(MG-FF) HURTFUL HEARTS (RE-POST) THREAD 1

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drrose31

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Posted: 8 years ago

#101

Hey all...

Thank you so much for reading and appreciating my work...

Have replied to all, do check if you wish to... They are from pages 17-19..

Here goes next part to Hurtful Hearts..

PART 5

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Much love Rose 😉

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metromasti

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Posted: 8 years ago

#102

awesome update . geet shifted to avi's room . at first maan thought she was not serious but later realized she was damn serious about this . he even checked mother son dou at night . yash knew about their difference so he planned a honeymoon trip (Paris) for them .
waiting for next

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#103

hi there! thanks 4 da pm!!

excellent update! well written!

Maan is so rude! wow she is affecting him! Maan admires Geet and Avi! Geet's anger justified! so Yash planned HM!

Maaneet shocked!

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nadia khan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#104

Awesome update maan was amazed and shocked how much geet not only accept Avi as her son but was also worried for him so much she scold maan for being bad dad he was adoring the scene where he saw son mom sleeping together but later scold himself for it loved their Tom and Jerry fight so funny geet doesn't call him by his name just husband khurana Yash and Dadi sending maaneet for hm

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Sowmiya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#105

Nice update dear

Liked it!! Well penned.

Maan was stunned to hear Geet's words but alas he didn't believe her utterance until she really was moving out of their room. He didn't want elders to hold him responsible for the outcomes of Geet's decision. He was affected by Geet's presence and her bonding with Avi that he couldn't hold thyself from sneaking into their room but alas he didn't want to acknowledge his feelings. He was feeling restless that he couldn't stay close to Avi like Geet that he enived their bond. Yet again Maan asked his feelings under rude and ignorant deportment. Maan needs to understand his own feelings to accept Avi and Geet in his life. Loved Geet's retort to Maan's comportment. Maan and Geet were shocked with Yash's gift as token of love to them.

Thanks for the pm!

Looking forward to the next update

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IMA9167

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Posted: 8 years ago

#106

Maan was soo rude yaar...

Hm...Will they return not killing eachother

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

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Posted: 8 years ago

#107

toh maan k mann mein thodasa asar hona lage...

lovely update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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jeyanthi123

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Posted: 8 years ago

#108

Awesome update
Loved it
Maan s very rude with geet and geet s sleeping in avi room ... Maan s feeling restlessness and going after avi room and watching both ...
Maan scolded geet ...
Yash presented hm ticket for maaneet ...
Continue soon
Waiting

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Leenu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#109

Geet shifted to avi room she is bonding with him so nicely
Maan was getting affected by her presence she scolded him for being rude to avi
Yash wants to send Maaneet HM they were shocked
Loving it

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drrose31

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Posted: 8 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: metromasti
awesome update . geet shifted to avi's room . at first maan thought she was not serious but later realized she was damn serious about this . he even checked mother son dou at night . yash knew about their difference so he planned a honeymoon trip (Paris) for them .
waiting for next

Thank you dear

yeah...

Hmmm

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