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Posted: 7 years ago
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Guys I want to say that this is my life's first os. So Pls tolerate my bakwaas piece of work 😕
My os is on yesterday's episode of that, so here it goes

Rashmi is possessed by lucky and she is holding knife
Aditi : Rashmi, put that knife down. It's not at all safe .
Rashmi (lucky) : why aditi? Are u afraid already? Don't worry it's not for my Rashmi, it's for you.
And at once aditi was attacked by the knife, which resulted in a cut on her hand.
And here in hospital, vikrant's body showed sudden movements. Suresh sir was right there so he called the doctor.
Vikrant's inner soul knew that aditi was in danger but he couldn't get up as if his body was chained.
Here aditi was fighting with her fear as well as lucky. She caught that locket and burnt it, but not the board. Even she didn't know why she let the board. And suddenly aditi's phone rang. After the call, she ran and reached to hospital in record time.
Aditi entered vikrant's ward and she saw his rapid changes in body.
Aditi : Vikrant, pls get up. Pls, it's really difficult without you. You are right, I am a danger attracting magnet, who will be with me. All these things are making me feel mad and helpless. Pls, at least wake up now.
Aditi's tears dropped on vikrant's hand, due to all this aditi's injury began to bleed and blood began to flow rapidly and landed on vikrant's hand.
As soon as aditi's blood touched vikrant's body, he suddenly opened his eyes and seeing aditi in front of him, he woke up with a jerk and immediately hugged her.
Aditi had closed her eyes while crying, so when she felt someone hugging her ,she opened her eyes and found vikrant,her happiness knew no bounds and reciprocated the hug .
Vikrant then broke the hug and saw blood and wound in her hands and began scolding.
Vikrant : Aditi, ye chot kaisi lagi. Apna khayaal bahu rakh sakti ho tum, paagal ho. Har din ek naya musibat mod leti ho. Ye dekho kitna khoon beh raha hai.kisne kiya ye, uska naam bolo mujhe.
Aditi( a bit louder) :mujh pe chillane se pehle Khud ki haalat toh dekh lo.
Vikrant then a bit shocked by aditi's this avatar looked around himself and was a little confused by seeing himself in hospital : main yaha kaise?
Aditi : ACP vikrant, Jo ruthless, heartless aur stone hearted banke ghoomta hai, wo aaj hospital mein hai hypertension ki wajah se Jo hua unhe jyada stress ke kaaran. Aur wo Jo Khud ki khayaal Nahi rakh sakta ,wo mujh pe chilla raha hai.
She said a bit angrily.
The doctor and Suresh sir who was watching all this, came forward and said.
Doctor : well, Mr. Singhal, you are all right now. But still your body needs rest and I will prescribe some medicine, make sure you don't skip them .
Aditi : you give that to me doctor, I will make sure he has it.
Doctor : sure. Well I have to agree, your love is very strong. I thought it only exists in films, finding couple like you these days is really very difficult.
Vikrant and aditi were baffled by doctors words.
Suresh sir who somewhere knew it was true, said to doctor
S. Sir: excuse me doctor, I wanna speak something.
Both excusing themselves went out leaving vikrant and aditi alone .
Vikrant : by any means did he say couple.
Aditi: ya, I guess so (to distract now )anyways I will my self take care of your food and medicines now, and no objections.
Vikrant : yes mam,your wish is my command.
Both giggled at this.
Both the hearts were satisfied. And why won't they be, as they were together now.


Guys Pls forgive if it's not good and for all spelling mistakes and capital letters in between.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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It's beautiful shristhi.. well done 👏
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Originally posted by: Shristhi19

Guys I want to say that this is my life's first os. So Pls tolerate my bakwaas piece of work 😕

My os is on yesterday's episode of that, so here it goes

Rashmi is possessed by lucky and she is holding knife
Aditi : Rashmi, put that knife down. It's not at all safe .
Rashmi (lucky) : why aditi? Are u afraid already? Don't worry it's not for my Rashmi, it's for you.
And at once aditi was attacked by the knife, which resulted in a cut on her hand.
And here in hospital, vikrant's body showed sudden movements. Suresh sir was right there so he called the doctor.
Vikrant's inner soul knew that aditi was in danger but he couldn't get up as if his body was chained.
Here aditi was fighting with her fear as well as lucky. She caught that locket and burnt it, but not the board. Even she didn't know why she let the board. And suddenly aditi's phone rang. After the call, she ran and reached to hospital in record time.
Aditi entered vikrant's ward and she saw his rapid changes in body.
Aditi : Vikrant, pls get up. Pls, it's really difficult without you. You are right, I am a danger attracting magnet, who will be with me. All these things are making me feel mad and helpless. Pls, at least wake up now.
Aditi's tears dropped on vikrant's hand, due to all this aditi's injury began to bleed and blood began to flow rapidly and landed on vikrant's hand.
As soon as aditi's blood touched vikrant's body, he suddenly opened his eyes and seeing aditi in front of him, he woke up with a jerk and immediately hugged her.
Aditi had closed her eyes while crying, so when she felt someone hugging her ,she opened her eyes and found vikrant,her happiness knew no bounds and reciprocated the hug .
Vikrant then broke the hug and saw blood and wound in her hands and began scolding.
Vikrant : Aditi, ye chot kaisi lagi. Apna khayaal bahu rakh sakti ho tum, paagal ho. Har din ek naya musibat mod leti ho. Ye dekho kitna khoon beh raha hai.kisne kiya ye, uska naam bolo mujhe.
Aditi( a bit louder) :mujh pe chillane se pehle Khud ki haalat toh dekh lo.
Vikrant then a bit shocked by aditi's this avatar looked around himself and was a little confused by seeing himself in hospital : main yaha kaise?
Aditi : ACP vikrant, Jo ruthless, heartless aur stone hearted banke ghoomta hai, wo aaj hospital mein hai hypertension ki wajah se Jo hua unhe jyada stress ke kaaran. Aur wo Jo Khud ki khayaal Nahi rakh sakta ,wo mujh pe chilla raha hai.
She said a bit angrily.
The doctor and Suresh sir who was watching all this, came forward and said.
Doctor : well, Mr. Singhal, you are all right now. But still your body needs rest and I will prescribe some medicine, make sure you don't skip them .
Aditi : you give that to me doctor, I will make sure he has it.
Doctor : sure. Well I have to agree, your love is very strong. I thought it only exists in films, finding couple like you these days is really very difficult.
Vikrant and aditi were baffled by doctors words.
Suresh sir who somewhere knew it was true, said to doctor
S. Sir: excuse me doctor, I wanna speak something.
Both excusing themselves went out leaving vikrant and aditi alone .
Vikrant : by any means did he say couple.
Aditi: ya, I guess so (to distract now )anyways I will my self take care of your food and medicines now, and no objections.
Vikrant : yes mam,your wish is my command.
Both giggled at this.
Both the hearts were satisfied. And why won't they be, as they were together now.


Guys Pls forgive if it's not good and for all spelling mistakes and capital letters in between.


Its amazing Shrishthi.I really loved it👏My favourite was when the doctor commented on their love.Hope something of like this happens in TV and we are greeted by their baffled looks😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: AMIKA14


Its amazing Shrishthi.I really loved it👏My favourite was when the doctor commented on their love.Hope something of like this happens in TV and we are greeted by their baffled looks😉

Amen
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nahi Shrishti yeh bohot acha tha. And wo doc ne toh humare muh ki baat cheen li. Aisi hi aur bhi os/ss/ff likho hume padhne me maza ayegi

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