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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: GoWithTheRhythm

Oh my you surely know how to keep me on tiptoes Tasnim darling😉

Finally we got to see what happened to Gauri in that time after her marriage to Omkara , how she moved on and started a new life.
She still believes that whatever her shankarji has planned for her will be alright and I love the strength she takes from her belief
It's rare these days!
I loved how beautifully you penned down Gauri's struggle, her sadness for not being able to find a better job because she has no degree etc
and how though her Mother was sad with he outcome of her marriage to Om didn't pressure her daughter anymore
Even thinking about getting her married to someone else
I wonder what Gauri thinks about all that

It's nice to know that she made a Friend who supports her, who stands by her. She badly needed one.


But still...NOw I need to now even more WHAT WAS IN THAT FILE OM GOT?
AND SINCE SVETLANA IS ABOUT TO HIRE GAURI CAN WE EXPECT THEIR MEETING?
OMG what will happen next?
Will Om try to make amends, will gauri be the one to be rude this time?
So many questions, my heart sit beating faster just thinking about it

Pls pls plus update soon

Ahahaha..I've learnt this from you experienced writers.. 😉
Gauri has immense trust and faith on her Shankar Ji..and our dabang chiraiyya is definitely not someone to cry over her fate..she's a fighter.. 😳 ❤️
Gauri has started a new life..but did she forget about her past..?? Now that's a question..
Gauri's mother's concern for her daughter's future is justified..now let's see if Gauri is ready to move on from the past..
Gauri's friend will support her in future also..that's what I hope..
Take a deep breathe girl.. 😆
All your questions will be answered..since there's more of Omkara and Gauri as individuals coming up next , I'll just say Rikara's meeting will take some time..But I promise till then many things will be sorted out and many questions will be answered..
Hope you'll like the rest of the story too..
Thank you so much Amel..
I'll update tomorrow In Shaa Allah..
Edited by tasnimrodela - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Chapter 3


She was innocent..Gauri Kumari Sharma was innocent..the woman whom he thought to be a characterless and gold digger was actually a victim..she was trapped by Kali Thakur..she was forced to marry him..she was never at fault and he accused her as a home breaker..

He was feeling disgusted by himself..how could he judge anyone without even knowing the other side of story..?? How could he just accuse a girl of being someone's mistress..?? And when did he turn into a monster to leave a girl in a place where everyone was behind her life..?? When did he become this heartless to not notice the cries of a pure soul..?!

He was shivering..his body went numb and he slammed himself on the floor with his teeth biting his lower lip to suppress the sob..

He always believed in truth..he was the worshipper of truth..but all this while he was living with a lie..he thought Gauri was a vile woman..that was a lie..he thought Gauri only cared about money..that was a lie..he thought Gauri was a wicked person who eventually caused Jhanvi Thakur's death..that was a lie..everything he thought about her was lie..he was so engrossed with his misconceptions that he failed to notice that he was leaving behind the truth..

He was so ashamed of himself that he didn't have the courage to face her..not just her, he didn't have the courage to face anyone..not even his brothers..he always glorified the truth and justice..but isn't he the one who did injustice to a innocent soul..?? He has stooped so low in his own eyes that he cannot even face himself let alone someone else..

Grabbing the file lying beside him he stormed out of his room..he could hear his brothers calling his name..he could hear his daadi panicking..he could hear Svetlana threatening him to destroy everything if he leaves her then and there..but all he couldn't was to face them..and thus he left with the guilt overpowering his every thought...

Shivaay wanted to follow his brother as he didn't want to leave him alone...but then he stopped, thinking that Omkara must be having a hard time to bear out his own decision to marry his father's mistress...but what he didn't know was how his brother was drowning into the pool of guilt..

Svetlana watched him leaving..till the moment she was dreaming of getting married to Omkara and the Roka was the first step towards her dream..but Omkara left slovenly without completing the ceremony..unable to take in the insult of being abandoned she decided to play her cards..she still has Tej Singh Oberoi to play with..and she knows how to use him to get a hold on Omkara..

When he entered the house tired, after the whole night of crying and cursing himself, he found his father dragging his mother with him..she was whining in pain as his father was totally ignorant to the burned wounds of her body..he never liked his father..neither as a father nor as a person..but whatever his so called was doing to his mother made him literally hate his father..he knew he was not a person whom you can say good..but what he didn't know was his father wasn't less than any monster from inside who would never hesitate to kill someone..

He gritted his teeth and marched towards Tej to grab him by his collar...he pushed him away freeing his mother from his hold..he slowly made his mother stand on her own feet and turned to look into his father's eyes..Tej Singh Oberoi swallowed hard realising the man standing before him was no more the calm and composed Omkara everyone knew..he was turned into someone whom anyone would fear to face..trying to hide his fright Tej roared, "Yeh kya badtameezi hain, Omkara..??"

