or no.

R- but promise me even if I meet her , you will not pressurize me to marry her .

T- ok promise ,to should I tell her mother .

R- humm .

Listening to this toshiji become happy and went from there . On the other hand Ishita's mother was also busy in convincing her to meet Raman.

M- ishu kanna he is a nice boy ,dolly aunty was praising him much .

I- what should I do then .I told you na I m not at all interested in marriage thing .

M- but why you don't want to marry ,at least told me the reason ,your studies are over ,you had started your job too now get married and let us be free .

I- you mean to say that I m burden on you .

M- not at all ,I mean to say that getting you married and seeing you settled in life is also one of our responsibility . We cannot be tension free or say will get free from our responsibilities till we will see you settled in life ,I know you wanna live your life alone but at least think about us . relatives and friends had started asking about your marriage.

I- ok tell me ,what I have to do .

M- I have chosen this boy for you and want you to meet him .

I- ok ,if you insist I will meet him but promise me you will not force me for marriage.

M- haan baba achcha ladka hoga tabhi shaadi karna .Here is the pic .

Saying so amma went from there keeping Raman's photograph ,ishita didn't bother to see it and continued her work ,after much time when she was going to sleep ,his pic fell in front of her ,she picked the pic and spoke looking to it " Not bad though I will not marry you but milna to padega as I had promised to amma ".

Saying so she kept his pic in her bag and went to sleep . Next day toshiji too gave Ishita's picture to Raman and told him that she will inform about the time and place of meeting after talking to Mrs iyer . Raman nodded and went to office ,at afternoon toshiji called Raman ,and amma called ishita both the mothers inform ishra about the time and places of their meeting . Both agreed and assured their mother that they will go and meet each other .

At evening Raman went to CCD where he was about to meet ishita . He reached on time but saw nobody was waiting for him ,he settled in the table that's when he noticed ishita entering the place ,she scanned the place and walked directly to him . He saw her and liked her from the first sight ,she too liked his look . Both greeted each other and settled in their chair ,ordered Cappuccino for themselves ,then both remained silent for sometimes . Then Raman started talking ,they at first exchanged their names ,qualifications, then jobs ,dreams ,likes and dislikes . In first few minutes itself they had cleared that they had just come to meet and this meeting doesn't means that they are ready for marriage and both happily agreed to each other . They talked for sometimes and really liked their companies ,they decided to meet again before deciding anything .

Both bid adieu to each other and went to their house ,their mother's ask for their decision and both told to wait for sometimes . Both the mothers got happy as they got hope because their kids didn't denied straight like earlier . On the other hand ishra were smiling unlike their self ,they are quite happy meeting each other and was thinking about other . Next day also they meet this time they went to meet each other dressing bit nicely ,checking if they are looking good or not . They met ,had their coffee ,talked some more about each other ,family parents and returned home ,they had exchanged phone number too and talked over phone also .

Slowly unknown to themselves both came closer ,now their most of the times spends in talking to each other over phone ,they eagerly wait for evening to meet and night so that they can talk anything and everything ending their night ,bidding good night to each other . Slowly both felt the difference in themselves and Raman decided to talk to ishita .He was eagerly waiting for evening and finally the time came ,he booked a roof top restaurant for themselves and went to pick ishita . Both reached to the restaurant and she was surprised to see the arrangements and asked if something special is there . He nodded and told that he will tell the reason shortly . ishita smiled and both started talking normally while Raman was looking at her but was lost in his thoughts that how his mind has changed and now he think only about her and imagine her everywhere .

Yeh lamha jo tehra hai
Mera hai yeh tera hai
Yeh lamha main jee loon zara

Tujhme khoya rahun main
Mujhme khoyi rahe tu
Khud ko dhoond lenge phir kabhi

Tujhse milta rahoon main
Mujhse milti rahe tu
Khud se hum milenge phir kabhi
Haan aa phir kabhi

Ishita noticed that he is not responding to her and she flashed her hand in front of him breaking his trance ,he smiled looking to her and she asked " what ".

He shook his head negatively and smacked himself mentally for behaving like a teenager .

