AvNeil OS- Second Chances!

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hey I am back with another OS on AvNeil!

Since I am bored on weekends with no episode, I decided to pen something down from Avni's POV of how she learnt and coped with the reason why Neil said those horrible words and broke their relationship in the most heart breaking way.😳

It's a small piece of writing, so please don't throw chappals/boots at me!😆

Its dedicated to all AvNeil fans!❤️

"I am disgusted at the fact that I ever loved you." These words, these heart breaking words kept playing like a broken record in his ears, continuously as he stood there, at the exact spot when she had spat those words right across his face. The night was pitch dark, with only the moon keeping it company. There were no stars and no hopes. And all he ever wanted was Avni back.

He crushed onto the ground not knowing what to do, after how he had hurted Avni. He was still dumbfounded at the fact that, even after so many games he played, she had stayed on. She had bared his every insult, every tantrum and his every freaking blame, as she believed in their love, their relationship. She believed in him and no matter what, she wouldn't dare speak against him, even at his back.

He had heard her entire conversation with her mother, and that's when it struck him, that as much as he had got involved in her and their love, she was in it too. She had trusted him, despite knowing his trust issues, had given him everything knowing his habits and accepted the way he was despite his painful past. She had made his life beautiful. She had filled it with colours and balloons and their love. She had done everything for him, not wanting anything in return. All she ever wanted was my trust and my love.

He remembered that it didn't matter to her that he tested her love, it mattered to her that he let her down. It killed her and pierced her heart like flaming arrows, when she knew she couldn't prove to him even after so many incidents that she loved me.

He entered the room, opening her cupboard, he took her dupatta out. He held it in his hand, it was the same piece, which she had tied to his palm it was bleeding. He had kept it till date. He took it in front of him and cried out his heart out. He collapsed to the ground, with her dupatta near his heart. "I am sorry Avni". These were his last words before he slumped to the floor.

And seeing him like this, I had decided to give him another chance, as I always give people whom I love. I decided to give our Love another Chance. It was another chance for Neil and Avni, and that's why I believe in second chances, she proudly told her 3 year old daughter, Malvika.

Life is all about Second Chances!

The End!

I hope I have lived upto the expectations of AvNeil fans!

Positive criticism welcome!😳

Love,

Mayu

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice shot! Please write more often!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: neeraja91

Nice shot! Please write more often!


Thank you Neeraja😳

Yes, I do intend to write more OS :\

Love,
Mayu
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome one
Loved it
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I couldn't understand the situation .
Do often write more .
Poor Avni .She had raised child as a single parent 💔
Neil😕 Not everyone gets second chance
Edited by AgnesFan - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice one.😃
Do give an elaborate version.It would be awesome
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: AgnesFan

I couldn't understand the situation .

Do often write more .
Poor Avni .She had raised child as a single parent 💔
Neil😕 Not everyone gets second chance


Well, its sort of like a diary attempt. She just narrated the story of how Avni forgave Neil.

Neil was very much a part of Avni and his baby's life!

Love,
Mayu
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: lenageorge

Nice one.😃

Do give an elaborate version.It would be awesome


Thanks Leena~

Instead of continuing this I'll give a new OS :)

Love,
Mayu

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