Ishra os-mere pyaar ki umar ho itni sanam updt on Mar 28

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Hi everyone, here I am again with another os, it's on the song, mere pyaar ki umar ho itni sanam, suggested by jaya1867 aka shruthi. Hope everyone like it, it's also a out of box concept. Enjoy.

MERE PYAAR KI UMAR HO ITNI SANAM


Ishita was standing infront of the mirror getting ready while others were busy in making her ready. She look at the mirror and smiled while all teased her.

Lady -aaj toh dulhe raja ke hosh udne walen hai. U r looking really pretty.

Ishita -kuch bhi, pretty?? Ek toh raman want all this, Upar se u all r teasing. Stop teasing me like this. She said while her cheeks turned red due to constant smiling. She look at herself and was thinking that after long, very long she is finally so happy and contented and it's all because of raman.

Raman, the name itself have coloured her whole world. She felt at peace being with him. She smiled at her thoughts and soon she was taken to the mandap. She look at him, he look at her, both smiled looking at each other and sat together.

Soon the marriage rituals started. Pandit ji start chanting mantras while Ishra were sitting holding their hands.

Ishra were taking nuptial vows looking at each other. Pandit ji told them to take pheras around the sacred fire and they obliged to it. Then pandit told him to fill her partition, he filled her partition with a coin while she closed her eyes feeling his touch. At last he tied the mangalsutra around her neck making her as his forever. They look at each other and shared a serene smile. All clapped for them and finally ishra were taken to their room.

Ishita was sitting in the room while Raman was behind her. He make her sit comfortably and asked -happy??

She nodded in yes and said -kabhi nahi socha tha ki zindagi ke iss mod par, jab zindagi khatam hone lagti hai ,uss waqt mujhe koi humsafar mil jayega.

Raman -maine bhi kahan socha tha ki jis jagah mujhe mera parivaar chod kar chala gaya tha wahan mujhe koi apna kehne wala mil jayega, Ek old age home mein Ek love story ban jayegi. He said looking at 57 years old ishita, who was now lawful wedded wife of 62 years old Raman Kumar bhalla.

Raman -sach ishita vishwas nahi hota, ki jab sabne humse rishta tod liya, hamare apno ne hume chod diya, humne Ek dusre se rishta tod liya. Aakhir hum aaj ho hi gaye, finally tumhe apna bana hi liya. He said smiling to which she smiled and said -yes Raman, Maine bahut koshish ki, ki main khud par control karun, iss umar mein yeh sab naa sochun. But phir lagaa ki kyun naa sochun aur Kiske liye rokun khud ko. uss bete ke liye jisne mujhe ghar se nikalne se pehle Ek baar nahi socha. Ki yeh wahin maa hai jisne uske papa ke marne ke baad, itne saal iska khayal rakha. I was just 30 when my husband died. I was a housewife ,kuch nahi pata tha mujhe duniyadaari ka but still I worked just to make sure that shubham(ishita's son) get everything aur usne kya kiya, just throw me out of his house like I am some broken furniture, jiski zarurat khatam ho gayi ho. She said with moist eyes.

Raman wiped her tears and said -agar rona hi tha, toh mujhe shaadi kyun ki. Akele ro leti, jaise aaj tak rote aayi hoon.

Ishita -i got married to u so that u can wipe my tears everytime I cry.

Raman -yes I am here to wipe ur tears but still I don't want u to cry
Mujhe dekho, mujhe meri bete ne ghar se nikaal diya kyunki main retire ho gaya, uske kaam ka nahi raha, Main ro raha hoon kya.

Ishita -dont say like this,i have seen u crying alone for ur son. Aapki takleef mujhse alag nahi hai raman, like me, u have also lost ur family.aapka saath bhi yahin hua joh mere saath hua,shayad issliye hi hum yahan akele hai.

Raman -akele hai nahi, akele tha. Now we r together. Aur tab tak saath rahenge, jab tak zinda hai. He said smiling.

Ishita -but I am worried agar shubham ko yeh baat pata chali toh woh kaise react karega.

Raman -u r still thinking about him. Arey uski zindagi ka hissa tum nahi ho. Woh mud kar bhi nahi aayega tumhe dekhne ke liye.ab hamare liye koi bhi aur rishta nahi hai, sirf hum hi hai Ek dusre ke liye, joh jeete jee Ek saath rahenge aur shayad marne ke baad bhi. So stop thinking about ur son, he is not going to come back, he is happy in his family,u stay happy in ur family. Ab yeh old age home hi hamara ghar hai, aur yeh saare oldies hamari family. He was saying when four kids come and said -aur hum.

Raman look at them and said -arey adi, Ruhi, pihu aur Aaliya,aao tum sab. Tum hi toh ho sahi maayne mein hamare bachche, hamari family. He said and all the kids came in.

Aaliya-kya baatein ho rahi thi dadu, dadi se romantic wali baatein kar rahe the. She said teasing ishita and all laughed.

Ishita -kuch bhi bakwaas karti hai yeh aalu.