Kyun bewajah gungunaye
Kyun bewajah muskuraaye
Palke chamakne lagi hai
Ab khwab kaise chupaye

Behki si baatein karle
Hans hans ke aankhen bhar le
Yeh behoshiyaan phir kahaan

Tujh mein khoya rahun main
Mujh mein khoyi rahe tu
Khud ko dhoond lenge phir kabhi

Tujhse milta rahoon main
Mujhse milti rahe tu
Khud se hum milenge phir kabhi
Aa haan phir kabhi

That's when the music started and he asked her hand for dance ,she happily gave her hands on his and both started swaying with the slow music .

Dil pe taras aa rahan hain
Pagal kahi ho na jaayein
Woh bhi main sun ne laga hoon
Jo tum kabhi kehna paaye

Raman pulled her closer by waist while she too rested her head on his chest holding his shoulder and both got lost in the moment.



Ye subha phir aayegi
Ye shaamein phir aayengi
Ye nazdeekiyan phir kahaan

Tujhme khoya rahun main
Mujhme khoyi rahe tu
Khud ko dhoond lenge phir kabhi

Tujhse milta rahoon main
Mujhse milti rahe tu
Khud se hum milenge phir kabhi
Haan aa phir kabhi

Soon the song ended and they parted unwillingly . The waiter showed up with champagne ,she informed him " I don't drink Raman " .

R- I knew it ,its a fruit champagne .have it .

Saying so he poured the drink in two classes and passed to her . She took it and both started sipping it slowly . After that Raman held Ishita's hand ,though she was assuming that may be he is going to confess but her heartbeat increased when he held her hand while her eyes automatically got closed feeling his touch . He pressed her hand while she shivered due to nervousness. Raman settled beside her and asked concerned " ishita are you ok ".

I- humm .

R- should we continue .

I- humm .

R- can I hold your hand ,are you comfortable .

I- humm .

He held her hand happily and spoke
" you know ishita you are not first girl in my life ,before you I had a girlfriend name shagun ,we were college mates ,I love her a lot but when I went abroad for further studies . we were in touch but slowly she stopped talking to me , one day I called her and a man picked the call . I was surprised to listen a male voice ,asked who is he and came to know that he is her boyfriend ,I was shocked and insisted to talk to her as I wanted to confirm and soon she confirmed . My heart broke and I decided not to marry considering all the girl are cheater . even I don't wanted to meet you also but met because of ma , she was behind my marriage . ".

Ishita smiled meekly listening to him while he continued " ishita now after meeting you I had started enjoying my life again , I want to talk to you always ,wanna see you without blinking my eyes . I don't know what your decision will be but want to express my feeling towards you ."

Ishita saw him with questioning eyes ,taking a deep breath ,he took her both hand in his and spoke " I love you ishita and want to marry you ,will you ."

Her eyes become moist ,she took out a picture from her purse and showed him ,he saw it surprisingly and asked " who is he ".

I- he was my classmate in college , Nishant . I loved him crazily ,tried to confess my love many times but couldn't as I was scared . our college ended and we parted ,he went somewhere else for further studies and we never meet or talked about college but still I was having hope that I will get my love that's why I never wanted to meet you but came to meet for my parents ,though I had decided to deny for the marriage after first meeting itself but don't know what happened I felt a pull towards you and we started meeting .Nishant was long forgotten and now its only you ."

Till now he was nervous but smiled fully between his tears listening to her ,he saw her with questioning eyes while she nodded happily and spoke " yes I do ,l agree to marry you Raman because I too in hopelessly ,insanely in love with you ".

Both smiled fully looking deep into each other eyes while happy tears roll down from both pair of eyes ,they hugged each other tightly confessing their love again .

THE END

That's all friends ,hope you like it. Enjoy reading and do respond ,at least hit like buttons .

Edited by Divanru - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Superb update
Ishra deny for marraiage
Met each other
And finally decidedto marry
Loved it
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Posted: 7 years ago
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lovely OS
ishra after losing their first love both unwillingly met but fall for each other hopelessly now both confessed and agreed for marriage

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