"Badtameezi..??", Omkara laughed dangerously.."Aap mere aisi harkaat ko badtameezi bol rahe hain..really, Mr.Oberoi..?? Do you even realise what you just did to my mom..?? Badtameezi aap kar rahe the meri maa ke saath...how dare you to hurt my mom..??", his eyes were bloodshot..

"I don't care if she's hurt..aur tumhari maa jeeye ya mare mujhe koyi fark nehi padta..mujhe bass iss aurat se chutkara chahiye..usse kaho chup chap divorce papers pe sign karde..", Tej said making Jhanvi gasp..

"Jhanvi kissi bhi kagaz pe sign nehi karegi..", Kalyani Singh Oberoi interfered..

"Dadi, aap kya bol rahi hain..?!" Omkara was shocked..how could she decide anything from his mother's side..?? Can't she see how much painful the relationship of marriage has become for his mother..??

"Omkara, main baat kar rahi hoon..", she shushed him and turning back to Tej she said, "Kya tu bhool gaya ki Oberoi khandan mein talakh nehi hote..??", she questioned him which was more like a reminder..

"Par maa...", Tej tried to speak..

"Mujhe iss bare mein koyi baat nehi karni..maine jo keh diya woh keh diya..aab koyi behes nehi hogi..", she declared..

Omkara wasn't really happy with his dadi's decision..he wanted to talk to her..he wanted to know why she's still supporting the idea of staying in a meaningless relation...he wanted to know why Oberoi family's rules were important to her more than his mother's life..to demand his answers he stood before her..

"Daadi..kyun kar rahi hain aap yeh sab..? Kyun aap mom aur Mr.Oberoi ki divorce hone nehi deti..?? Kya aapko dikh nehi raha mom ko iss rishte se kitni takleef aur beizzati mil rahi hain..??", he asked hurt..

He cannot see his mother suffering and crying over a futile relationship..he wanted his mother to let go the man who gave her nothing but pain and humiliation..

"Main jo kar rahi hoon sab ki bhale ke liye hi kar rahi hoon..", she said patting his arms.."Shaadi ek pavitra bandhan hota hain, Om..ek bar jud jaaye toh saat janmo mein bhi saath nehi chhut ta..aur agar ekbar shaadi ho jaaye toh zindegi bharr usse nibhana bhi padta hain.."

Omkara looked at his dadi gassed..she smiled sensing maybe his grandson couldn't understand what she just said..she caressed his head.."Jab teri shaadi hogi tab tu bhi samjhega ki main yeh sab kyun bol rahi hoon..", she left leaving him alone..

"Gauri..!!", he muttered under his breathe and closed his eyes unable to think of anything other than the woman he married..
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome update loved it so much.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago
AHH!! the truth...finally raaz khul gya...
I love om breaking down after he realises his fault...i'm probably being a sadist but his emotions are top notch during such scenes...😉

Tej is such a monster...

Loved the chapter❤️...

agla waala jaldi dijiyega!!😊
Edited by aayushi1 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Res for now
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Unress

jiska mujhe tha intezar,aaj woh ghadi aa gyi😆😆

finally om knows the truth..yeahhh i'm really happy you know😛

he breakdown after knowing the whole truth😭😭 and now he suffering from guilt..can't even face his family..let him suffer usse bhi toh pata chale kya anmol ratan khoya hai usne😆remember that baba😉

omkara's emotions was beautifuly written behna..loved it

and tej😡😡😡eww i hate him yar...how could he do this his wife

i loved it when he remember gauri while dadi talking to him about marriages

i'm really excited for the next shot😳 update soon han pyari behna😛

Edited by rikara94 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Woow Baby u did it so perfect
I loved the way u penned down om's emotion and inner turmoil and the way he remember Gauri when Daadi told about Marriage was nice
Awesome update
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Posted: 7 years ago
that was beautiful. thank god om found out the truth. Can't wait till he goes to bring gauri back.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Oh tasnim...OH dearest Tasnim
you literally killed me especially the Minute Om fell on his knees realizing what he did to an innocent soul
His guilt causing him to ran away not being able to face his Brother's his Family
His emotions were beautifully portrayed and I could literally feel his pain
It was time for him to know what kind of woman he married( and I liked that he acknowledged it by thinking about being married)

I literally hate Tej and sorry but Dadi's No divorce rule is just 😡 TEJ SHOULD BE THROWN OUT and Jhanvi should divorce him, he should be penniless with Svety

Now that Om knows GAuri is innocent can we expect him to look for her? To maybe Bring her back into his life( I know you said it will take some time and I CANT wait for it to happen :D)

Thank you so much for the update 😳 I really enjoyed it
Edited by GoWithTheRhythm - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Im happy Om has finally know the truth and is now suffering from guilt...but I am now more excited to see what he will do knowing that he loves Gauri and he was wrong all along. ..Let the chasing begin.😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
Yayyy... Omkara knows the truth now...now I love you ... Waiting for him to repent... Let Gauri take her own looonnnggg time for it... I want a tit for tat... Tadapane do Omkaraji ko... I would be waiting to read it😆 Update soonish
Edited by ayushi23 - 7 years ago

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