Ruhi -but still dadu -dadi, I am very happy for u two.u know aap dono hamare favourite hai iss old age home mein, aap dono ne hum orphans ko itna pyaar diya hai ki hume lagta hi nahi ki tum orphans hai. Do saal mein Aap dono se aisa rishta jud gaya hai, jaise Aap log soch mein hamare dadu -dadi ho. We all u alot.

Adi-aur maine toh dadu ki bahut help bhi ki hai dadi ko convince karne mein, toh main toh inka pakka wala grandson hua, naa dadu.

Pihu-aisa hai kya dadu, humne bhi toh help kiya tha naa. Toh hum bhi toh hue naa pakke wale grand children .

Raman -haan baba, tum sab ne help kiya, tum sabne hume sikhaya ki joh hume chod gaye unke liye marne se achcha unke liye jeeyen joh hamare saath hai.

Ishita -haan, tum log ne hume bataya ki shaadi sirf parivaar ke liye, balki Ek humsafar ke liye ki jaati hai, aur pyaar ki koi umar nahi hoti, bas feelings hoti hai, joh matter karti hai. Tum sabne hume yeh ehsaas dilaya, that we can live for each other if not for others, toh tum sab hamare asli grandchildren ho. She said and hugged all four.

Ruhi -toh ho jaaye Ek groupie newly wed couple ke saath. She said and all nodded. Raman wrapped his arms around ishita and all four surrounded them.

Ruhi -say cheese.no no pout, she said and all made pout while Ishra look at each other and Raman said -i love u, meri buddhi madrasan.

Ishita smiled and said -i love u too my ever young punjabi. Meri umar chahe kitni bhi ho but mere pyaar ki umar ho itni sanam ,tere naam se shuru tere naam se khatam.she said and smiled while Raman pecked her temple.

Adiruhuliya hooted for them happily and clicked their pic while Ishra eyes were locked with each other.

Mere Pyaar Ki Umar Ho Itani Sanam
Mere Pyaar Ki Umar Ho Itani Sanam
Tere Naam Se Shuru, Tere Naam Pe Khatam
Mere Pyaar Ki Umar Ho Itani Sanam

Mere Pyaar Ki Umar Ho Itani Sanam
Tere Naam Se Shuru, Tere Naam Pe Khatam
Teri Khushi Se Hai Khushi, Tere Gam Se Hai Gam,
Teri Khushi Se Hai Khushi, Tere Gam Se Hai Gam,
Tere Naam Se Shuru, Tere Naam Pe Khatam
Mere Pyaar Ki Umar Ho Itani Sanam

Mere Sapane Gulaabi Ninde Ho Gai Javaan
Mere Sapane Gulaabi Ninde Ho Gai Javaan
Lo Aake Teri Baaho Mein
Ho Lo Aake Teri Baaho Mein Mai Kho Gai Kahaan

Haazir Hai Jaan Jaan-E-Man, Jaan Ki Qasam,
Haazir Hai Jaan Jaan-E-Man, Jaan Ki Qasam,
Tere Naam Se Shuru, Tere Naam Pe Khatam
Mere Pyaar Ki Umar Ho Itani Sanam

Bina Tere Ik Pal Bhi Mujhe Raha Nahi Jaae
Bina Tere Ik Pal Bhi Mujhe Raha Nahi Jaae
Ye Door Door Rahanaa Ab Sahaa Nahi Jaae
Teri Pyaar Bhari Baaho Me Hi Nikalegaa Dam,
Teri Pyaar Bhari Baaho Me Hi Nikalegaa Dam,
Tere Naam Se Shuru, Tere Naam Pe Khatam
Mere Pyaar Ki Umar Ho Itani Sanam

O Ek Chhota Sa Ghar Ho Rahe Dono Waha
Jahaan Pyaar Se Mile Ye Dharti Aasmaan
Tut Jaaye Naa Khai Mere Pyaar Ka Bhram
Tut Jaaye Naa Khai Mere Pyaar Ka Bhram
Tere Naam Se Shuru, Tere Naam Pe Khatam
Teri Khushi Se Hai Khushi, Tere Gam Se Hai Gam,
Teri Khushi Se Hai Khushi, Tere Gam Se Hai Gam,
Tere Naam Se Shuru, Tere Naam Pe Khatam
Mere Pyaar Ki Umar Ho Itani Sanam
Mere Pyaar Ki Umar Ho Itani Sanam
Mere Pyaar Ki Umar Ho Itani Sanam

That's all, enjoy and do comment and hit like. Will wait for it.

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cutieruhi thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Updated an os, have a look.
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Beautiful os di
It was really a unique os
Old aged ishra
Awesome and lovely
Fabulous concept
Loved it di
Ty 4 d pm too
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Thanks for pm Di
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loved it
really out of the box
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Super cute os
Loved it
So different n unique
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Lovely concept and beautifully written
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beautiful OS
very unique concept
ishra as dadu dadi yaar I can't imagine but still concept us nice
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Awesome os!!
Very unique concept..
Love story of oldage ishra..
When their family left them alone they both found each other..
Loved it.
Very beautifully written.
Thanks for d pm dii:)
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Beautiful OS
Unique concept
Ishra at old age home
Different shade of Ishra
Loved it
U penned so nicely
Thanks for the pm

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